thought id make a thread for every member :D you know what to do :)

I'm gonna make the most of this and put one of my songs in here! Tell me what you think...

 

*Constructive criticism welcome*

 

****Forever Tonight*****

 

Oh bright lights, big city,

I'm not saying you don't look pretty, tonight.

In the light, its falling.

A glistening moon on me and you.

As the summers breeze sets in.

 

 

Bridge:

 

The haunting hour, the haunting hours getting long.

The mysterious feeling, a sudden evil in my mind. I'm blind from you.

 

Chorus:

 

Bright eyes, a disguise.

You only feel safe in a room.

Four walls, music on and me and you.

Oh Bright eyes I despise this,

I'll never miss you now.

Farewell to sea and its fair storms - Bright eyes.

 

Oh dim lights, small city.

How have I become reduced to this, tonight?

In the dark, Its daunting.

A sudden fear over me not you.

As the summer starts to to end.

 

 

Bridge:

 

The haunting hour, the haunting hours getting long.

The mysterious feeling, a sudden evil in my mind. I'm blind from you.

 

Chorus:

 

Bright eyes, a disguise.

You only feel safe in a room.

Four walls, music on and me and you.

Oh Bright eyes I despise this,

I'll never miss you now.

Farewell to sea and its fair storms - Bright eyes.

 

Oh Bright eyes, bright eyes.

 

Bright eyes - they've suddenly died.

 

 

Thankyou

 

And Goodnight! xxx :)

awww that was nice!!!:) at least some one posts in here :D thanks :)

Thankyou - well it over rides the rules - it not being a poem and all, but I thought it would be wasted if someone said nothing. :)

hehe well even if its not a peom it was great and whenever u feel like posting something like that again..please feel free :)