rhyming seems to give me some trouble--

not like crests, who can rhyme on the double.

I never thought that someone would

compliment my speed or say that i could

hello dear Jess how have you been?

Your avatar always makes me grin

i'd like to thank you, crests of daylight-

for complimenting my photo, I'm smiling bright.

 

ive been very well- here on Coldplaying-

sitting and chatting- i'm glad you've been staying.

 

HAHA

hahaha that was so cheesy

rhyming is much more easy

i love coldplaying

and i also am glad you are staying

There's a plague inside the death

I am saddened through and through

It chokes my throat, I’m losing breath

O tears, its time. Where are you?

 

Those gory sights is hurting me

Inability to cry hurts me more

Why do you burn my country?

Answer me, is it worth fighting for?

Are you happy?

you dont seem happy to me.

Yet another bomb in my city

How can I be happy? :cry:

your city has bombs?

what is going on?

what is this city,

full of sadness and pity?

I live in Jakarta. Indonesia

I think it's prone to terrorism

Now I wish I have amnesia

To free me from this dark fantasm

Hopefull we can

make you forget and

maybe even smile

so stay on for a while :hug:

Good or bad - in the life are seasons,

I guess everything happens for a reason.

Thing is it has never affected me much before

And what happened today wasn't the worst

But now I can't even see the news anymore

Emotion overwhelems me, I'm about to burst

Hello arnim its very nice nice

to see that you came more than once or twice :D

Why am I so mellow???

Could it be I'm actually a woman

It would be a bizzare fact I don't want to know

I prolong the last line so my post looks cascading... oh, lemon!

Why am I so mellow???

Could it be I'm actually a woman

It would be a bizzare fact I don't want to know

I prolong the last line so my post looks cascading... oh, lemon!

I'd like to give you a hug

squeeze you like a little bug

but here in canada i must stay

why must you be so far away?

Too much terror, such hate.

Too much error, such fate.

Debating, asking what's up.

My love for you comes up.

My love goes out to Indonesia

One day, you'll be free like Rhodisia.

I'm getting better at rhyming :D

blah blah blah blah timing :P

I'm getting better at rhyming :D

blah blah blah blah timing :P

 

This literally made me cracking up,

I should better stop, but I let it flop.

Surely, my neighbours are waking up.

As a comedian, Crest, you'd be caking much.

Why do my posts self duplicating?

It's getting very, very irritating

And why can't I delete my post yet?

Will this go on till I'm dead?

Why do my posts self duplicating?

It's getting very, very irritating

And why can't I delete my post yet?

Will this go on till I'm dead?

 

(edit:

Oh schmuck, see what I mean?

f**k, I'll just go watch Mr. Bean!)

Why do my posts self duplicating?

It's getting very, very irritating

And why can't I delete my post yet?

Will this go on till I'm dead?

 

I don't know how to get this solved,

but we should think together,

as the whole community is involved.

We'll find a way to make it better.

the site has been double posting lately

and it makes me quite sad

and it keeps going down

which is quite literally making me mad :angry:

The crashing of this site is annoying

And its something Im not enjoying

Instead I'll just lay on my bed

And listen to Radiohead.

I actually have nothing to say

Even so, I'll rhyme anyway