Song I just wrote called Take it (Survive)

[Kingzilla]

I was bored and I'm a poet:D so I decided to attempt to make a song. The titles looks like some Muse song, but I'm hardly a musician (I can play the Scientist, Trouble, Clocks, Viva on the piano).

 

I guess this would start with some soft minor chords being played in the beginning, setting the tone. As the songs get angrier, the piano gets louder, and by the chorus, it's getting pounded. At the third verse, the drums would set in (I'm dreaming now:P) and then at the outro, everything goes nuts (Kind of like a twisted Fix you or Amsterdam)

 

Anyways, it's hardly that good, but here it is. (Lyrics in pathesis are vocal sung, almost spoke, in a dreamy in the background voice)

 

Take it (Survive)

 

#1

If you wanted, you could save me today

Or just let me fade away

(Fade away)

Fade away into something more

(Just fading)

Better than the boy before

You thought you could trick me into dying

(I’m already dead)

But instead I caught you lying

(Or was that me?)

You tried to make me fade away

Fade away

But instead I’m here to stay

(Things change)

 

#2

You’d trade me like some property

(That’s me, That’s me)

Like you owned a monopoly

(On me, On me)

But I’m afraid you don’t know the policy

For people who have no possibility

Of shame

You are nothing

Laying in the filth of a perverted ideal

How many innocent lives can you steal?

It doesn’t matter though

Because when you’re just so damn low

It just makes me want to let go

 

(Chorus)

Take it

Take it from me

I don’t care anymore

My life is gone

My life is done

No light at the end of the tunnel

Only darkness and regret

That I didn’t see you for who you really are

Just take it

I giving it to you

For free

(I just don’t believe)

In the future, it’s gone

Take it

My life

It’s done

 

#3

The door swings open and a shadow reaches out for me

I just want to see

(Once more before the storm)

The storm is here

It’s here, try not to fear

Wraps me in a sheet of pain

There is no train

(No train)

Just here to take me away

From this misery, but it’s starting to kill my memories

Of a normal life

I beg you sir, I did my job, please show me it again

 

(Chorus)

Take it

Take it from me

I don’t care anymore

My life is gone

My life is done

No light at the end of the tunnel

Only darkness and regret

That I didn’t see you for who you really are

Just take it

I giving it to you

For free

(I just don’t believe)

In the future, it’s gone

Take it

My life

It’s done

 

(Outro)

But not for long, cause when I saw your face, I knew

There was something out there for me to

Live for

(Die for)

Survive

Survive

Survive

To live

(To die)

Doesn’t matter anymore

Just try to survive

Survive

Don't die

Survive

[Lodder]

Looks great!