Where the spaces are the chorus will go please be honest and tell if the song is good or not

 

Verses:

 

If your lost and feel alone

If your down and feeling low

There's a love that's there to hold

To help you not feel alone

 

And the way you seem to go

Feels as if it were wrong

Along with things that lose control

You also seem to go

 

If your lost and feeling scared

If it feels like no ones there

There's someone to hold your hand

To take away what has you scared

i quite like it... but i need to read the chorus as well. ;)

Where the spaces are the chorus will go please be honest and tell if the song is good or not

 

Verses:

 

If your lost and feel alone

If your down and feeling low

There's a love that's there to hold

To help you not feel alone

 

And the way you seem to go

Feels as if it were wrong

Along with things that lose control

You also seem to go

 

If your lost and feeling scared

If it feels like no ones there

There's someone to hold your hand

To take away what has you scared

 

 

Really nice, I like it. Have you been inspired by For You?

 

You surely started to write some beginnings of chorus. Could you post them?