Guest DavidG Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 I was so thrown back by how good some of Ari's Poetry, I think it is only right that Ari gets a thread for her to post all of her poetry! I really want to read more of it! I think it is true to say that she has an amazing gift! Congratulations Ari :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 wow thanks a lot david :blush: :blush: is a great gift :blush: ;) thanks a lot dave :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DavidG Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 It's been a pleasure to read your stuff Ari, so thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 thanks a lot. :cool: i will post here more poems, but what about spanish poems? :idea2: not all of you will understand them :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DavidG Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 its not a problem, post them all, then at least other people can appreciate them even if I can not ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 Statues There are statues on the square are made of metal silver, bronze all them are mens kings, conquerors, warriors, presidents only old mens cold shadows then you decided to go to an expo there are some pics of people you don´t know people you see on streets a man is there look at pics then you go to visit the museum because this man told you about it you unknown him but you believed him you also see statues there women statues mades by stone strong, they keep eternity you look around and you feel alone looking at a wall you feel someone breathing near you you look behind you and there is a men the same men you saw before you feel the wind then you look in front of you now you are alone again look at the floor there is a note, a letter for you? from who? did this man leave it there? is like a clue of a game i´m a friend you don´t know or not? then try to find the truth you are looking for your true then just follow this clue" there´s an address in the note you decided to go home and forget all was happened today you look a book and you can´t see the faces are like shadows in front your eyes you are blind now, you can´t know people, you don´t know why and are so scared you look yourself in a mirror you only see shadows and light behind you does this anything to do about the clue? is late, all your room is dark then you try to sleep you have nightmares you only see shadows because your heart is blind your heart is becoming a stone like statues you saw before. Ariadna Squire Damique 06/11/2004 Saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 I´ll always remember let´s begin a new day i said myself today but i can´t get it again i can´t keep hiding this i know i must try to relax so i wake up and get ready now i go out for a walk i leave home and go far i'm on street and don´t know why i don't know where to go at home all make me sad. i leave my keays but i shouldn't go back i look the people and sky then i close my eyes and breath and i begin to walk away. i rememebr all the time i spent but something is wrong i was trying to leave you i turn my way, just against and walk in the other side i walked trought the streets and end in a field i feel myself there, im free i just lie next a walk see the sky, feel the wind feel the sea, see the birds i can cry what i want i can feel like a bird i can crowl in the sea i can fly on my mind i spent more than an hour there some people come and pass me near no one stop to talk just welcome with the hand i heard a noise and i hide next a tree spring is coming birds are loving there are a couple that come next to me and stand in front the sea then they go to beach. i remember the time we spent felt the sand trought my hands felt the waves on my skin time i feel lost now. i decide to go back home but before i leave there a letter devoted. i come back there just half a year later i feel better than ever i´m alone but free. i arrive there and i search the letter the pen is still there on the bottle i kept it. i slept there an hour the same couple is there they look at me and smile. i hear the rythm of waves i feel the wind again a leaf stop on my shoulder. i look back and see a guy with my letter he come near to me and began to speak i like a lot this lyrics i imagine you´re looking for it and i come here everyday just to give you back i´m quiet it never happend before don't worry keep it if you like i´ll devote it if you want he stop and look at me you´ve devote my soul you singed my skin you keep me breath you make me beat again the noon is falling his light eyes look at me i get up again, that was a dream? 23 October 2004, Saturday. Ariadna Squire Damique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFE Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 beautiful poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 thanks a lot mafe :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 when i will post poems in spanish not all will understand them :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DavidG Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 that was great ari top job for a fine poet! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fifi Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Ari your poems are really great! I'd love to be able to write poetry that at least makes some sense in another language but yours come across just as beautifully as I'd imagine them to be in Spanish! :stunned: :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 thanks a lot fifi :) i think those in english make sense, anyways i need that someone revise them to publish in a mag. :/ i think i wont translate spanish poems i wrote into english, you know that then they have less sense. :( that´s the bad thing about write in 2 different languages. :) i tried to write in french too but i think they dont make any sense. :dozey: but thaks a lot fifi :cool: :blush: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 anyways my teachers at eoi failed me twice in second year, now is third time i´m doing the year. :dozey: i thougt to show them this forum and all my post here. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DavidG Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 :) that's cool, I am going to have to start being grammatically correct from now on though! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 thanks dave :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DavidG Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Any new poetry today Ari? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 i´ll post one "old" here again. :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kalter zug Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 you've got potential! :smug: :P really beautiful one sees, it comes straight from your mind (ehh heart, soul?! hunh) and that's what counts :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Hidden message Until days you know comes i wish you´ll always be here i´ll primise you not i´m scared so i don´t know how to let you know i´ll wanna be with you always day and night without nobody more round of you i feel a deeply feeling I want let you know (chorus) L ittle secret that nobody knows U ´re who helps me to grow V ery happy i´m now U still unknown it S omething i don´t know how to say O biously i think you know it I turned shy, i often don´t know why? But now i´m sure and it don´t worry me I can´t stop this feeling that grow by itself on me i feel my heart not beat ´cause now you are far of me you own my blood and skin I want let you know (chorus) L ittle secret that nobody knows U ´re who helps me to grow V ery happy i´m now U still unknown it S omething i don´t know how to say O biously i think you know it I´m fall deeply in love You now know it you think i´m wrong i sure you i´m not fool it´s i´m not full ´cause you own me but you didn´t know it I want let you know (chorus) L ittle secret that nobody knows U ´re who helps me to grow V ery happy i´m now U still unknown it S omething i don´t know how to say O biously i think you know it I´m in front of you and i´m not scared to say i love you so it´s true, really true what do you think of? could we try it? please answer me I want let you know (chorus) L ittle secret that nobody knows U ´re who helps me to grow V ery happy i´m now U still unknown it S omething i don´t know how to say O biously i think you know it It was a secret message didn´t you find it ´cause is in love language and if you find it it´s ´cause you´re in love too be safe, not shy and say him how you feel by him Ariadna Squire Damique (20/06/04) it´s officially my first in english. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 thanks a lot gab :blush: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel at his table Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 that's great Ari :rolleyes: ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 thanks a lot Ivi. ;) :cool: is officially my first english poem i posted here. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 En realidad es increible bea! muy bien por ti, ya quisiera yo poder expresarme de esa forma..quiza entonces no me sentiria mal:/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 bueno siempre es cuestion de empezar. ponerse delante de un folio, pensar y escribir sin miedo a lo que salga. :) imaginar situaciones o lugares al principio ayuda a pensar, a contar cosas de un modo breve, un poco metaforico. :) y sin darte cuenta de pronto sale todo. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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