October 27, 200421 yr hey, you could draw a pic of them together, he'd like that lol :cool: :lol: :lol: :lol:
October 27, 200421 yr Author then post it here :cool: :lol: :lol: but hey, i really love that hand lady, fifi :stunned: it's so kewl!
October 28, 200421 yr I´ll always remember let´s begin a new day i said myself today but i can´t get it again i can´t keep hiding this i know i must try to relax so i wake up and get ready now i go out for a walk i leave home and go far i'm on street and don´t know why i don't know where to go at home all make me sad. i leave my keays but i shouldn't go back i look the people and sky then i close my eyes and breath and i begin to walk away. i rememebr all the time i spent but something is wrong i was trying to leave you i turn my way, just against and walk in the other side i walked trought the streets and end in a field i feel myself there, im free i just lie next a walk see the sky, feel the wind feel the sea, see the birds i can cry what i want i can feel like a bird i can crowl in the sea i can fly on my mind i spent more than an hour there some people come and pass me near no one stop to talk just welcome with the hand i heard a noise and i hide next a tree spring is coming birds are loving there are a couple that come next to me and stand in front the sea then they go to beach. i remember the time we spent felt the sand trought my hands felt the waves on my skin time i feel lost now. i decide to go back home but before i leave there a letter devoted. i come back there just half a year later i feel better than ever i´m alone but free. i arrive there and i search the letter the pen is still there on the bottle i kept it. i slept there an hour the same couple is there they look at me and smile. i hear the rythm of waves i feel the wind again a leaf stop on my shoulder. i look back and see a guy with my letter he come near to me and began to speak i like a lot this lyrics i imagine you´re looking for it and i come here everyday just to give you back i´m quiet it never happend before don't worry keep it if you like i´ll devote it if you want he stop and look at me you´ve devote my soul you singed my skin you keep me breath you make me beat again the noon is falling his light eyes look at me i get up again, that was a dream? 23 October 2004, Saturday. Ariadna Squire Damique :)
October 28, 200421 yr Sorry but is in spanish :embarrased: En la profundidad de la noche En la profundidad de la noche sientes un dolorido lamento en la oscuridad vislumbras dos manos húmedas ves el suelo, no ha llovido son lágrimas de un corazón dolido no soportaste más ese dolor y comenzaste a llorar ya los luceros no brillan ahora estás tristes y rojizos ya no ven belleza a su lado no sienten calor en sus manos su corazón ha sufrido y se siente parado trataste reanimalo, en vano trataste olvidarlo todo pero no lo lograste es un dolor tan profundo un dolor tan complejo algo inexplicable, piensas, ya no recuerdas que antes otra persona lloró como tú que una amiga se refugió en tu comprensión pero ahora te sientes sola. una isla en medio del mar y no puedes parar de llorar crees que es lo único que te queda te mueve una gran pena y nada puede evitarlo, piensas, tratas no recordar ahora tu querido pasado que tanto se ha alejado que crees que es un sueño recuerdas con vegueza y alegría esos cándidos ojos que te miraban esas cálidas palabras que susurraba esas miradas cómplices, todo en una palabra pero todo eso desapareció de pronto ya no ves sus ojos alegres ante ti ya no sientes su voz cerca de ti se alejó poco a poco pero no te diste cuenta no llegaste a sufrir por eso ahora duele así ya tus ojos no le miran como antes ahora estan tristes y rojizos ese alguien que antes te consolaba ahora te hace llorar desconsolada te sientes engañada pues él se llevó tus palabras pero debes seguir adelante recordarlo todo con alegría para volver a sentirte viva deja de llorar niña, sonríe como aquél día en que oíste una voz que llenó tu vida sonrie vida, sonríe niña no llores más por aquél día apesar de sentirte vacía reponte del pasado y vive un nuevo día pronto llegará la mañana la luz avivará tu mundo no temas al mañana caminas sin rumbo crees oir su voz deseas oír su perdón pero no llega nada a ti así, piensas, mañana todo cambiará pero debes seguir sin mirar atrás lo amaste, lo amas sabes que siempre lo amarás incluso aunque él no lo sepa incluso aunque él no vuelva nunca le olvidarás amor profundo sientes hoy más que ayer con él tu corazón ahora late de nuevo más vivo que antes y es por su recuerdo por su dulce y cálido recuerdo recuérdale en secreto sueñas con hacérselo saber pero no te atreves así que tratas esconderlo pero sabes que no puedes hoy lo volviste a ver y tu corazón latió sin freno pero no puedes decir nada no tienes palabras y te escondes, él te mira de pronto sientes un frío sobre tí, como un mármol ves una habitación oscura nadie a tu alrededor en la mesa un despertador fue un sueño, sólo eso un sueño que nunca olvidarás. 28/10/2004 Ariadna Squire Damique :cool:
October 28, 200421 yr :o wow that 1st poem was really good and especially as it's written in english! You're very talented and your english is wonderful :)
October 29, 200421 yr thanks a lot fifi ;) well the other is in spanish, sorry about that. :embarrased: ... i dont know but 2nd make me sad, is mm a bit like "i´ll always remember", :cry:
October 29, 200421 yr and if i want to publish the english i must show it to the person i write too (he dont knoe it). that make me more sad now before i was only shy to show. every time i show a poem to a man/guy ... never works i mean never get an answer if is good or not. why mens dont like poetry? :/ last year i show one (very simple) to my spanish teacher (isnt a poem about love/unlove) and i dont get any answer. :( i dont know where to publish poems in spanish, so i only can publish in english at a mag.
October 29, 200421 yr Author http://www.soundclick.com/goodgestreet hey ryan i listened to some of your band's song and they're brill :stunned: :thumbsup: gah i wish i was musically talented too... not only having the audience consisted of bath ducks and shampoo bottles :lol: :rolleyes: but hey, i can always join the Air Guitar Championships! :cool: :laugh3: :lol:
October 29, 200421 yr These days arn't the same anymore Now the leaves have fallen You've left me alone It feels like i'm dying A toxic needle to my mind The world is spinning And the sky is falling I'm trapped in a bubble Lost in this maze Crashing through a prayers mind And now here I am Here am I The one who's asking the questions And am I the one Who just said goobye Like a rubix cube I confuse your mind A multi-coloured blast of frusration And a twisting tease Not saying a word By - Me :D :P i konw i posted this in the other forum, but thats not the point :D
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