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I have 9 songs, but they don't feel deep enough for me. So I started again a few hours ago. Goal is to write 5 good songs. The one above is one. Could you tell me what you think of this one here. I just finished it, it was heavily influenced by The Fray's You Found Me. And may need input. Bridges All my days were turned dark Lost without finding the spark All the bridges I've crossed Were burned down to the ground Without a way of getting across Now I'm lost, now I'm lost Where have all the bridges gone? They used to stretch forever long Where has all the hope gone They were standing strong They were standing strong Where have all the bridges gone? They gave me hope when right went wrong The fire rose and burnt all my clothes Then the rain came and I froze When will this end? Can I send you a letter explaining how I became a fiend In the pouring rain It came and cleaned all my thoughts While I stood and fought the demons inside of me In the city that never rests There you were sitting on a bridge weeping While everybody else was sleeping You thought about leaping And all you loved seeped through your heart The thought of it tore you apart What can I do What can I do to help you re start Where have all the bridges gone? They used to stretch forever long Where has all the hope gone They were standing strong They were standing strong Where have all the bridges gone? They gave me hope when right went wrong Post your songs too, we can share opinions. :)

Haha that's great. Because your song inspired me to write this.

Thanks! I added a few lines since I posted it, Thanks for taking the time to post. Thank you for the advice it helps a lot. :D

Holy f*ck...I'm listening to 1D...how did that happen...lol. I guess Coldplay changing styles really opened up my head to all other types of music. :laugh3: Can listen to anything now. :rolleyes:

So here's a song I was inspired to write after listening to The Only Exception by Paramore, Coldplay's early music and 76543's song. Still working on the lyrics. You are the one and only exception When I see you You can see my reflection My heartache has an infection And the only release from it is you You are the one and only To keep me from feeling lonely You are the one and only The one and only You are the one for me You are the one to set me free You are the wind, howling under my skin And without you, I would be in a spin You are the one and only To keep me from feeling lonely You are the one and only The one and only ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh You are the one and only To keep me from feeling lonely You are the one and only The one and only Feedback is appreciated on how to make this better. Thanks :)

Hey can you give me some feedback on this song I just wrote, I'll post it in a bit. Your song inspired me to write something personal.

Yes The Fray

Good Time- Owl City ft. Carly Jespen Fireflies- Owl City Northern Wind- City and Colour She will be loved- Maroon 5 The Man Who Can't Be Moved- The Script

Why?^ ummm....I'm ambidextrous. Lol.

Magnets is one hell of a good song. But I can't find their album on itunes, all that comes up is an ep, I wanted to buy a song.

Does anybody know how to play the chorus bit on guitar for A Message? Without a capo.

Tracie, if I help by writing something for somebody to revise and record would you use it?

The same happened with my mom. One day she came home and screamed enough Coldplay! strangely enough, since then she has accepted the fact that we like them. I think it's normal for others to think this about Coldplayers.

That life is to short to not be lived to the fullest.

Broken Angel(Acoustic live @ MTV EMAs Belfast 2011)- Boyce Avenue

Every Breath- Boyce Avenue

Moving To Mars Just pure beauty. I aspire to write a song like this one day...

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We're human, it happens, I'm sure you will find your love for them once again. :)

Why don't we write something all together?

Kinda like with a colorful butterfly on them?

Oh ok, I'm sorry i didn't know. It's Paradise

^ You resigned?! from Words. boo-boo-boo-boo-boo-boo-boommmmmm-boo-boo-boo-boo-boo-boo-boooooommmmmm-boo-boo-boo-boo-boo-boo- booooooommmmmmmmmmmmm. Guess what song. :D

It's just the original with us lip syncing it but without saying anything.

Thiiiiiiis! :nod: We can wear bright colored shirts and stuff. And if you have a tour shirt you can wear it. :P