Once upon a time i had the world at my feet,

Now my hopes and aspirations have accepted defeat.

As i sit on my own, i ask what am i here for?

I can hear a knock it's death at my door.

 

My friends and family no not how i feel,

It's laziness and stupidity that have been my achillis heel.

I ask myself what I can possibly do,

There is a way out, that i feel, must be true!

 

The one thing i have are memories and love,

This I will use to stave of the Grim Reapers glove.

While I'm alive theres so much I could achieve,

All i must do is in myself believe.

 

END OF TRANSMISSION

That reminds me of the posts this guy on the other forum used to post...*random*..its nice! :lol:

Ok i'll come clean "Faceless Freak" is me. I was scared to post this under my name, but now i fell why should i!?

Yeah, especially seeing as I dont know who you are anyway.

that poem could do with a whizzle through microsoft spelling and grammar check

that poem could do with a whizzle through microsoft spelling and grammar check

 

it is meant to be like that, as i am lazy and stupid, it is deep and the mistakes show that even though by the end of the poem, i feel better i am still the same as i was at the start.

ah ok, as you can tell I'm not a poem person but have a good grasp of the English language :P :-D

The way the words are spelt does not matter, it is the feelings and emotions potrayed that is the important thing.

*coughs up dictionary* :shock:

*coughs up dictionary* :shock:

 

Sinead O'Connor sang "Nothing Compares 2 U" did people pull her up about the way the title was written? No they listened to it and cried with her.

hey!!!

i read it on the other forum...its realy really wow :)

*hands Ian a tums* :D

*coughs up dictionary* :shock:

 

Sinead O'Connor sang "Nothing Compares 2 U" did people pull her up about the way the title was written? No they listened to it and cried with her.

 

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