"Predictions" PLEASE PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

[soufpawbandit28]

This is my very first song I've ever finished! Here are the lyrics...

 

The only God that you know

Is starting to let go

And you just don't know

How

 

Colors Flourish

On a black canvas

You understand

Now

 

So many

So many predictions

You live your life in

Fear

 

You start to think

Your asking questions

Why am I

Here?

 

When the world moves too fast

You miss everything

All of the colors and

Everything

Always looking back

Never ahead

Stuck in a trance

Please, get me out of this

 

And in the end

I end up alone

I'm in the darkest place

That I've ever known

 

Then the world moves too fast

And you miss everything

All of the colors and

Everything

Always looking back

Never ahead

Stuck in a trance

Please, get me out of this

 

I'm stuck in a trance

Please, get me out of this...

 

 

 

 

Thanks for reading!

[Julie]

It sounds nice:nice:

 

you should do a recording of it.

[Tnspieler1012]

It's sort of meaningless if not set in the context of a song.

[soufpawbandit28]

It's sort of meaningless if not set in the context of a song.

 

i can understand that but i just dont have a video camera or any equipment to create a recording with and this is the only way to have any kind of feedback

[MrMagpie]

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[Pseudonym]

Great great songwriting! I love it. It is so dark and so true and I can tell you really put yourself out there.

 

I know it can be hard to appreciate it without music, so just look at it as a poem for now. It is really good.:)