Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Ah Jimjam I'm working on the middle verse but this is what I've got so far..make any improvements to the lyrics if you want to.... and you'll notice that i took your advice on a 5 line verse exempt the 3rd which needs to be longer cos to me its the climax to the emotions building up inside of me... the 3rd verse is like letting it all out :lol: LUCK IS NEVER ON MY SIDE Chorus: Luck is never on my side Nowhere to run to Nowhere to hide What’s there to live for? Just show me the door Cos luck is never on my side Verse 1: Fighting the battle everyday Why don’t I just let her Slip away (slip away…. <echo) Why am I afraid? Why do I hide? Cos luck is never on my side Verse 2: Those green eyes that sparkling smile Oh only if I could hold you For a little while Then everything would be fine You would be mine But luck is never on my side Verse 3: When I wake up and you’re not there I feel so empty I feel So bare (so bare…. <echo) The touch of your hands warm me But still I run And still I hide Cos luck is never on my side And I ask myself why do I hide And I tell myself I’m running from the things I despise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimjam Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 :o for you...that's alright, bit of a dodgy 2nd verse haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 is it good then or not? or won't it cut it for your highly anticipated solo album? :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frogbuttgirlie Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 oh my fuck now your both at it help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimjam Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 :lol: hey rich, you see that "ignor key" just click it and she goes away...like magic :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 So can my song cut it? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frogbuttgirlie Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 oh my god i'm so offended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimjam Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 of corse it cut it, it's not a bad track, and i think i know what it's about :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 but aimee I haven't pressed the ignore key yet :) see i'm not that spiteful :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 of corse it cut it' date=' it's not a bad track, and i think i know what it's about :P[/quote'] So once I've typed up the 2nd verse will you get some chords together, record it and give me a demo? even better can I come to the studio when you record it? :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frogbuttgirlie Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 *mimmicks aimee* and why is that funny? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 What was the point of this topic? To show your incredibly bland lyrics, without even any music to go with it? This is not your "SONG" for the album, its your lyrics for a song for the album. Theres no point to these topics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimjam Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 nah you can't, cuz i'll be recording it in newcastle, but i'll send you a demo, i'm sending all sorts of wierd shizz lately, i sent a txt to my entire phone last night , 3-inter linked ones to each, cost 12 quid roughly, bastards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 What was the point of this topic? To show your incredibly bland lyrics, without even any music to go with it? This is not your "SONG" for the album, its your lyrics for a song for the album. Theres no point to these topics! well jay wanted me to post them in a thread so piss off *points to the door* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Why dont you two just PM eachother? Nobody cares. Do you do everything Jay asks of you? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 Shut up :angry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Hahahaha man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 I'm going to press the ignore button on you..... :angry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nellie Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 'shut up shut up shut up, just shut shut up' sorry, you got the black eyed peas in my head now! :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 black eyed peas? mindless lyrics.... at least mine have some meaning :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimjam Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 :lol: @ reilly: yeah he's pretty much like a lap dog- watch and see.. HEY RICH!!, SHOOT YOURSELF... i bet he does **fingers crossed** :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reilly Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Pressing the ignore button is like admitting you're weak. You shouldn't have JIIIIVED me ceckers, now you're getting all pissy too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceckers Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 Ah I'll just pretend you're not here then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimjam Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 haha, never grief reilly, he's on top of his game, and i'd rather not be griefed by him, he's too good at it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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