poetry shamoetry

man it rhymes :D

yay for you lol :lol:

:D

Rain On Me

 

Look at the loverly flowers standing

And i turn around to tell her so

But she was gone, she was gone

I didn't even get her name

 

I thought god, she was so fine

God thought of your face

And your voice in my ears

Oh look at the lovely flowers standing there

 

I can't remember where i was going

I can't remember if i was leading

Or what lead me to you

And rages up through my hand

The love of you

The way you cackled at me

 

But rain on me

Always i love

Dance away with me

And hands that pour from angels

The tears that fall from angels

And rain on my dreams

Rain again and again and again

 

I beg, but see me please

Oh find me again

I sit here, drinking coffee

Or water, depending the time of day

But your with me like a ghost of a mother

Like the pain of a father

 

I wish I could call you

But I know not

So rain on me

Rain in my dreams

I would reckognise you in a second

Yes, I only saw you for a minute

Hold my hand well, Hold my hand wet

 

Rain in my head,

I'm lost now, lost now

Can't remember who I used to be

Wait here by the memroy of a love

That never got born

But I know

 

You rain on me

Rain in my head

Do I even cross your mind?

With more than just the laughing?

With more than just laughing?

Did you think as you walked away?

 

Well you rain in my mind,

I hope you did, i hope you did, i hope you did

I was leading, Or was I lead?

You would have been feeling the same as I am

Hope you did, I hope you did, I hope you did

But now rain in my dreams

Again and again and again

That was really nice Majson :cry: :)

hey greg u came back

:D

hey greg u came back

 

hey :) Yep, and Pappa's got a brand new bling :shock: :lol:

:lol: :shock:

faces cracked like an egg

and running, yolk of sun

fries the white ground, the toast

of earth is done

and the sugar clouds dissolve

in the tea stained sky.

:shock:

:P

very nice

a little spur of the moment morning poem :)

 

now, a night one...uuuuh....

 

I sleep

in a hammock on the moon,

tied to the flags sunk in a crater.

The stars are runway lights

and Venus is a plane tonight.

I watch

as the planets land one by one.

bless you Greg :)

aww shrimpadimp, i dedicate that one to you ;)

me??? :oops:

 

bless you Gregaroom :P

heh i'll have to write a SBMGH one :P

Jail Cell

 

Scraped bloody nails through a wall

To get away

And everyone thinks they have problems

And so do I

I cant hide my weakness

Im too scared to go back

Too scared to move forward

So I'll always be here waiting for someone to knock me over

Lock me up

 

I cant move without you

That scares me

heh i'll have to write a SBMGH one :P

 

awwwwwww bless :oops:

Jail Cell

 

Scraped bloody nails through a wall

To get away

And everyone thinks they have problems

And so do I

I cant hide my weakness

Im too scared to go back

Too scared to move forward

So I'll always be here waiting for someone to knock me over

Lock me up

 

I cant move without you

That scares me

 

REILY!! :shock:

 

I sooo relate to what you said..and l know** bout what you mean in your life!! its a lovely poem..but ...so sad also!

Thank you! Its actually a song :roll: "I cant move without you" is the chorus and "That scares me" is the outro part :shrug:

Oh- and it was written in about 2 minutes, guess it kinda came rolling out.

me likes it!! :D

new blling bling..ahaha...word up Greg...word..

:D

As I walk along the shoreline

I let you grace my feet with your warm bubbling

I want to plunge myself into your goodness

But I’m afraid I might get too deep

I’m afraid that there may be jagged rocks waiting for me below

Waiting to spear my heart

To tear my spirit into shreds

Because you know you can

You know that I cannot resist the soothing breaking of your waves

Your relaxing rhythmic currents

Your hypnotizing colours

Your secret gardens beneath your deceiving surface

I plunge right in

I don’t stop to think

I don’t stop to test the waters

To study the currents

To check the tides

I leap in

I break through the warm ripples

My face

The sensations

Takes my soul away

Happiness…a temporary pause

Your game steps in

I feel your icy grip pull me down further and hold me there til all life has left me…..

oooh :shock: love the ending of that one lois