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Ari...Bea - Poetry Section (A Thread for the Great Poetry)


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I was so thrown back by how good some of Ari's Poetry, I think it is only right that Ari gets a thread for her to post all of her poetry! I really want to read more of it!

 

I think it is true to say that she has an amazing gift!

 

Congratulations Ari :)

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Statues

 

There are statues

on the square

are made of metal

silver, bronze

all them are mens

kings, conquerors,

warriors, presidents

only old mens

cold shadows

then you decided

to go to an expo

there are some pics

of people you don´t know

people you see on streets

a man is there look at pics

then you go to visit the museum

because this man told you about it

you unknown him

but you believed him

you also see statues there

women statues mades by stone

strong, they keep eternity

you look around

and you feel alone

looking at a wall

you feel someone breathing near you

you look behind you

and there is a men

the same men you saw before

you feel the wind

then you look in front of you

now you are alone again

look at the floor

there is a note, a letter

for you? from who?

did this man leave it there?

is like a clue of a game

i´m a friend you don´t know

or not? then try to find the truth

you are looking for your true

then just follow this clue"

there´s an address in the note

you decided to go home

and forget all was happened today

you look a book

and you can´t see the faces

are like shadows in front your eyes

you are blind now, you can´t know people,

you don´t know why and are so scared

you look yourself in a mirror

you only see shadows and light behind you

does this anything to do about the clue?

is late, all your room is dark

then you try to sleep

you have nightmares

you only see shadows

because your heart is blind

your heart is becoming a stone

like statues you saw before.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

06/11/2004 Saturday.

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I´ll always remember

 

let´s begin a new day

i said myself today

but i can´t get it again

i can´t keep hiding this

 

i know i must try to relax

so i wake up and get ready

now i go out for a walk

i leave home and go far

 

i'm on street and don´t know why

i don't know where to go

at home all make me sad.

 

i leave my keays

but i shouldn't go back

i look the people and sky

then i close my eyes and breath

and i begin to walk away.

 

i rememebr all the time i spent

but something is wrong

i was trying to leave you

 

i turn my way, just against

and walk in the other side

i walked trought the streets

and end in a field

 

i feel myself there, im free

i just lie next a walk

see the sky, feel the wind

feel the sea, see the birds

 

i can cry what i want

i can feel like a bird

i can crowl in the sea

i can fly on my mind

 

i spent more than an hour there

some people come and pass me near

no one stop to talk

just welcome with the hand

 

i heard a noise

and i hide next a tree

spring is coming

birds are loving

 

there are a couple

that come next to me

and stand in front the sea

then they go to beach.

 

i remember the time we spent

felt the sand trought my hands

felt the waves on my skin

time i feel lost now.

 

i decide to go back home

but before i leave there

a letter devoted.

 

i come back there just

half a year later

i feel better than ever

i´m alone but free.

 

i arrive there and

i search the letter

the pen is still there

on the bottle i kept it.

 

i slept there an hour

the same couple is there

they look at me and smile.

 

i hear the rythm of waves

i feel the wind again

a leaf stop on my shoulder.

 

i look back and see

a guy with my letter

he come near to me

and began to speak

 

i like a lot this lyrics

i imagine you´re looking for it

and i come here everyday

just to give you back

 

i´m quiet it never happend before

don't worry keep it if you like

i´ll devote it if you want

he stop and look at me

 

you´ve devote my soul

you singed my skin

you keep me breath

you make me beat again

 

the noon is falling

his light eyes look at me

i get up again,

that was a dream?

 

23 October 2004, Saturday.

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

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thanks a lot fifi :) i think those in english make sense, anyways i need that someone revise them to publish in a mag. :/

i think i wont translate spanish poems i wrote into english, you know that then they have less sense. :( that´s the bad thing about write in 2 different languages. :) i tried to write in french too but i think they dont make any sense. :dozey:

 

but thaks a lot fifi :cool: :blush: :kiss:

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Hidden message

 

Until days you know comes

i wish you´ll always be here

i´ll primise you not i´m scared

so i don´t know how to let you know

i´ll wanna be with you always

day and night without nobody more

round of you i feel a deeply feeling

I want let you know (chorus)

L ittle secret that nobody knows

U ´re who helps me to grow

V ery happy i´m now

U still unknown it

S omething i don´t know how to say

O biously i think you know it

I turned shy, i often don´t know why?

But now i´m sure and it don´t worry me

I can´t stop this feeling

that grow by itself on me

i feel my heart not beat

´cause now you are far of me

you own my blood and skin

I want let you know (chorus)

L ittle secret that nobody knows

U ´re who helps me to grow

V ery happy i´m now

U still unknown it

S omething i don´t know how to say

O biously i think you know it

I´m fall deeply in love

You now know it

you think i´m wrong

i sure you i´m not fool

it´s i´m not full

´cause you own me

but you didn´t know it

I want let you know (chorus)

L ittle secret that nobody knows

U ´re who helps me to grow

V ery happy i´m now

U still unknown it

S omething i don´t know how to say

O biously i think you know it

I´m in front of you

and i´m not scared

to say i love you so

it´s true, really true

what do you think of?

could we try it?

please answer me

I want let you know (chorus)

L ittle secret that nobody knows

U ´re who helps me to grow

V ery happy i´m now

U still unknown it

S omething i don´t know how to say

O biously i think you know it

It was a secret message

didn´t you find it

´cause is in love language

and if you find it

it´s ´cause you´re in love too

be safe, not shy and say him

how you feel by him

 

Ariadna Squire Damique

(20/06/04)

it´s officially my first in english. :)

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