Guy'sChick Posted June 6, 2003 Share Posted June 6, 2003 thought id make a thread for every member :D you know what to do :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angela16ne Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 I'm gonna make the most of this and put one of my songs in here! Tell me what you think... *Constructive criticism welcome* ****Forever Tonight***** Oh bright lights, big city, I'm not saying you don't look pretty, tonight. In the light, its falling. A glistening moon on me and you. As the summers breeze sets in. Bridge: The haunting hour, the haunting hours getting long. The mysterious feeling, a sudden evil in my mind. I'm blind from you. Chorus: Bright eyes, a disguise. You only feel safe in a room. Four walls, music on and me and you. Oh Bright eyes I despise this, I'll never miss you now. Farewell to sea and its fair storms - Bright eyes. Oh dim lights, small city. How have I become reduced to this, tonight? In the dark, Its daunting. A sudden fear over me not you. As the summer starts to to end. Bridge: The haunting hour, the haunting hours getting long. The mysterious feeling, a sudden evil in my mind. I'm blind from you. Chorus: Bright eyes, a disguise. You only feel safe in a room. Four walls, music on and me and you. Oh Bright eyes I despise this, I'll never miss you now. Farewell to sea and its fair storms - Bright eyes. Oh Bright eyes, bright eyes. Bright eyes - they've suddenly died. Thankyou And Goodnight! xxx :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guy'sChick Posted June 29, 2003 Author Share Posted June 29, 2003 awww that was nice!!!:) at least some one posts in here :D thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angela16ne Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 Thankyou - well it over rides the rules - it not being a poem and all, but I thought it would be wasted if someone said nothing. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guy'sChick Posted June 29, 2003 Author Share Posted June 29, 2003 hehe well even if its not a peom it was great and whenever u feel like posting something like that again..please feel free :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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