okay this is what i wrote today and the last bit is with your idea.

 

Harry tore his eyes away from Black and looked behind him. Snape was standing there with his wand pointing directly at Harry. Harry jumped backwards as the wand was now pointing at his face.

 

He was in on it! It was him who was helping Black into the castle and trying to get Harry killed. They had been right! Dumbledore thought that Snape had come back to our side! But he had really been passing information to Voldemort.

 

“P-professor Snape” Hermione squeaked. “W-what are you doing?” Her face white and shaking. “You’re here to h-help us right?” she asked in a terrified voice.

 

He gave her a sharp look. Of course he wasn’t there to help them. Black had taken the second that Harry took his eyes off him and ran to Snape’s side. A look a triumph was on Snape’s face. He would be the one to kill the famous Harry Potter. Harry wiped some sweat and blood off his forehead as it was now beginning to drip into his eyes. Snape began to laugh. Was it because he would finally be able to do what he had wanted to do ever since Harry had set foot inside the school? His laughing stopped suddenly when a noise was heard above them.

 

“We’re down here!” screamed Ron hoping that someone would hear them and maybe save them. Footsteps could be heard. Black was watching the door but Snape was still watching Harry. Professor Lupin and a stunningly handsome boy no older than Harry came through the door wand raised and ready.

 

“Expelliarums!” he shouted. Snape’s wand flew out of his hands and Lupin caught it.

 

“You fool!” Black shouted at Snape. “You should have taken your eyes off the boy!”

 

“Quiet!” Snape whispered urgently obviously angry with himself for not being prepared.

 

“Expelliarums!” Lupin shouted again and Harry’s, Ron’s, and Hermione’s wands shot into his hands. “There,” he said calmly observing the situation in which he had thrown himself into. With his wand raised he began. “Now Harry, please tell me what has happened with no interruptions from Mr. Weasly or Ms. Granger.

 

“Well-” Harry had begun but Hermione had interrupted him.

 

“Professor Lupin who is this boy?” she demanded.

 

“Oh I’m sorry for my bad manners. This is Eric. He has come here from a different wizarding school. He has just transferred to Hogwarts and will be staying here for the rest of the year.”

 

“But why is he here?”

 

“Please Ms. Granger no more interruptions. And,” he said with a menacing look towards Sirius and Snape who were staring at Eric, “You two please do not interrupt either.”

Sirius had a look of confusion on his face. Voldemort on the other hand, had a look of horror upon his face. Voldemort scared of a boy? Why?

haha

I LOVE IT!

the different wizarding school was a good idea

and the cliffhanger of why voldemort is scared of eric...

good stuff you should be a writer

haha why thank you.

 

muahahahaha. you shall be his son. :sneaky:

wait. SHIT! i screwed up. :P crap. i took volemort out of the story....gah. stupid me. hmm...maybe i could have the snake (voldemort) back in there...or...he could be posessing snape like he did with quirrel in the first book....hmm....so many thing to add in! :stunned:

I was going to help...but you guys have obviously got it covered ;)

haha. i'm just going to finish it up. then i'm going to post the whole finished story.

Muahahaha and end with a cliffhanger. so then i won't need to explain something i don't understand. :P

and if someone asks me...well i'll have to think that over.

yah! we get to read it :D

it's quite long but here it is.... 3 pages.

 

They had looked over to where Ron was lying on a bed.

“Ron-” Harry had began but Ron cut him off first.

 

“Watch out!” shouted Ron as Sirius Black had just come out from behind the door. Hermione Harry raised their wands instantly and together shouted Expelliarums! Black’s wand, which actually belonged to Ron flew out of his hands and into a corner while Black himself stumbled backwards. Hatred was boiling through Harry. The man standing in front of him had killed his parents. Should he make him pay for it himself, or hand him over to the Dementors so the kiss could be performed on him?

 

He does deserve it thought Harry as he ran the thought over in his mind. Harry had said it himself. His thoughts wandered back to his conversation with Professor Lupin.

 

“They call it the Dementors’ Kiss. It’s what Dementors do to those they wish to destroy utterly. They clamp their jaws upon the mouth of the victim and suck out his soul.” Living without a soul thought Harry. Or would it be better for him to die? One of those fates would come upon Sirius and Harry knew it. While thinking this over Harry did not move his eyes from where Sirius stood, obviously also thinking about how to get out of everything alive.

 

“What are you going to do? Kill me?” teased Black.

