meh, yo no tengo talento para eso,pero a ti si te sale genial! :P

Ari, have you posted this poem before?

yes i said it. :) i must write one soon, a second part of "statues". :cool:

 

ren: yo tambien pensaba eso al principio, que no eran tan buenos como para seguir, pero seguí simplemente porque me relaja y aclara las cosas aunque otras veces me sorprende :stunned: . chris tb lo dijo que el empezó asi y daba animos a seguir aunque nos pareciera que no eran buenos. un bebé no deja de aprender a caminar solo porque se cayera una vez. :cool: lo sigue intentando hasta que llega a ser atleta.

:stunned:

wow, lo que acabas de decir es simplemente ..wow.. gracias por eso, creo que lo necesitaba :kiss:

Tratare de escribir alguna tonta cancion mas tarde .. sera un total fiasco pero que importa :P

ok, me alegro mucho :cool: ya ví que la ultima frase fue un poco wow,yo misme me sorprendi al releerla jeje, pero es cierta, no? ;)

Muy muy cierta y muy wow :D

;) salió sola :) quizá deberia parar y escribir algo jeje. pero no lo pdreis ver hasta el viernes proximo. :/

no vienes hasta el viernes proximo? :cry:

nop, tambien debo estudiar y no me dejan entrar hasta el fin de semana para que me concentre en las clases. pero hey sacaré tiempo para hacer varios poemas. :cool: por suerte creo que viene otro periodo bueno de inspiracion ;)

hey this morning i begin to write a new poem :cool: but i didnt finished it yet. :/

finiiiiiiiiiiiiiish it :D

hey my teacher answered me yesterday. she said me is good, but i must improve it, i mean improve my poems, because they seems writen by a youth.. i´m young what do you want? :thinking: :lol: i know i must improve it, read more but i´ll do it when i´ll have free time.. we are very busy about studies :confused:

gud luck :D

hehe my dad heard today a news that a boy publish a novel and he is only 14 years old and read more or less 50 books a year, so he said me i must do the same ... i know i must do it. :)

Sounds * second part of Statues

 

Someone made a call

to your lonely heart

did you heard it?

 

You didn´t answer it,

is your line busy?

is it still engaged?

 

You are still at home, now

why don´t answer it?

Are you still blind?

Are you too shy?

 

Now your mind

can´t stop to guess

who called you?

 

You just come for a walk

you though you saw that man

 

he seem to be so far

you saw him like a shadow

you are not sure, who is him?

 

have someone ever

managed your fells?

 

you are still alive

you survive again

from your own ashes

 

The phone is ringing again

you were sleeping

you were still lyed on your bed

thinking, who is calling again?

 

this sound is like a clock

burning up the hour to wake up

to make you beat again

 

you are still in the darkness

but you get the phone

someone ask you your name

 

you just said your name

and he left a short sentence

like a second clue

like a friend´s advice

 

"Have your heart ever been managed?

have you ever feel deeply lonely?

have you ever had a crush?

 

me too, i can´t

i´m still in a jail

and i only could be free

if you help me, please"

 

he sounded like a whisper

like a sweet wave

that remembers you your old times

you imagine yourself younger

but can´t guess who is him?

 

Ariadna Squire (09/12/2004 Thursday)

 

:)

whoa! :stunned: :thumbsup: :cool:

:blush: thanks a lot Lotta ;) :cool:

Riba u moru pliva

ti nisi diva

ne ne nisisi

hoću neću

što?

^ :confused:

fish in the sea

bird in the sky

a fox doesn't fly

so neither do i

fish in the sea

bird in the sky

a fox doesn't fly

so neither do i

 

thanks for translating :) :cool:

it's a new song not a translation :D

it's a new song not a translation :D

 

sorry :/

never mind :)

never mind :)

 

so whats up ? :wink3: