bump :D

come on master of the rhyme...hehe...compose another

Bump

thump

jump

 

ur dumped

lol, nice

oooh,i should of probably noticed it b4, if ne mods wanna delete my poetry thread, I'll transfer what i've shown across, and then show sum more gradually

why thank u (takes bow) :D

Oh ballbreaking moon and ridiculing stars

The older I get, the closer you are

Don't you have somewhere that you need to be

Instead of hanging here making a fool of me..

 

 

i really love that poem :) is it one you wrote yourself?

DANCING STARS

 

Author: Shawn Mikula

 

As into your eyes I longingly gaze,

Like looking into the stars above,

Such dazzling beauty does ever amaze,

The stars, they dance, cause I'm in love.

 

As onto your sweet lips I gently kiss thee,

Tasting a fruit that seems forbidden,

You unleash bonds that set me free,

Awaken emotions that long were hidden.

 

And as into your bosom I find rest,

A sanctuary for my tumultuous soul,

I certainly count myself among the blessed,

To have found the one that makes me whole.

 

And throughout this universe I dare to say,

There is not another that could my heart so sway.

one of mine from other thread

 

Shadow

 

I regret the moments

Where I’ve toyed with my mind

The thoughts of much lost

Must be left behind

For what comes not now

Must come in the end

Because if the universe is infinite

Why do we strive to pretend?

 

So as I try and pierce the atmosphere

With the vision from my eyes

I comprehend not the stars

But a view to realise;

 

The long shadows of the evening

On the last day

Before the rest of our lives…

nice

Resonance

 

In sound I ride

On a wavelength of myself personified

I reverberate my thoughts of other times

Through open ears into thoughtful minds

 

In sound we terrify

A shudder of bass so dauntingly high

The lyrics that carve beneath the sound

We shrink as our treble fades and dies

 

In the sound of resonance

We learn to live

Or we hope to die

Mile.wide.smile

 

I’m beaming for once, grinning like a boy

My paradise is perfect.

A mile wide smile, I’m dancing with joy

 

There might be another side

But this grass is just as green,

A mile wide smile, I’m dancing inside

 

Loose me out there

Cast me away,

A mile wide smile, see if I care.

grass is greener on the other side- alot of poems of read ..inlcuding some of mine always tweeks w/ that concept...

Re: Poerty

 

*sigh* I'm loving all of your poetry. :)

 

Anywho's, I thought I'd come on in and join (btw I'm new here :) I'm Kara :)).

 

The Air Is Leaving

 

 

Scattered through the forest of life,

Searching,

Back and forth...

Back and forth...

The trees are piercing down on me,

Are they getting smaller?

Or have I lost my drive for adventure?

 

Disappear,

Like vapour,

Swim through the air,

Like summer -

Discover.

Float through the bends,

The triangles,

Open up wider,

As I scream louder...

 

Tracing through the dark paths...

They lay ahead,

They lay behind,

Falling in on me.

I stretch my hand out,

Maybe I can breath...

 

The air is leaving...

The air is leaving...

The air is leaving...

 

I can’t hold on,

It won’t fade away,

The debris,

It keeps falling…

 

Wipe it away they say,

Be ready…

 

I’m running through the ashes,

Yet the dark paths arise,

Again,

Again,

Again…

 

Protect me,

Please,

Protect me.

 

The air is leaving...

The air is leaving...

The air is leaving...

Unity

 

To me

There is nothing closer to the meaning of life

Than that which dances with death

The unity of men as friends

And as enemies on the gift of a bullet

In the fields of war, presented to only those who’ve seen it.

 

Within the grasp of a martyr,

The realisation of a murderer,

The nirvana of a man shot to the heart,

They reaped only their perception

Not the view of another

WElcome Kara! i like your name :o :D

poetry...... :-o Ahhh!

Violets are blue, roses are red, please tell ur mama that she gives some good head.

:oops:

:D

HI sunset_scientist :D

my mother gives good what..what what :o

 

:D

ah u know what i mean! :D

ahaha..si senor

Please slip underneath my sheets

And kiss the tip of my toes

Up to my tiny button nose

I want to little your fingers through my hair

Your tongue behind my ear

I want you to feel your legs wrapped around mine

I want to taste your kisses..kisses of wine

I want you to loose me in your sweet melody

Please take a walk down my alley

Don't hold back

Leave nothing only to your imagination

Please eat away my life's frustration

Lick away the beady drops of sweat streaming down back

Gently glide into a brand new world

Please let all your love for me unfurl

Ride this wave of ecstasy

For know you that tomorrow is another side of me you will see

very nice, Lois!! ;)

Wishing

 

Here I lay under this pale cold sky

wishing my wishes once more away from me

"please, please I beg you, grant me this one wish the wish I wish most of all"

I whisper, I plead to the one solitary star above

"do you listen, do you hear, do you dare?" I cried once more

but the only sound that comes back to me is a sigh......

from the moonless dark grey sky.

nice...do expand..(I know I say that alot.. :oops: )