What the...? I was just about to post the same thing...

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Great minds think alike!

 

 

... And so do ours, apparently...

:laugh3: hahaha yes. Apparently they do.

:D

 

:dance:

Well kids, it's way past my bedtime so talk to you again soon!

 

Btw you never answered my question Keaton........ haha It's fine :wink:

So long! Fair well!

Almost done with this poem...it's starting to look like a song. I'm definitely using it as a song too. :p

Okay...All the verese's are near complete. I feel the chorus is missing something. This song was inspired by Viva La Vida. I'm also using it for my english project for One Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest.

 

Oh life I love

Always living but never forgiving

It's just another day in the life

In this prison I'm singing

One day I'll hold the key

And everyone will see

What I used to be

 

No more stars over the sky tonight

It was the spark waiting to ignite

Now listen as they chant

In queue as they try to break through

The king will be overthrown

During the dark and bloody coup

 

Sticks and stones may break my bones

But never again will I lose my throne

It's just another battle in a war

That I know isn't worth fighting for

 

Words like pollution to their ears

While they sleep

We bask in their fears

As they walk down the halls

Poisoned and trapped within their walls

One day we'll reach the end of the road

And see that it's paved with gold

 

Sticks and stones may break my bones

But never again will I lose my throne

It's just another battle in a war

That I know isn't worth fighting for

 

Sticks and stones may break my bones

But never again will I lose my throne

It's just another battle in a war

That I know isn't worth fighting for

 

edit:8:39 P.M.

 

Okay..I tweaked it a bit, still don't have a name for it though...

 

Oh life I love

Always living 'n never forgiving

It's another day in the life

In this prison I'm singing

One day I'll hold the key

And everyone will see

What I used to be/What it's like to be free

 

No more stars over the sky tonight

I'm only waiting for the spark to ignite

Now listen as they break on through

The king will be overthrown

In a dark and bloody coup

 

Singing

Sticks and stones may break my bones

But never again will I lose my throne

It's another battle in a raging war

A war that I know isn't worth fighting for

 

Words like pollution to their ears

While they sleep

We bask in their fears

As they walk down the halls

Poisoned and trapped within their walls

One day we'll reach the end of the road

And see that it's paved with gold

 

Singing

Sticks and stones may break my bones

But never again will I lose my throne

It's another battle in a raging war

A war that I know isn't worth fighting for

 

Singing

Sticks and stones may break my bones

But never again will I lose my throne

It's another battle in a raging war

A war that I know isn't worth fighting for

 

Can you guys help me come up with song titles for this song?

Wow, it's really great! :D

I'm not that good with naming songs or poems, which is why all my poems are untitled. But if I think of something, I'll let you know.

Well your a great poet Troxley! You should be a poet and get paid for it! :D

 

Just came up with a guitar part for the song. But I couldn't play it to the full extent because my dad is working from home today so I couldn't play my guitar very loud. :lol: I think after the second chorus I'll add some Ooooohhhhhhhwaaaooohhhh's. :p unless that's copying...then I won't

aww, thank you, Keaton!

 

 

I don't think that's copying if you don't make it sound the same. :D

Oh I'll try not to! :lol:

Hehe!

 

:lol:

I'm hanging up the mask and web shooters for today and putting on a suit and guitar. :lol:

Chris! Nice!!!

Yeah! :lol:

 

I have to go to school in 30 minutes....oh fudge...get it fudge..Because during X-Mas time you eat fudge? :rolleyes:

:lol: :laugh3: :rolleyes4:

 

Hahahaha!

Oh god my jokes aren't punny at all...

Oh Keaton, you're killing me. :P

I'm sorry...I had to :P

Haha! Well, I think I should get to bed now. See ya!

Bye Troxley! Good seeing ya! :nice:

 

Goodbye and good night Laurel.

 

Off to school now. :escaping:

I used to rule the world

Seas would rise when I gave the word

Now in the morning I sleep alone

Sweep the streets I used to own

 

I used to roll the dice

Feel the fear in my enemy’s eyes

Listened as the crowd would sing

"Now the old king is dead, long live the king"

One minute I held the key

Next the walls were closed on me

And I discovered that my castles stand

Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand

 

I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing

Roman cavalry choirs are singing

Be my mirror my sword and shield

Missionaries in a foreign field

For some reason I can't explain

Once you'd gone there was never

Never an honest word

And that was when I ruled the world

 

It was a wicked and wild wind

Blew down the doors to let me in

Shattered windows and the sound of drums

People couldn’t believe what I’d become

Revolutionaries wait

For my head on a silver plate

Just a puppet on a lonely string

Oh who would ever want to be king?

 

I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing

Roman cavalry choirs are singing

Be my mirror my sword and shield

My missionaries in a foreign field

For some reason I can’t explain

I know Saint Peter won't call my name

Never an honest word

But that was when I ruled the world

 

Hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing

Roman cavalry choirs are singing

Be my mirror my sword and shield

My missionaries in a foreign field

For some reason I can’t explain

I know St Peter won't call my name

Never an honest word

But that was when I ruled the world

 

This is all I've been listening to since last night. This song is the story of my life. No joke.

 

:nod: THIS.

 

 

 

 

Hi guys :) :hug: Howre you all?

I don't feel quite so tired anymore, so I've decided to get back on. :P