Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 What the...? I was just about to post the same thing... :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaMartin Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Great minds think alike! ... And so do ours, apparently... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaMartin Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 :laugh3: hahaha yes. Apparently they do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 :D :dance: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaMartin Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Well kids, it's way past my bedtime so talk to you again soon! Btw you never answered my question Keaton........ haha It's fine :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 So long! Fair well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Almost done with this poem...it's starting to look like a song. I'm definitely using it as a song too. :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Okay...All the verese's are near complete. I feel the chorus is missing something. This song was inspired by Viva La Vida. I'm also using it for my english project for One Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest. Oh life I love Always living but never forgiving It's just another day in the life In this prison I'm singing One day I'll hold the key And everyone will see What I used to be No more stars over the sky tonight It was the spark waiting to ignite Now listen as they chant In queue as they try to break through The king will be overthrown During the dark and bloody coup Sticks and stones may break my bones But never again will I lose my throne It's just another battle in a war That I know isn't worth fighting for Words like pollution to their ears While they sleep We bask in their fears As they walk down the halls Poisoned and trapped within their walls One day we'll reach the end of the road And see that it's paved with gold Sticks and stones may break my bones But never again will I lose my throne It's just another battle in a war That I know isn't worth fighting for Sticks and stones may break my bones But never again will I lose my throne It's just another battle in a war That I know isn't worth fighting for edit:8:39 P.M. Okay..I tweaked it a bit, still don't have a name for it though... Oh life I love Always living 'n never forgiving It's another day in the life In this prison I'm singing One day I'll hold the key And everyone will see What I used to be/What it's like to be free No more stars over the sky tonight I'm only waiting for the spark to ignite Now listen as they break on through The king will be overthrown In a dark and bloody coup Singing Sticks and stones may break my bones But never again will I lose my throne It's another battle in a raging war A war that I know isn't worth fighting for Words like pollution to their ears While they sleep We bask in their fears As they walk down the halls Poisoned and trapped within their walls One day we'll reach the end of the road And see that it's paved with gold Singing Sticks and stones may break my bones But never again will I lose my throne It's another battle in a raging war A war that I know isn't worth fighting for Singing Sticks and stones may break my bones But never again will I lose my throne It's another battle in a raging war A war that I know isn't worth fighting for Can you guys help me come up with song titles for this song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Wow, it's really great! :D I'm not that good with naming songs or poems, which is why all my poems are untitled. But if I think of something, I'll let you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Well your a great poet Troxley! You should be a poet and get paid for it! :D Just came up with a guitar part for the song. But I couldn't play it to the full extent because my dad is working from home today so I couldn't play my guitar very loud. :lol: I think after the second chorus I'll add some Ooooohhhhhhhwaaaooohhhh's. :p unless that's copying...then I won't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 aww, thank you, Keaton! I don't think that's copying if you don't make it sound the same. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Oh I'll try not to! :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Hehe! :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 I'm hanging up the mask and web shooters for today and putting on a suit and guitar. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Chris! Nice!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Yeah! :lol: I have to go to school in 30 minutes....oh fudge...get it fudge..Because during X-Mas time you eat fudge? :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 :lol: :laugh3: :rolleyes4: Hahahaha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Oh god my jokes aren't punny at all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Oh Keaton, you're killing me. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 I'm sorry...I had to :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Haha! Well, I think I should get to bed now. See ya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 Bye Troxley! Good seeing ya! :nice: Goodbye and good night Laurel. Off to school now. :escaping: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mollyxyloto Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 I used to rule the world Seas would rise when I gave the word Now in the morning I sleep alone Sweep the streets I used to own I used to roll the dice Feel the fear in my enemy’s eyes Listened as the crowd would sing "Now the old king is dead, long live the king" One minute I held the key Next the walls were closed on me And I discovered that my castles stand Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing Roman cavalry choirs are singing Be my mirror my sword and shield Missionaries in a foreign field For some reason I can't explain Once you'd gone there was never Never an honest word And that was when I ruled the world It was a wicked and wild wind Blew down the doors to let me in Shattered windows and the sound of drums People couldn’t believe what I’d become Revolutionaries wait For my head on a silver plate Just a puppet on a lonely string Oh who would ever want to be king? I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing Roman cavalry choirs are singing Be my mirror my sword and shield My missionaries in a foreign field For some reason I can’t explain I know Saint Peter won't call my name Never an honest word But that was when I ruled the world Hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing Roman cavalry choirs are singing Be my mirror my sword and shield My missionaries in a foreign field For some reason I can’t explain I know St Peter won't call my name Never an honest word But that was when I ruled the world This is all I've been listening to since last night. This song is the story of my life. No joke. :nod: THIS. Hi guys :) :hug: Howre you all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Troxley Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 I don't feel quite so tired anymore, so I've decided to get back on. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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