for those of you who have not read the book and are planning to, do NOT read this thread! even though it's incredibly hard to explain the ending... :/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but for the people who did, can you give me a few ideas? i'm writing a different ending to the book and can't figure out what to change around without everything seeming logical. it still needs to kind of tie in to the rest of the book.

 

any ideas?

isnt it where black rides off on the hippogriff?

ha that would be insanely hard to make a new ending for one an excellent book like that

but try and see if you can have another character use the time-machine-ma-bob

whatever its called

or if something happens at hagrid's trial

or if lupin (my favorite character in those series) or anyone else for that matter turns bad

idk i suck with thinking of new stuff but im sure you'll get it!

haha thanks. hmm...lupin could be evil.... but he hasn't entered ths shack yet...

 

this is what i have so far.

 

“Watch out!” shouted Ron as Sirius Black had just come out from behind the door. Hermione and Harry raised their wands instantly. And together shouted Expelliarums! Black’s wand, which actually belonged to Ron flew out of his hands and into a corner while Black himself stumbled backwards. Hatred was boiling through Harry. The man standing in front of him had killed his parents. Should he make him pay for it himself, or hand him over to the Dementors so the kiss could be performed on him?

He does deserve it thought Harry as he ran the thought over in his mind. Harry had said it himself. His thoughts wandered back to his conversation with Professor Lupin.

“They call it the Dementors’ Kiss. It’s what Dementors do to those they wish to destroy utterly. They clamp their jaws upon the mouth of the victim and suck out his soul.” Living without a soul thought Harry. Or would it be better for him to die? One of those fates would come upon him and Harry knew it. While thinking this over Harry did not move his eyes from where Sirius stood, obviously also thinking about how to get out of everything alive.

Harry finally decided. He wouldn’t kill Black himself. He would have to knock him out and take him to the Dementors. He looked at Hermione and then to Ron who had retrieved his wand.

hahah thats cool! why do you have to write another ending for it?

 

the third book was the best! i loved it!!!

my book report....we need to do something creative

oooh i see. thats cool!

no way

the books get better as they go

except for 1 and 2! i

hate those ones

:lol: yeah i know. the last 3 are for sure my favourites. but i do love them all.

 

gah i need to add something to it! it's due friday!

 

yeah i know, i'm one of those last minute thing. but i actually did start something else but didn't like so i needed to ask her if i could do this instead. :/ i wanted to do this because i enjoy writing. as long as it's about something i am interested in.

noo man. i hated the fifth one! it was such a pisser!!! the forth was good. but the third one! THAt was so great! i loved it!

no the 5th one was good! harry was being a bit of an asshole though wasn't he? lol. i never get tired of reading them...seriously!

 

i've read the first one 9 times

2nd on 8 times

3rd one 9 times

4th one 6 times on 7th

and the 5th one once :D

 

 

and i'm still not tired of reading them.

 

i'm thinking of keeping part of the book the same like when lupin comes down....or maybe lupin can come down with a dementor....

well he was just mad at voldemort

i dont know what for he's just bummin it

everyone's a hater

man, i really didn't like the fifth one. he died in the stupidest way possible! i thought it would be better than it really was.....arrg. too many pages too.

he's not dead is he?

he seriously cant die

theres still 2 more books

lol. yeah i thought he would die in some sort of heroic way. but no...

but i still thought it was a good book.

 

i can't wait till the third movie comes out. it should be really good.

 

hmm....i'm thinking of cutting the ending that i have in what i posted before out... and have this:

 

“What are you going to do? Kill me?” teased Black.

 

“Don’t push me!” Harry screamed back at him. But Harry couldn’t kill him. He wasn’t that cruel. He didn’t have the guts to.

 

hmm.....what to add....

sirius? yea. ithought he was dead..but i also think hes going to come back in the other books. he's one of the greatest characters!!!

ohhh

sirriiuss

i thought we were talking about he who must not be named

nvm nvm

hmm....you never know...

but twin4life thats good

you should add that bit to your story

and then be like 'harry heard a movement from behind him.. or was it?' haha idk

he who must not be named! ahaha

haha. want to add volde- opps. he who must not be named i mean :D , to the story? yeah because he isn't in the 3rd book...

 

here, newly added:

 

Harry still had his wand raised. He had heard movement behind him. A shiver was sent down his spine. He heard something moving. Should he take his eyes off Black? One wrong move could lead to his death. Hermione had obviously taken her eyes off Black and was making squeaking noises and mouthing words that Harry could not understand. She was pointing to something behind him.

 

Harry tore his eyes away from Black and looked behind him. A giant serpent with huge fangs was coiled around the room! Harry jumped as though an electric shock has been sent through him. He stared up at it. How come he didn’t notice it before? How long has it been there for? Harry knew one thing. He had to kill it.

 

“Master!” whispered Black fiercely. “Leave! I can handle this on my own! You are too weak at the moment! Please! You must save your strength!”

 

“No,” it hissed. “ I will finish him off myself. I have waited long enough. I will not wait any longer!”

 

With that, the snake lunged at Harry.

 

 

yeah i need to do some other homework or else i'll get in trouble.

haha

thats good i like it

add something about his scar on fire or something

hmm...i'm thinking of taking the last bit out..... :/

i'm thinking of making snape come in and not voldemort. because then with voldemort i have to come up with this whole idea of how harry defeats or escapes him.

*bump*

 

anyone got ideas?

right now i have taken voldemort out and replaced him with snape. lupin has just come in and disarmed snape. aaaaaaaaand i am still writing.

introduce a new character named eric (me)

he could be stunningly handsome and charming

haha

no

but maybe think of someone new or would that be too much of a change?

yeah i want to do that...how about a handsome character named eric comes down the tunnel? he could be stunningly handsome and charming. :D

hmm.... okay... give me a second to write this. :D