 

“Don’t tempt me!” Harry screamed back at him. But Harry couldn’t kill him. He wasn’t that cruel. He didn’t have the guts to. And Black of course knew that or else he wouldn’t be teasing Harry.

 

Harry still had his wand raised. He had heard movement behind him. A shiver was sent down his spine. He heard something moving. Should he take his eyes off Black? One wrong move could lead to his death. Hermione had obviously taken her eyes off Black and was making squeaking noises and mouthing words that Harry could not understand. She was also pointing to something behind him.

 

Harry tore his eyes away from Black and looked behind him. Snape was standing there with his wand pointing directly at Harry. Harry jumped backwards as the wand was now pointing at his face.

 

He was in on it! It was him who was helping Black into the castle and trying to get Harry killed. They had been right! Dumbledore thought that Snape had come back to our side! But he had really been passing information to Voldemort. Harry felt his scar burning him. He didn’t have time to be worrying about it now.

 

“P-professor Snape” Hermione squeaked. “W-what are you doing?” Her face white and shaking. “You’re here to h-help us right?” she asked in a terrified voice.

 

He gave her a sharp look. Of course he wasn’t there to help them. Black had taken the second that Harry took his eyes off him and ran to Snape’s side. A look a triumph was on Snape’s face. He would be the one to kill the famous Harry Potter. Harry wiped some sweat and blood off his forehead as it was now beginning to drip into his eyes. Snape began to laugh. Was it because he would finally be able to do what he had wanted to do ever since Harry had set foot inside the school? His laughing stopped suddenly when a noise was heard above them.

 

“We’re down here!” screamed Ron hoping that someone would hear them and maybe save them. Footsteps could be heard. Black was watching the door but Snape was still watching Harry. Professor Lupin and a stunningly handsome boy no older than Harry came through the door wand raised and ready.

 

“Expelliarums!” he shouted. Snape’s wand flew out of his hands and Lupin caught it.

 

“You fool!” Black shouted at Snape. “You should have taken your eyes off the boy!”

 

“Quiet!” Snape whispered urgently obviously angry with himself for not being prepared.

 

“Expelliarums!” Lupin shouted again and Harry’s, Ron’s, and Hermione’s wands shot into his hands. “There,” he said calmly observing the situation in which he had thrown himself into. With his wand raised he began. “Now Harry, please tell me what has happened with no interruptions from Mr. Weasly or Ms. Granger.

 

“Well-” Harry had begun but Hermione had interrupted him.

 

“Professor Lupin who is this boy?” she demanded.

 

“Oh I’m sorry for my bad manners. This is Eric. He has come here from a different wizarding school. He has just transferred to Hogwarts and will be staying here for the rest of the year.”

 

“But why is he here?”

 

“Please Ms. Granger no more interruptions. And,” he said with a menacing look towards Sirius and Snape who were staring at Eric, “You two do not interrupt either.”

 

At that moment a snake slithered through the tunnel. Harry felt his scar burning fiercely. Everyone now had their eyes on the snake slithering slowly along the edge of the room.

 

Snape said something in snake language. Then Harry understood. Voldemort was possessing Snape.

 

“Kill the boy,” Voldemort had hissed. The snake lunged at Harry in an instant. Harry jumped backwards and the snake pounced. While in midair it froze. The boy, Eric, had his wand pointing at the snake. Two seconds later it had burst. The boy now approached Voldemort with what looked like no fear.

“Leave,” he said in a calm voice. Leave or I will be forced to attack you. And you wouldn’t want that…would you?” Eric asked with a slight smile.

 

Sirius along with most others in the room did not understand and had a look of confusion on their faces. Voldemort, who was possessing as Snape on the other hand, had a look of horror upon his face. Voldemort scared of a boy? Why?

 

“How are you here?!” Voldemort had asked amazingly sounding, well, scared.

 

“Oh you don’t need to know that…you have other things to worry about” Eric said. “Don’t you father?” he added with a twisted smile.

 

 

there it is. if you see anything i should change please tell me. or if i have made any mistakes point them out.

 

i still need to read it over....well after i watch smallville. :D

father????

keep going! this is getting good! :D

:lol: that's all i'm leaving it at. :P it's to long to explain it all...plus, it's not like i don't understand it myself or anything. :rolleyes:

lol....if i get questioned about that which i know i will be, i will be so dead. :lol:

 

nah....i don't have anything to back up what i wrote at the end of my story.

 

and by your comment i acheived what i wanted. :smug: it's a cliffhanger. which you will never find the answer to. :P

:P

you should keep going!

i like how eric is the father of voldemort haha

good story i liked it :kiss: