September Dawn was indeed a very good video, and I want to point that out ahead of everything else.
Unfortunately, I have a few nit-picks.
The intro organ bells were a little too strong and crisp, just to the point of an initial corruption of the whole song in my mind.
It did, however, pull out quickly into quite an excellent display of cinematography in harmony with music. And yet midway into the song I feel that there could be a short, passionate story, something to capture the dramatic tones that are presented with the camera work and the melody.
And finally, if the video is viewed as itself once again, I feel that there should be something linear as far as the pictures are concerned. I honestly had trouble understanding what was happening.
Other than that, you have done what most, including myself, could never do. I congratulate you.