This is a poem that I wrote. Let me know what u people think. Please rate it from 1-10.

 

 

 

 

Don't

 

Don't ask me why I wonder,

Don't ask why I did it,

Don't ask my for my reason,

Just walk away and

froget I was there

 

Don't ask me why I feel this way,

Don't ask if I'll go back,

Don't ask me if I'll change

Just vanish in the air

 

Don't ask me when,

Don't ask me how,

Don't as how many times,

Just pretend you never knew me,

Pretend you never found me

 

They took it all away from me,

They robbed me from my fun,

I'll still never tell them why,

They'll never understand

 

I never felt so angry,

To be alive and to be caught,

They made me feel this way,

The day they brought me back

 

It's like a living hell,

when they ask me all

these questions,

To figure out the answers,

They just don't understand,

They'll never understand.

it's a good poem i think. ;)

7.6/10 :thumbsup:

YEAH! it is

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Just walk away and

froget I was there

 

This is my favourite line!!!

 

In all seriousness its a good poem. :cool:

I never felt so angry,

To be alive and to be caught,

They made me feel this way,

The day they brought me back

 

interesting poem... i specially liked this part....

7/10 :cool: