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^ that's cool... needs to be a few more syllables though (its geeky, I know, but otherwise it doesn't fit the music as well) hmm :thinking:

^weird you guys, haha do you think that's different enough? I'll change all the I's to we's.. I think that'll work :nice: So. Look at the moon, look at the stars Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours Look at the sea, look at the sky 'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I Look into the future, look down at the past Feel the way the Earth is spiining us so fast I can't help but taste it now Something I can't figure out Maybe we're wrong Maybe we're right -still needs something here- But its the world we know Its the world we know

When I've put it to music, some of it didn't sound right... here's what I think will work (clearly open to interpretation) :nice: Look at the moon, look at the stars Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours Look at the sea, look at the sky 'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I Look into the future, look down at the past Feel the way the Earth is spiining us so fast I can't help but taste it now Something I can't figure out Maybe I'm wrong Maybe I'm right -needs something here, and I'm not sure what- It's the way I know Its the way I know ^ I originally had 'the world I know' but then I realized that's a Collective Soul song :thinking: :laugh3:

I think I've got a good melody :D I'm excited about this. So. Look at the moon, look at the stars dont you see one day they all will be our ours look at the sea, look at the sky cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I Look into the future, look down at the past Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast I can't help but taste it everywhere I go The heartbeat in the trees, oh I feel it in my bones ..:\ I don't love those next lines.. someone has something better I bet?

^ I don't mean to keep changing things, its just I'm working out a melody :P

Look at the moon, look at the stars dont you see one day they all will be our ours look at the sea, look at the sky cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I Look into the future, look down at the past Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

that's a fantastic cover! :nice: really really well done, I'm impressed. the only thing I wish is that it was more your take, and less Coldplay's (after all, isn't that what's great about covers?) not that it matters - its pretty brilliant (:

'cos baby don't you know they belong to you and I ? (it seemed rather obvious) we can call this the geography song :laugh3:

(: no problem. I hope that's close at least.

:P cheers - next line?

big touch of Yellow ;) look at the moon, look at the stars don't you see one day they all will be ours (?)

I can try and work it out. To be honest, I've got no idea what I'm playing ever. I'm technically not a musician :P I've also got funny tuning on my guitar right now.. its a bit sharp.. but I believe its verse - B E F# B little chorus - Gm F# E B, B E F# B ^ maybe someone can help me out with this? :blush: M. edit: oh, and I'm Maya btw. You can just call me that. or M. :P

I'll fit it in and let you see (: In the meantime.. anyone else have a brilliant song starter? :nice:

your call, as its your dream lyric :laugh3:

It'd be easy enough to add in that line from your dream to the end. There's a bit of musical space there for it to fit. I don't know about a whole new verse though. I'd have to record the whole thing again. I vote new song if its all the same to you :P

I should've added that in. I didn't realize Coldplay had already started writing the song in your dream :P

aw wow, how cool (: cheers have a good sleep

if you could only see the.. light way good chances its a choose your own song ;) edit: i hope someone remembers 'choose your own books' otherwise that made very little sense.

I just realized.. this all started from a dream you'd had? It started from a dream and ended up being called Dreaming Dreams. That's pretty amazing actually :P Do you remember how it went in your dream?

I'm game :cool2: you start?

Might've been the fastest song I've ever recorded in fact. Nice poetry everybody :nice:

Dreaming Dreams If you could just lay with me If only I could sing to you sweet All the things that I could say I will always love you Standing under summer sky Watching all the planes go by And the clouds, they take on shapes While we sit and dream of our escape From this architectured world we live There's something to gain and something to give But in the end we just want to give in Dreaming dreams that we won't live (: bingo edit: oh i was too slow on that one, haha

that was really fun btw :nice: i live in a small ish town, and its all about the emo icescreamo stuff here. :uneasy: i'm always dreaming of finding other people to bounce ideas off of. and i found it here :laugh3: (: so thanks

I (:

the thought of that felt like ice cubes down the stomach :P i think they're a bit busy right now. ...someone bring it to the today show :blush: haha