^fractals!

 

:wacky:

should i spam my way to 10k?

Yes. :wacko:

i feel like talking in broken sentences. I poem is coming soon

Hello Bryceman.

hey rudy

Did you learn you dance bryce???:D

hey :nice:

Hey Bryce hope you feel better soon!:hug:

 

And I also hope we can talk one of this days I have no idea of what you've been doing lately :\

:escaping:

Did you learn you dance bryce???:D

Sort of. Its difficult/

 

Hey Bryce hope you feel better soon!:hug:

 

And I also hope we can talk one of this days I have no idea of what you've been doing lately :\

 

I hope we can talk as well.

 

In spaces above and beyond,

You are a twinkling tadpole in the pond

Ripples respond.

 

A dilated pixel amidst many others,

Born of light; made without mothers

Arise another.

 

Point by point the space divides,

A southern sky these stars reside

Omnipotent outside.

 

A piece of darkness disowned,

So crowded yet alone

Ultimate unknown.

 

Gas of hydrogen; liquid plasma ignite,

Speed into the vacuum; give us light

Nocturnal night.

 

Derive a trail through a darkened tone,

Shining star bring me home

 

Guide me safely Southern Cross

I am not losing, I am not lost.

 

I wrote this poem and i need idea on how to improve it, especial if any of the last lines in each stanza don't fit. Thanks guys. Its for my english class.

:thumbsup:

Good job, Bryce! :wideeyed:

In spaces above and beyond,

You are a twinkling tadpole in the pond

Ripples respond.

 

A dilated pixel amidst many others,

Born of light; made without mothers

Arise another.

 

Point by point the space divides,

A southern sky these stars reside

Omnipotent outside.

 

A piece of darkness disowned,

So crowded yet alone

Ultimate unknown.

 

Gas of hydrogen; liquid plasma ignite,

Speed into the vacuum; give us light

Nocturnal night.

 

Derive a trail through a darkened tone,

Shining star bring me home

 

Guide me safely Southern Cross

I am not losing, I am not lost.

 

I wrote this poem and i need idea on how to improve it, especial if any of the last lines in each stanza don't fit. Thanks guys. Its for my english class.

 

It's really great Bryce!:)

Bryce, I like your poem! :nice:

thanks guys

*****

5 stars!;)

thank you chuck. I haven't seen you in a while

hello :escaping:

Hey Bryce how's school? how's you?

he's sleeping now

right?!

but i just woke up. Ive got to get to 10k posts this morning