[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ki-YrhK-PSY]Bittersweet Demo (Original Song by Point Zero) - YouTube[/ame]

 

Recorded with a rockband mic.

Tell me what you think.

Me and my bandmate Tim.

Nice feel to it :)

 

The electric guitar doesn't mesh very well though and sounds awkwardly improvised, I'd revise and rehearse it.

 

Excellent vocals and the acoustic guitar rhythm sounds fantastic. It would do alright with some percussion and bass. Would you be interested in creating a more professional demo? I can help out.

Nice feel to it :)

 

The electric guitar doesn't mesh very well though and sounds awkwardly improvised, I'd revise and rehearse it.

 

Excellent vocals and the acoustic guitar rhythm sounds fantastic. It would do alright with some percussion and bass. Would you be interested in creating a more professional demo? I can help out.

 

The lead guitar was awkwardly improvised :P This was a live recording so, we just took it and put it up. And yes, it does have a nice feel to it. And a more professional demo? We would like that.

Write a lead line, and finalise it. Rehearse rehearse rehearse. When you're ready, record each instrument seperately with a click track in your headphones (don't let the click come up in the recording!) and send it to me. :)

This song has great potential. Just add a rhythm section (bass and drums) and record each instrument separately like splinercell37 said and you could have something really special. That way you can turn up the vocals or guitars separately and create a nice mix. Also, work out a lead guitar line rather than improvising to make the song sound more polished.

 

When you've done the work on it make sure you post it back here. I'd really like to see it. :)

This is really good. I really like the acoustic guitar part. I think it would sound nice with a simple bass line (like GUy's in UATW) but that's just me. It's your song. Good job!