:lol: :lol: LMAO!!! :lol:

hey, you could draw a pic of them together, he'd like that lol :cool: :lol: :lol: :lol:

:lol: :idea2: I think I may just do that! :lol:

then post it here :cool: :lol: :lol:

 

but hey, i really love that hand lady, fifi :stunned: it's so kewl!

:lol: thanks Lotta :)

;) :cool:

Kyle i like yours a lot :idea2:

yeah!

Yeah Kyles pictures were majorly good! :cool: :D

:blush: :blush: :kiss: thankies.

Did you enter that photography competition you were talking about? :)

yep. i wont hear back until november :)

Oh good luck :cool: which pictures did you enter?

I´ll always remember

 

let´s begin a new day

i said myself today

but i can´t get it again

i can´t keep hiding this

 

i know i must try to relax

so i wake up and get ready

now i go out for a walk

i leave home and go far

 

i'm on street and don´t know why

i don't know where to go

at home all make me sad.

 

i leave my keays

but i shouldn't go back

i look the people and sky

then i close my eyes and breath

and i begin to walk away.

 

i rememebr all the time i spent

but something is wrong

i was trying to leave you

 

i turn my way, just against

and walk in the other side

i walked trought the streets

and end in a field

 

i feel myself there, im free

i just lie next a walk

see the sky, feel the wind

feel the sea, see the birds

 

i can cry what i want

i can feel like a bird

i can crowl in the sea

i can fly on my mind

 

i spent more than an hour there

some people come and pass me near

no one stop to talk

just welcome with the hand

 

i heard a noise

and i hide next a tree

spring is coming

birds are loving

 

there are a couple

that come next to me

and stand in front the sea

then they go to beach.

 

i remember the time we spent

felt the sand trought my hands

felt the waves on my skin

time i feel lost now.

 

i decide to go back home

but before i leave there

a letter devoted.

 

i come back there just

half a year later

i feel better than ever

i´m alone but free.

 

i arrive there and

i search the letter

the pen is still there

on the bottle i kept it.

 

i slept there an hour

the same couple is there

they look at me and smile.

 

i hear the rythm of waves

i feel the wind again

a leaf stop on my shoulder.

 

i look back and see

a guy with my letter

he come near to me

and began to speak

 

i like a lot this lyrics

i imagine you´re looking for it

and i come here everyday

just to give you back

 

i´m quiet it never happend before

don't worry keep it if you like

i´ll devote it if you want

he stop and look at me

 

you´ve devote my soul

you singed my skin

you keep me breath

you make me beat again

 

the noon is falling

his light eyes look at me

i get up again,

that was a dream?

 

23 October 2004, Saturday.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

:)

whoa, Ari. that's brill! i love it! :stunned:

Sorry but is in spanish :embarrased:

 

En la profundidad de la noche

En la profundidad de la noche

sientes un dolorido lamento

en la oscuridad vislumbras

dos manos húmedas

ves el suelo, no ha llovido

son lágrimas de un corazón dolido

no soportaste más ese dolor

y comenzaste a llorar

ya los luceros no brillan

ahora estás tristes y rojizos

ya no ven belleza a su lado

no sienten calor en sus manos

su corazón ha sufrido

y se siente parado

trataste reanimalo, en vano

trataste olvidarlo todo

pero no lo lograste

es un dolor tan profundo

un dolor tan complejo

algo inexplicable, piensas,

ya no recuerdas que antes

otra persona lloró como tú

que una amiga se refugió

en tu comprensión

pero ahora te sientes sola.

 

una isla en medio del mar

y no puedes parar de llorar

crees que es lo único que te queda

te mueve una gran pena

y nada puede evitarlo, piensas,

tratas no recordar ahora

tu querido pasado

que tanto se ha alejado

que crees que es un sueño

recuerdas con vegueza y alegría

esos cándidos ojos que te miraban

esas cálidas palabras que susurraba

esas miradas cómplices, todo en una palabra

pero todo eso desapareció de pronto

ya no ves sus ojos alegres ante ti

ya no sientes su voz cerca de ti

se alejó poco a poco

pero no te diste cuenta

no llegaste a sufrir

por eso ahora duele así

ya tus ojos no le miran como antes

ahora estan tristes y rojizos

ese alguien que antes te consolaba

ahora te hace llorar desconsolada

 

te sientes engañada pues

él se llevó tus palabras

pero debes seguir adelante

recordarlo todo con alegría

para volver a sentirte viva

deja de llorar niña,

sonríe como aquél día

en que oíste una voz

que llenó tu vida

sonrie vida, sonríe niña

no llores más por aquél día

apesar de sentirte vacía

reponte del pasado

y vive un nuevo día

pronto llegará la mañana

la luz avivará tu mundo

no temas al mañana

caminas sin rumbo

crees oir su voz

deseas oír su perdón

pero no llega nada a ti

así, piensas, mañana todo cambiará

pero debes seguir sin mirar atrás

lo amaste, lo amas

sabes que siempre lo amarás

incluso aunque él no lo sepa

 

incluso aunque él no vuelva

nunca le olvidarás

amor profundo sientes hoy

más que ayer con él

tu corazón ahora late de nuevo

más vivo que antes

y es por su recuerdo

por su dulce y cálido recuerdo

recuérdale en secreto

sueñas con hacérselo saber

pero no te atreves

así que tratas esconderlo

pero sabes que no puedes

hoy lo volviste a ver

y tu corazón latió sin freno

pero no puedes decir nada

no tienes palabras

y te escondes, él te mira

de pronto sientes un frío

sobre tí, como un mármol

ves una habitación oscura

nadie a tu alrededor

en la mesa un despertador

fue un sueño, sólo eso

un sueño que nunca olvidarás.

 

28/10/2004

 

Ariadna Squire Damique :cool:

hey the top one is brill, but i'll have to translate the second one

sorry jack :embarrased:

is a sad love poem :(

today im a melancolic soul :cry:

:o wow that 1st poem was really good and especially as it's written in english! You're very talented and your english is wonderful :)

thanks a lot fifi ;)

well the other is in spanish, sorry about that. :embarrased: ... i dont know but 2nd make me sad, is mm a bit like "i´ll always remember", :cry:

and if i want to publish the english i must show it to the person i write too (he dont knoe it). that make me more sad now before i was only shy to show. every time i show a poem to a man/guy ... never works i mean never get an answer if is good or not. why mens dont like poetry? :/ last year i show one (very simple) to my spanish teacher (isnt a poem about love/unlove) and i dont get any answer. :( i dont know where to publish poems in spanish, so i only can publish in english at a mag.

http://www.soundclick.com/goodgestreet

 

hey ryan i listened to some of your band's song and they're brill :stunned: :thumbsup:

 

gah i wish i was musically talented too... not only having the audience consisted of bath ducks and shampoo bottles :lol: :rolleyes: but hey, i can always join the Air Guitar Championships! :cool: :laugh3: :lol:

These days arn't the same anymore

Now the leaves have fallen

You've left me alone

It feels like i'm dying

A toxic needle to my mind

 

The world is spinning

And the sky is falling

I'm trapped in a bubble

Lost in this maze

Crashing through a prayers mind

 

And now here I am

Here am I

The one who's asking the questions

And am I the one

Who just said goobye

 

Like a rubix cube

I confuse your mind

A multi-coloured blast of frusration

And a twisting tease

Not saying a word

 

By - Me :D :P

i konw i posted this in the other forum, but thats not the point :D

:stunned: very nice, lil one, very nice! :cool: