:love:Hey, if you could give me a song title with a first line of a love song that would be great.

 

It has to be one that Coldplay would use (Ex. Swallowed in the Sea, Fix You)

 

I am writing it about a girl :love:

Come on guys someone must have talent

Starcrossed

 

Tonight I look up at the stars, I wonder if you can see it too

thank you Malcom-Edge!!!! But more is appreciated

Starcrossed

 

Tonight I look up at the stars, I wonder if you can see it too

Across the night sky, it lights up the darkness

Burning bright, bright as my love for you

I close my eyes, hope I get some rest

 

Im thinking up a chorus right now

ok thank you!!!!!!!!

Others can think too!!!!!!!!!

hehehe malcolm may sue you when you get famous with his song haha

Others can think too!!!!!!!!!

 

That's such a HUGE imposition! :D

 

Maybe you need to tell your story first before you ask to suggest some lyrics so we'll have an idea what kind of lyrics you want. :)

Well my story isn't like Shiver (luckily):laugh3: but I don't now if she likes me!!!

Today we got (fake) married, and I danced with her at the dance twice!!!

 

So that's my story

Well my story isn't like Shiver (luckily):laugh3: but I don't now if she likes me!!!

Today we got (fake) married, and I danced with her at the dance twice!!!

 

So that's my story

 

awww that's mushy and you're such an honest guy... you're not ashamed of your feelings (unlike some guys trying to be manly -not attacking anyone here-)

hehehe malcolm may sue you when you get famous with his song haha

 

I may have to sign him to my label. Look for the mixtape this summer!

 

Starcrossed

 

Tonight I look up at the stars, I wonder if you can see it too

Across the night sky, it lights up the darkness

Burning bright, bright as my love for you

I close my eyes, hope I get some rest

 

As I lie here looking at the stars I lose myself

Where ever I am, that beautiful smile

reminds me, the power of my love itself

I close my eyes, does off for awhile

 

There we go. Chorus still escaping me. Im writing this with the love of my life in my mind.

such strange requests people do :lol: