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:o I feel blezzed. everyone on the count of 3 go: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

yes. opinions are worthless. but it is someone's opinion when they say they like a poem as well as when they don't like it. To me it means something. I was going to show you some cliche things that people do. That is not necessarily my opinion since I know for a FACT that people writing poetry do cliche things. And for a FACT, people do not like cliches. It is also my opinion, but it is not solely my opinion that cliches are not as interesting as novel ideas. If you think all criticism is bad then you are wrong. I was not trying to hurt you, your feelings or your poetry. In fact, I was going to try and see if what I said MIGHT help you in your writing. And just because I can help you doesn't mean I think I am the greatest by any means. I am by no means great and I never once remember bragging to anyone about my poetry unless it was a joke. I want everyone in this thread to criticize my poetry. I would actually prefer people to tell me why they do or do not like it than just to say "I don't like it" or "I love it" whatever... The reason I wanted to give you criticism was not to embarrass you unlike you assumed. I wasn't just giving my opinion either, it is a widely shared opinion I wanted to give you. I do not give my opinion solely on anything unless it is helpful. In this case it might have been since I am not the only one who has the opinion I was going to state. I wanted to do what I want other people to do for my poetry. I want people to say why they don't or do like it.

you have a grudge against me?

aw :blush: well sometimes I am nice and sometimes I'm a jerk :uhoh: I don't mean to be a jerk always though

yes :thinking: :freak: you are a :wacko: :D

I'm not sure I know what you mean. But I don't want to fight. Having a discussion is great.

I'm not sure I know what a bananaphone is :thinking:

"googleit" that should be one word. I DECLARE THAT TODAY 01-03-2007 GOOGLIT WILL BE ONE WORD :evil:

BAAAAAAAAAAD JOKE :wacko: we love bad jokes :nice: we are the queenz of bad jokz :nice:

jew are a racist :(

:wacky: yez

:bigcry: people are mean :embarassed:

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:o of course :wink3:

:kiss:

aw :cry: bad jen> :gorgeous: :whip:

there are two huge problems in the US (and all over the world) today. One is obesity and one is anorexia and bulemia. Actually, even though they are opposites they seem to go hand-in-hand. People who may be slightly overweight or not overweight at all think they are fat and see the insults people get who are fat or see that people who are not fat (at least while some boys are still immature) get more attention. People don't want to be overweight, which is good. But there's a proper way to fix that. It's harder, but it's good for your body. If you want to look the BEST. That's the way you'll go about losing weight. If you just want to lose weight and you don't truly care about your body then you need help.

if you don't want it. just say you don't want it. don't be sarcastic about it. I thought I was being nice because I like when people give me criticism. Not because I like to criticize alone. And I never bragged on myself or meant to be bragged on. But I will say thanks to the person who bragged on me, although it offended someone else.

doez that ztand for deathbunnies?

:) super-kewl makes me feel special :tongue: all those people are my friends lolz

:o you almost have 100 :blush:

very true. and I am soooooooooooo lucky :anxious: