heres anothe 1: i am sooooo creative!!

 

One good snap deserves another, so between my legs you'll find your mother.

 

not even mine :?

ahahahha....that's wrong... :D

so wrong!!!

Thanks Lois, yes I need to expand it. it's a poem in progress.... :)

awesome..post the expanded version when you're done too.. :)

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hehe yeah where have u been missy

:sad:

I've been wrapped up with exams and such...

 

I got my hair cut...hehehe...I mothe says it looks horrible...just because its abit frizzy..

that sounds Like an intersting haircut

exams oh well they will be over soon enough then u can bore me the whole summer long :-D

heres another i wrote, its still kinda in progress:

 

I know your death;

porous bones hunkered in gossomer and ash,

threaded by needles of light tight

to a fettered envelope of skin

sutured shut on wounds.

I seal your tomb,

my domicile in red,

written on the surface:

I know your death,

it is my own.

that is such a nice poem kinda dark! :-D

abit gothic...kind of...

 

did you kill some girl of yours? :roll: ...ok lame joke...its the weather..

nice..where have you been?

l like lame jokes....my specialty! :o :D

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i didn't write it but it's one of my favorites so... :shrug:

I've been wrapped up with exams and such...

 

I got my hair cut...hehehe...I mothe says it looks horrible...just because its abit frizzy..

 

it really bugs me when my mom points out that she doesn't like my hair (but it's usually because i don't cut it rather than that she doesn't like how i cut it). does she really think her opinion on my haircut means anything to me?

is it like Guy's? :o :twisted:

abit gothic...kind of...

 

did you kill some girl of yours? :roll: ...ok lame joke...its the weather..

nice..where have you been?

 

:D Nah, nobody died, 2 ways you can look at it- death of life, any life, in general and how it affects us or death of us inside each day :(

yeah i write nice happy things dont i? :shock:

really this is probably the bleakist thing ive ever written, usually dont get this morose :P

 

wher've i been? working my ass off in uni! Almost done now, June 6 and then unemployment here i come :o

medicine seeks pain

wherever suffering is,

the remedy goes there.

 

( Rumi)

thats a good one

Hello, just stoping by to say hi! :P

Hey everybody!!!

 

Boy I can kill some of my relatives now...

One of my mother's sisters and her annoying, conceiting, condesending, hideous offspring decided to visit..and they too radded on my haircut..my dad both and bros and a sister and all mi amigos dig the hair cut..

my mother and her tribe called assholes says it looks like I haven't combed it in ages and its just all rolled up...oh blaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

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Well Greg at least you're alomost done..I have eons ahead of me..unless :idea: .. I marry rich :D ;)

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I went to my first Tai-chi class today I totally wrecked it for everyone..hehehe :twisted:

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Have you said your thirteen Hail Mary's and 7 Apostles' Creed's?

Did you confess your sexual fantasies to your Father in that little wooden box with all the fancy carvings?

Did you wash away your impurities with your bread dipped in red wine?

Have folded your white turban neatly to bow and pray to your Allah?

Did you read your daily paassage in the Koran to make a better person?

Has your monk blessed your cloth?

Did you write your prays on sacred cloth and tied it to a tree so that Budda can protect it?

Did you do your holy chanting while you meditated on your big cold river stone?

Have you read from the Daily Bread and the recomended portion of the Bible yet?

Did you share your Christian testimony to the lesbian sitting next to you on the bus?

Are you being a fisherman of men?

Have you handed out your Book of Mormon to the ghetto boys standing on the corner so you wont feel guitly when you go to bed at night?

Did surpress any sexual feelings for the girl that sits in front of you on Wesnesday night prayer meetings?

Have painted your face with chicken bllod and tossed pennies and rum to the Devil in the river?

Did you tune your drum for the Obiah Man to beat?

Did you remember to stick the pins in the dolls after every jolt to do your baby's father?

Have you cursed God yet?

Have you denied religion and swallowed down your non-believing?

Did you drown in tradition today?

Did you give up on spirituality yet?

Dont blame me if you come as a drop of piss in the next life!

Dont blame me if you lived your life revelling in sin to end up being judged by God!

Dont blame me if you found out that Buddha was an ordinary man with a catchy philosophy and cant do shit for you!

Dont blame me if Mary's statue doesnt cry or bleed for you!

Dont blame me if Allah forsakens you!

Dont blame me if after all that tracking handing out you did still give one a one way ticket to the firery pits of fucking Hell!

Dont blame me if science confuses you and loses you among gains of sand!

Dont blame me if your time runs out and no Supreme Being saves you!

woah thats amazing lois did u write that thats a stupid question course u did

man thats really deep

 

have u seen the poet guy again?

Don't ....

 

Don't pop your head in when you feel like it

I don't want to see you.

Don't do me any favors

to make you feel better.

Do I sound bitter?

Well I have been better.

Don't lie to me anymore

because I can lie to myself just fine.

Don't smile at me

because I don't want it.

Don't call me

because I will not answer.

Don't drive to see me

please just let me be.

Don't just be my friend

because I want more from you

than you will ever give.

 

~Holly

Loved your poem Holly...it just speaks for us all...

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Oui Dania..I spoke to him...and he said that his editor like most of the stuff but wants to meet with me to show some ways to polish up a few of them and he wants me to get into the habit of writing a poem a day and not just reply on spontaneity..but I dont think I can remember to do that...hehehe

 

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