The only bad part is that it has to be critiqued and I know it's not very good.

 

BUT EXPLOSIONS MAKE UP FOR EVERYTHING. :blank:

Everytime someone writes in capitals, I read it in Tammi's voice.

 

And I don't even know what Tammi sounds like.

I don't know.

 

We need to give Anthony a nickname.

I don't know.

 

We need to give Anthony a nickname.

Ant.

 

:|

 

Or calcetines~

And I don't even know what Tammi sounds like.

 

but i sang you that amazing song about your face

OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo

A nickname! :mellow:

but i sang you that amazing song about your face

 

hahaha yeah :wacky:

I have a face. :')

 

OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo

A nickname! :mellow:

 

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo

BRB DOING THE DISHES LOL

LOL TXT IT

I'M WRITING ANOTHER SONG FOR VALENTINE'S DAY!!! :blank:

I'm not.

 

:|

 

 

heh sounds fun

COOL!

 

OUR CAT JUST MEOWED AND YAWNED AT THE SAME TIME IT WAS COOL

Oh snapp son! These are some of the lyrics! :D

I'm writing the song about a girl who stares at me in class. (Sound familiar :dozey:) So on Valentine's Day, I buy her chocolates and flowers but she has a boyfriend who beats me up. But anyways here is my favorite set of lyrics so far:

 

But I'm still on the ground,

Saying "I want to do it all.

I just want to be so much,

Cause for you is how I fall."

You're lyrics are so cheesy...but yet insanely good. :thinking:

:wacky:

 

HAHA CRESTS THATS SO CUTE

I know it was a total joke but it turned out to be really relevant to my situation! :P

You're lyrics are so cheesy...but yet insanely good.

 

This, minus the wrong form of your. :P

 

And hahahaha!

:rolleyes:

grammar fail </3

The rest of the CHEESEBALL lyrics:

 

 

From across the room,

She notices you.

Since today is the day,

Your dreams may come true.

 

So stand up,

And decide what you want.

Do you want to be alone,

Or do you want a hug?

 

So I bought a box of chocolates,

And a fake flower too.

I wrote a letter saying,

"Dear girl, I really like you."

 

Turns out she has a boyfriend,

And he's 6 foot 4.

So he took my face,

And slammed it into a door.

 

But I'm still on the ground,

Saying "I want to do it all.

I just want to be so much,

Cause for you is how I fall."

So he took my face,

And slammed it into a door.

 

xD

I have a Yellowcard song stuck in my head. :|

:blush:

I am so amazing at studying. :|

Yes those lyrics are a metaphor about wanting to be in a relationship with a girl so much that every bad thing that happens feels really terrible like being slammed into a door. :thumbsup: