well, the person i sent it to also writes slash fiction, so i think she might be a bit more understanding than other people. :P

Oh, if anyone in my school read my Druids epic, they'd be like, "WTF this sux im gonna twitter lol kthxbai" :embarassed:

yeah, kyra, when are we gonna get a new chapter? :wideeyed:

 

 

 

also, one of my real-life friends is going to read some of my stories... :uhoh::embarassed:

 

 

Let us know what she says about your stories.;)

 

P.S. Kyraaaaa...........Spring and Winter is going to turn into Summer and Fall before we get another chapter.:laugh3::laugh3::laugh3::laugh3:

Brilliant Disguise- i love how ridiculously childish Jonny and Chris are. :laugh3:

Brilliant Disguise--- :facepalm: They need to grow up for a second here! :lol: Guy is the only innnocent one! :laugh3:

Let us know what she says about your stories.;)

 

my friend: "I read the first seven or so bits of 'Scandalous'."

 

me: ":O ... was it horrible? *self-deprecating*"

 

my friend: "It was not! Sheesh. I know my writing skills are intimidating, but HONESTLY, BROOKE."

 

:rolleyes:

^ AAhhh.....Scandalous.......(experiences fond memories of reading it)

That was a great one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Goes off to read it again.....

Let us know what she says about your stories.;)

 

P.S. Kyraaaaa...........Spring and Winter is going to turn into Summer and Fall before we get another chapter.:laugh3::laugh3::laugh3::laugh3:

 

Ahahaha...:laugh3: Good one! It will be soon, Ju/Brooke/Dianna. We have a long weekend coming up tomorrow.

 

And by the way, Di...

 

"They are so big they make you look like some kind of deformed insect," he told Chris.

 

That line made me laugh so suddenly that I nearly choked on the KitKat bar I was eating. :laugh3:

oh my gosh ALL new updates are INSANELY good!!!!!!!! :freak::D:D:D:D:clap::clap:

Brilliant Disguise is birlliant, I love how bitchy they all are, HAHA! And yes, that line "They are so big they make you look like some kind of deformed insect," he told Chris. got me too! :laugh3:

That letter was kind of sad... Poor Chris:( I hope Jonny makes him feel better with a letter of his own. Good work!

 

 

Brilliant Disguise - :laugh3::laugh3::laugh3: I couldn't stop laughing the entire time! Brilliant indeed! Great job with this story, I loved it! Oh, and there's a song that goes really well with this story: Lily Allen's F*ck You :D

that last chapter of brilliant disguise was great!!!! :lol::D:D:clap:

Ju--I LOVE THAT SONG

 

F*** you

F*** you very mu-u-uch

^:lol: I know, this week I've been singing that a lot and it's really catchy! My friends loved it too :D

Dianna--:stunned: IT'S TRUE! I KNEW IT! GUY IS A ROBOT! My theories are true!

:stunned: the machine is INSANELY good!!!!!!!

Oh no...Not the old Guy-is-a-robot thing! :uhoh2: Don't let the hardcore Berrygirls see that story. They will be so pissed off.

 

Edit: But I think it's quite good.

^ Yep....I was aware of their possible fury when I wrote it.:\

But....he doesn't act quite like a robot....you'll see.;)

He is very "human."

 

And I am glad that you like it.:)

 

Edit: Do any hardcore Berrygirls even read this thread???

Well, this is just meant to be fictionalized stuff so there is room for crazy ideas, in particular when they're good. And this story shows a sweet side of him! I loved all these chapters so far!

What about when they're portrayed as superheroes? It's good material and we all know it's just that: fiction. So, I say we embrace it! It's not meant to offend anyone :)

^Don't worry, I know. :P

 

^ Yep....I was aware of their possible fury when I wrote it.:\

But....he doesn't act quite like a robot....you'll see.;)

He is very "human."

 

And I am glad that you like it.:)

 

Edit: Do any hardcore Berrygirls even read this thread???

 

Well...probably not now. But Liz used to.

Or when hardcore Jonnygirls read about poor Jonny kidnapped by Druids and tortured by sheep?

 

I love imaginative fanfiction, really I do.

Oooh, Spring & Winter.... :wideeyed: :wideeyed: When are you going to post the next chapter, Kyra?

 

 

Sorry for being such a pain in the behind :P But I love this story!

I am going to continue writing it right now, since I have nothing else to do. :D

 

 

 

...:wideeyed:

Hey you guys! I love all of the new stories! I especially loved Brilliant Disguise! Aw, heck, I loved them all. :wacky: I'm so sorry I haven't updated. I'm moving and things are kind of crazy. I'll try to get a chapter posted soon. :heart:

Seperation, Communication, and Devestation- "COMING TO ARREST ME ON MULTIPLE COUNTS OF UNFABULOUSNESS?!" :lol:

this is great so far! :D

Brilliant Disguise- :lol: what a great ending.

The Machine- OH MY GOD. dianna, i love you. seriously, this story is amazing. :laugh3: i can't wait for the next part! :heart::heart::wacky: