Ah Jimjam I'm working on the middle verse but this is what I've got so far..make any improvements to the lyrics if you want to.... and you'll notice that i took your advice on a 5 line verse exempt the 3rd which needs to be longer cos to me its the climax to the emotions building up inside of me... the 3rd verse is like letting it all out :lol:

 

LUCK IS NEVER ON MY SIDE

 

Chorus:

 

Luck is never on my side

Nowhere to run to

Nowhere to hide

What’s there to live for?

Just show me the door

Cos luck is never on my side

 

Verse 1:

 

Fighting the battle everyday

Why don’t I just let her

Slip away (slip away…. <echo)

Why am I afraid?

Why do I hide?

Cos luck is never on my side

 

 

Verse 2:

 

Those green eyes that sparkling smile

Oh only if I could hold you

For a little while

Then everything would be fine

You would be mine

But luck is never on my side

 

 

Verse 3:

 

When I wake up and you’re not there

I feel so empty I feel

So bare (so bare…. <echo)

The touch of your hands warm me

But still I run

And still I hide

Cos luck is never on my side

And I ask myself why do I hide

And I tell myself I’m running from the things I despise

:o for you...that's alright, bit of a dodgy 2nd verse haha

is it good then or not? or won't it cut it for your highly anticipated solo album? :lol:

oh my fuck now your both at it

help

:lol: hey rich, you see that "ignor key" just click it and she goes away...like magic :P

So can my song cut it? :P

oh my god i'm so offended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

of corse it cut it, it's not a bad track, and i think i know what it's about :P

but aimee I haven't pressed the ignore key yet :) see i'm not that spiteful :P

of corse it cut it' date=' it's not a bad track, and i think i know what it's about :P[/quote']

 

So once I've typed up the 2nd verse will you get some chords together, record it and give me a demo? even better can I come to the studio when you record it? :cool:

:lol:

*mimmicks aimee* and why is that funny?

What was the point of this topic?

 

To show your incredibly bland lyrics, without even any music to go with it?

 

This is not your "SONG" for the album, its your lyrics for a song for the album. Theres no point to these topics!

nah you can't, cuz i'll be recording it in newcastle, but i'll send you a demo, i'm sending all sorts of wierd shizz lately, i sent a txt to my entire phone last night , 3-inter linked ones to each, cost 12 quid roughly, bastards :D

What was the point of this topic?

 

To show your incredibly bland lyrics, without even any music to go with it?

 

This is not your "SONG" for the album, its your lyrics for a song for the album. Theres no point to these topics!

 

well jay wanted me to post them in a thread so piss off *points to the door*

Why dont you two just PM eachother? Nobody cares.

 

Do you do everything Jay asks of you? ;)

Shut up :angry:

Hahahaha man.

I'm going to press the ignore button on you..... :angry:

'shut up shut up shut up, just shut shut up' sorry, you got the black eyed peas in my head now! :rolleyes:

black eyed peas? mindless lyrics.... at least mine have some meaning :P

:lol:

 

@ reilly: yeah he's pretty much like a lap dog- watch and see..

 

HEY RICH!!, SHOOT YOURSELF...

 

i bet he does **fingers crossed** :lol:

Pressing the ignore button is like admitting you're weak.

 

You shouldn't have JIIIIVED me ceckers, now you're getting all pissy too.

Ah I'll just pretend you're not here then...

haha, never grief reilly, he's on top of his game, and i'd rather not be griefed by him, he's too good at it :P