dadedade Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 So it's over This time I know it's gone Salt water tasted it too long I only know why I'm wrong now I know it's gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone. So it's over this time you're flying on this time i know those song can stop its slowly burn can stop its slowly gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone We have slowly gone Can we pour some water on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dadedade Posted October 17, 2011 Author Share Posted October 17, 2011 So it's over this time you're flying on this time i know those song can stop its slowly burn can stop its slowly gone this makes no sense imho, but it's the best I can do :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyFavouriteMemory Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 A few changes I think I hear from what you have :) So it's over This time I know it's gone Salt water tasted it too long I only know I'm wrong (No why here) now I know it's gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone. So it's over this time you're flying on this time i know no song (No instead of Those) can stop its slowly burn can stop its slowly gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone We have slowly gone Can we pour some water on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amir.mohit Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 aren't those can't instead of can...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dadedade Posted October 17, 2011 Author Share Posted October 17, 2011 A few changes I think I hear from what you have :) So it's over This time I know it's gone Salt water tasted it too long I only know I'm wrong (No why here) now I know it's gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone. So it's over this time you're flying on this time i know no song (No instead of Those) can stop its slowly burn can stop its slowly gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone Up in flames Up in flames Up in flames We have slowly gone We have slowly gone Can we pour some water on? Have it. So it's over this time you're flying on this time i know no song can stop it slowly burn can stop it slowly go This has perfect sense in English :D Digital-HighFive man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teco Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 It is defenitely "Can't we put" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
golfing7861 Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 thanks guys!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartroc Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 this time i know no song can stop it slowly burn Chris definitely needs some English lessons. :lol: :nod: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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