July 29, 200322 yr aww' date=' thats really GOOD! :cool: You put me right there front and center :) I love "he's like a hallucination to me" cool ;) in fact, there's a lot of memorable lines in it, it'd make an awesome spoken word piece. Bravo! WOOOOOO!! :D[/quote'] :) Thanks for the kind words. I was pretty sure it sucked. :/ [edit: I decided the second one I'd posted was absolutely horrific and made me physically ill :sick2:, especially after taking a good look at the other things posted... so I flushed it. :toilet:]
July 31, 200322 yr Author yeah Ilike the first few lines greg..nice piece... Im having writers block ppl..I think al the painting Ive been doing..have freid my creative brain cells :rolleyes: :cry:
July 31, 200322 yr thank ya Lois :) ....ooh writers block :/ ...yeah painting is mostly beyond my creative capacity, waay too much for me, writing takes up all my energy :rolleyes: :cool:
August 1, 200322 yr Author I wish I could go back Not back a day or two When I couldn’t get over the fact that I had just dyed my blue Not back a few years ago When the acne fest on my cheeks grew more and more Not back in my late childhood When the boy-girl relationship rules started coming…which I deliberately ignored Not back at five or four When I was a little demon child unleashing my wrath every hour I wish I could go back When this new fresh air rushed into my lungs When this new light kissed my cheeks and graced my precious eyes When voices and unidentifiable loved me unconditionally When I was pure… ---------- I wrote this today aftering seeing my 11 th niece Caroline at the hospital today..she sooo beautifull... :blush:
August 1, 200322 yr the lines all you wrote mean how sensitive people are to changes. i think this kind of things make someone peacefull
August 4, 200322 yr I wish I could go back Not back a day or two When I couldn’t get over the fact that I had just dyed my blue Not back a few years ago When the acne fest on my cheeks grew more and more Not back in my late childhood When the boy-girl relationship rules started coming…which I deliberately ignored Not back at five or four When I was a little demon child unleashing my wrath every hour I wish I could go back When this new fresh air rushed into my lungs When this new light kissed my cheeks and graced my precious eyes When voices and unidentifiable loved me unconditionally When I was pure… ---------- I wrote this today aftering seeing my 11 th niece Caroline at the hospital today..she sooo beautifull... :blush: this is lovely lois :) I think there's this part of all of us who wish to go back to being pure, it's human nature, life taints us as we get old.
August 4, 200322 yr I wish I could go back Not back a day or two When I couldn’t get over the fact that I had just dyed my blue Not back a few years ago When the acne fest on my cheeks grew more and more Not back in my late childhood When the boy-girl relationship rules started coming…which I deliberately ignored Not back at five or four When I was a little demon child unleashing my wrath every hour I wish I could go back When this new fresh air rushed into my lungs When this new light kissed my cheeks and graced my precious eyes When voices and unidentifiable loved me unconditionally When I was pure… ---------- I wrote this today aftering seeing my 11 th niece Caroline at the hospital today..she sooo beautifull... :blush: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW beautiful lois how ya been hun?? missed ya :wink3:
August 15, 200322 yr i love you 1 week i love you 2 months i love you 3 years i love you 4 eva :rolleyes:
August 16, 200322 yr Travelling Away Rest not easy soul It's trying to stay true enough But you my dear I'll tell you true enough I'm true as i can be But for thisd soul is Strumbling down drunken roads And now i find myself Mistaken for someone else I find i'm taken for someone else We will walk through the ice and cold Drunken defeat we await These days, they continue But we can ride up until today Drunk, drunk and hungry Two by two, we walked off this land My soul now heavy upon thee But swear I must not And take i shall For one is heavy on burden Life is short, but sweet Or so they say We climb on, we stroll one But all these days, they take their toll And we shall rest here Shut up, I'm thinking That's my blood there It's poured from the hands of angels Pouring down the streets at night And i'm lost without it But if i had it, if i had it all You know i'd fuck it up For i'm poor at this excuse And i can't even go free And now my screams they come whispering out I feel no-one can even see Like a ghost i can't see myself, sometimes And when you see the lord and devil dancing Hand in hand, you know it's over now And i'm ready to go I'm ready, i'm ready The light is near, the end is close And now you remain, i'll go Bury you, and drink the water For soon i go I look down, i look down The mirror behind you, it shows the sadness Stepped out and it's empty You're sat there just waiting Drinking your sorrows away I'm gone, the body is empty I am driving away, away from here It felt good to go, it felt oh so good As the tears stroll on you I felt a sigh, and now it's blank
August 16, 200322 yr i love you 1 week i love you 2 months i love you 3 years i love you 4 eva :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :idea2: forget homer!...this is what i call poetry
August 16, 200322 yr If you come as softly as the wind within the trees. You may hear what I hear, See what sorrows sees. If you come as lightly as threading dew, I will take you gladly, nor ask more of you.
August 16, 200322 yr Travelling Away Rest not easy soul It's trying to stay true enough But you my dear I'll tell you true enough I'm true as i can be But for thisd soul is Strumbling down drunken roads And now i find myself Mistaken for someone else I find i'm taken for someone else We will walk through the ice and cold Drunken defeat we await These days, they continue But we can ride up until today Drunk, drunk and hungry Two by two, we walked off this land My soul now heavy upon thee But swear I must not And take i shall For one is heavy on burden Life is short, but sweet Or so they say We climb on, we stroll one But all these days, they take their toll And we shall rest here Shut up, I'm thinking That's my blood there It's poured from the hands of angels Pouring down the streets at night And i'm lost without it But if i had it, if i had it all You know i'd fuck it up For i'm poor at this excuse And i can't even go free And now my screams they come whispering out I feel no-one can even see Like a ghost i can't see myself, sometimes And when you see the lord and devil dancing Hand in hand, you know it's over now And i'm ready to go I'm ready, i'm ready The light is near, the end is close And now you remain, i'll go Bury you, and drink the water For soon i go I look down, i look down The mirror behind you, it shows the sadness Stepped out and it's empty You're sat there just waiting Drinking your sorrows away I'm gone, the body is empty I am driving away, away from here It felt good to go, it felt oh so good As the tears stroll on you I felt a sigh, and now it's blank :o Holy Dave Matthews allusions! :D
August 16, 200322 yr yaaaay! finally someone reckognised. yeah i "borrowed" some lyrics, added my own stuff, mixed it up
August 16, 200322 yr i love you 1 week i love you 2 months i love you 3 years i love you 4 eva :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :idea2: forget homer!...this is what i call poetry i havent seen you do any so far so speak for ya self scheizhund
August 17, 200322 yr i love you 1 week i love you 2 months i love you 3 years i love you 4 eva :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :idea2: forget homer!...this is what i call poetry i havent seen you do any so far so speak for ya self scheizhund "WUFF WUFF"
September 28, 201015 yr sooki Snoop there is a bigger thread than this one in the entertainment & Arts section...:wacko: http://www.coldplaying.com/forum/showthread.php?t=20149&highlight=poets
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