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:laugh3: COOL!!! THANK YOU BRYCE THANK YOU why there's only 3 ninjas

a secret you say :rolleyes:

a very good friend who loves The Prestige, and he's alright :)

why are you all offline :uhoh: but you're here?

really it's ok, everybody doesn't have the same thoughts otherwise the world would not be creative and interesting ;) i'm glad that i gave you ideas with what i wrote i'm waiting for the next update let me know when it's ready ;) good night now :hug:

you're welcome Nora :) oui cette sneuceufeu est méchante hahaha oh The Bakery of london if i get a job there i will never come back here, i will be the new member of Coldplay or one of the new Roadie heheh i'm only dreaming :P i'm off to bed now, good night Nora and Guillaume :nice: see you soon ^^

ohhh great :D thanks becuas i was afraid :uhoh: humm this will be the last question for today ( i should go to sleep :P) well for alejandro dark past i'm going to say that... humm :thinking: he probably was a troubled man, in the case that he lost his identity and everysingle information about himself, and that he would find some clues anywhere saying that he was probably an evil person a killer (or something) in the past, so he met agnes maybe to help him find his real identity and then he would fall in love with her i have many ideas bt it really depends on yours :P hope it's comprehensive what i wrote :wacko:

i really should go to sleep as it's 1:22 am and i'm also afraind about tomorrow exams results :uhoh: i hopei passed maths and everything will be ok i don't care of programs result :shifty:

holy crap i'm sure alejandro is loving agnes because of his attitude towards her, the way he looks to her in her eyes as you said and the way he holds her hand :thinking: if it's not the case then i understood nothing of the whole story :uhoh: and i'd better reread it :shame:

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شكرا لك :kiss: لا تقلقي يا صديقة سوف ترينهم يوما ما باذني الله :rolleyes:

you're welcome :) i'm still seeking for a job too, btw good luck in it :undecided: that one in SNCF didn't work :confused: i've got to find something else to do actually i have a post in a bakery but i hate working there ==> reason * personal experience* :thinking:

humm the next updates if i understood well what you wrote in spanish i would say that Agnes will love alejandro in her turn but he won't anymore as it's too late, he had suffer enough with her kinda ignorance, so he will stop loving her this is how i'm seeing your story a romantic story :wacky:

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humm the dialogue is quite long yeah, but it's good and for the language, well i think you have to do both as everybody is reading you in here, you can't do it only in spanish, so english too or simple, do it just in english but honestly i find the spanish one better as it's your mother language you're more confortable with it, but heyyy you're english is excellent too don't worry ;) anyway i like both so spanish or english it doesn't matter for me so see with the others :P

نورا حفلة كلدبلي هي عن قريب، لا اسطيع ان انتظر مزيد من الوقت انا مسرورة جدا ههههه :D

why are you torturing Perrine Ravi :angry: coldplay guys are all handsome :wink3: especially Chris :smug2: and where's the video :\

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it's really good, i like stories like that plus i will improve my spanish with your stories :D so continue please :)

marhaban Gui and thanks for coming here, we really appreciate it merci beaucoup ;) fine and you, what's going on with you :)?

im bored too :sick: there's no Paulo :(

haha i didn't finsh yet but i'm kindza understanding everything hopefully i didn't forget this language :D i continue :)

haha Crest always funny how are you? :)

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