Mojo Pin Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 meh, yo no tengo talento para eso,pero a ti si te sale genial! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
°°°Morning°Glory°°° Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Ari, have you posted this poem before? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 yes i said it. :) i must write one soon, a second part of "statues". :cool: ren: yo tambien pensaba eso al principio, que no eran tan buenos como para seguir, pero seguí simplemente porque me relaja y aclara las cosas aunque otras veces me sorprende :stunned: . chris tb lo dijo que el empezó asi y daba animos a seguir aunque nos pareciera que no eran buenos. un bebé no deja de aprender a caminar solo porque se cayera una vez. :cool: lo sigue intentando hasta que llega a ser atleta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 :stunned: wow, lo que acabas de decir es simplemente ..wow.. gracias por eso, creo que lo necesitaba :kiss: Tratare de escribir alguna tonta cancion mas tarde .. sera un total fiasco pero que importa :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 ok, me alegro mucho :cool: ya ví que la ultima frase fue un poco wow,yo misme me sorprendi al releerla jeje, pero es cierta, no? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Pin Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Muy muy cierta y muy wow :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 ;) salió sola :) quizá deberia parar y escribir algo jeje. pero no lo pdreis ver hasta el viernes proximo. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Ali* Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 no vienes hasta el viernes proximo? :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 nop, tambien debo estudiar y no me dejan entrar hasta el fin de semana para que me concentre en las clases. pero hey sacaré tiempo para hacer varios poemas. :cool: por suerte creo que viene otro periodo bueno de inspiracion ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 9, 2004 Share Posted November 9, 2004 hey this morning i begin to write a new poem :cool: but i didnt finished it yet. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DavidG Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 finiiiiiiiiiiiiiish it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 11, 2004 Share Posted November 11, 2004 hey my teacher answered me yesterday. she said me is good, but i must improve it, i mean improve my poems, because they seems writen by a youth.. i´m young what do you want? :thinking: :lol: i know i must improve it, read more but i´ll do it when i´ll have free time.. we are very busy about studies :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel at his table Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 gud luck :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 hehe my dad heard today a news that a boy publish a novel and he is only 14 years old and read more or less 50 books a year, so he said me i must do the same ... i know i must do it. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted December 9, 2004 Share Posted December 9, 2004 Sounds * second part of Statues Someone made a call to your lonely heart did you heard it? You didn´t answer it, is your line busy? is it still engaged? You are still at home, now why don´t answer it? Are you still blind? Are you too shy? Now your mind can´t stop to guess who called you? You just come for a walk you though you saw that man he seem to be so far you saw him like a shadow you are not sure, who is him? have someone ever managed your fells? you are still alive you survive again from your own ashes The phone is ringing again you were sleeping you were still lyed on your bed thinking, who is calling again? this sound is like a clock burning up the hour to wake up to make you beat again you are still in the darkness but you get the phone someone ask you your name you just said your name and he left a short sentence like a second clue like a friend´s advice "Have your heart ever been managed? have you ever feel deeply lonely? have you ever had a crush? me too, i can´t i´m still in a jail and i only could be free if you help me, please" he sounded like a whisper like a sweet wave that remembers you your old times you imagine yourself younger but can´t guess who is him? Ariadna Squire (09/12/2004 Thursday) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pharynx Posted December 9, 2004 Share Posted December 9, 2004 whoa! :stunned: :thumbsup: :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted December 9, 2004 Share Posted December 9, 2004 :blush: thanks a lot Lotta ;) :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Riba u moru pliva ti nisi diva ne ne nisisi hoću neću što? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Albie Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 ^ :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 fish in the sea bird in the sky a fox doesn't fly so neither do i Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Albie Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 fish in the sea bird in the sky a fox doesn't fly so neither do i thanks for translating :) :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 it's a new song not a translation :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Albie Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 it's a new song not a translation :D sorry :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 never mind :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Albie Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 never mind :) so whats up ? :wink3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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