The Quiet Riot(Original song)

So im not the best lyrical writer, i would very much appreciate it if anybody could give me feedback about these lyrics im posting. I started writing this when Occupy <City names here> started. Have not finished it yet though.

When you look out

At the buildings of white

What do you see?

I see chaos

swirling down

to the ground

This is where we are

How did we get so/this far?

I'm tired of the riots

Cant they go quiet in the night?

Or disappear without a trace

But that won't happen

at this pace

The Quiet Riot

Spread the word

Of the bird

Up in the clouds

that's where i want to be

So thats what i have so far. Kind of a rough draft, not as good as my other work. Give me your imput and suggustions please!