Come, come, people!

 

Show off your talents!

 

Broken Doll, I'm expecting you to post like a mushroom. :) And Sid, show us your stuff. And Ari, dear. You too. ;)

i posted a lot on ari's poetry and bea's poetry threads... i'm proud of most of them..

Oh. Oops. I'd better have a look. :lol:

I write both those things.

 

Should I post a song Ive written like, to listen to? Or just the lyrics?

 

Cuz I dont know how to do the first one.

The lyrics. Cuz I don't think the first one is possible here unless you send a link... You write songs too Reilly? Cool. :) :cool:

Yep. I have been since like 7 years ago, so Ive developed a style of some sort. :snore:

Come, come child. Post! :)

Hmm I doubt I have any of them on my computer.

 

Sorry. If I'll bother, soon I'll type one up.

 

OR it would be easier to scan a page ;)

omgosh im wayy too shy to post anyfing...maybe I should post the song that goes wiff my name haw haw.

 

Broken Doll

 

Verse 1:

Beautiful baby, you mean so much to me,

Your silky smooth features on your porcelain body.

Imagine if I were to fracture it, what would you do?

Would you start to weep hysterically, or let me continue?

 

If you could tell me how you feel, instead of looking so dead,

Would you spill out all those thoughts running through your head?

Would you share secrets, and tell me how you feel,

And let me hold you as if you were real?

 

Why do your eyes simply stare at nothing?

It seems like you are concentrating so tenderly at something.

It is terribly creepy why you just stand there, tall,

But you cannot answer any of these questions,

Because you are simply my dreadful doll.

 

Chorus:

Sickening eyes, and a pale face,

Cause me to break you, and your case,

With glass shards everywhere, breaking your fall,

Make you my beautiful,

Broken doll.

 

Verse 2:

Beautiful baby, you still mean so much to me,

Looking at your broken face does not even hurt me.

I had to let go of you, I'm sorry, we're through,

It took me all my guts to get rid of you.

 

Even if you are in pieces, you're still in my heart,

But I'm sorry, it's over, now we have to part.

Please don't start crying, I can feel your pain,

I love you, my sweet one, but I can't bear to see you again.

 

Do you understand what's happening, or must I explain?

I love you, my dear one, but I'm in so much pain,

The way you suddenly hovered over me, standing quite tall,

Made me hurt you, and therefore became my,

Broken doll.

 

Chorus

 

*Tune: london bridge is falling down*

(I have one of these two parts, but I don't know which one to leave in this song..)

 

Part 1:

Out of all those beautiful dolls,

You were the one I chose,

And now you are a wretched doll,

With a broken body and torn clothes.

 

OR

 

Part 2:

You are my broken doll, broken doll, broken doll,

You are my broken doll, with tears as red as blood.

I'll take your pieces and lock them up, lock them up, lock them up,

I'll take your pieces and lock them up, my broken one.

 

 

and maybe a site wiff SOME of my lyrics that are very crappy ah fank you.

 

http://geocities.com/floofy_earsz/mysongspoems.html

This is called Never Be Forgotten. I wrote it after I broke up with my first love.

 

[Verse One]

 

And so i lie here without you

never thought I'd come this far

many people by my side

and you're so far away

Are we a distant memory now?

i'd like to keep them for a while

and so i lie here without you

haunted by your sweet soft smile

 

[Chorus]

 

You'll never be forgotten by me, no

and I hope I'm in your thoughts

it's been a while since I could smile

 

[Verse Two]

 

Cold these mornings have become

but I've learnt to take my time

it's so hard ot break the cycle

should i just move away?

See you sitting in the corner

you look then shy away

never thought i come this far

since our last Sunday

 

[Extended Chorus]

 

And you'll never be forgotten by me

and I hope I'm in your thoughts

It's been a while since I could smile

You'll never be forgotten by me

and I know I'm in your thoughts

It's been a while since I could smile

Since I could smile... Since that smile

 

[instrumental]

 

[Outro]

 

And so I lie here without you

never thought I'd come this far...

Me thinks broken doll's being all humble and modest... cuz her stuff ain't crap at all! I like Escape with Me! and Moonshine! Oh I can;t decide.... What are the tunes like? If you could put it in words, describe em.

lmao humble and modest :lol: i like that. I'm humble and modest. thats the first time anyone said that :P well I haven't thought up tunes to them, but they're more dark gloomy electronic/gothic tunes....

Ah. Very nice. Can't wait for Reilly to post his song. Hear that, Reilly? I'll be waiting... :sneaky:

..so will I! :P

If I even bother to! :)

 

It'll only happen if my scanner works, and then you'll have to read it through my awful handwriting :wink3:

 

Nice tunes Gwendolyne :cool:

why fank you Micael :P

Aw come on, Reilly. pwetty pwease! :kiss: You know you want to...

Ahhhh tomorw Pai, I cant be arsed sorting out my scanner. I equally cant be arsed typing up one of my songs.

Oh yay! You rock. :kiss:

*Rocks* :P

you suckkkkk

 

I joke i joke. :P

I might try and post a j-peg of my picasso/cubism inspired piece of art i did for my exams last year....

My poem (...that has been put in a book yay) Thanks to forwardpress.co.uk :)

 

 

And as the man stood he did all he could to remain there

Hands bear in front of their eyes, no weapon, disguise, just lies

Terrified

 

A note torn, weathered and blind made the dear man cry

Ended “…I’m sorry, goodbye”

 

She was the one, second left finger now bare. Who wrote the words there?

Silently left and forgot she should care

 

And here he is now as he stands on his own

Dubious, hands bear…alone.

you take me away, to that place i\'ve never been before

you hold my hand and show me what it is i\'m fighting for

i know when i lokk into your eyes you\'re telling me the truth,

there\'s something about the way you put yourself into my shoes

 

you try to kiss me but i\'m pushing you away,

cos i don\'t wanna lose you all over again.....

 

it\'s my life, my life, and in my life there aint gonna be a better day,

so look forward to the future, don\'t keep lookin throught the rainy haze,

oh darlin\' you know why i\'m tellin you straight,

i just wanna open more gates...for you to be with me and

 

© eve, i can be your adam,

cos i don\'t understand him and i wanna take you to that place,

that place where the sky is shining red and you won\'t have him and we\'re

lying here in our place....

A song I wrote on my frustration about various things going on in my life:

 

Calm Down

 

Verse 1

When the light

When the light has gone away

And there's no sign of yesterday

Won't you just let it be?

 

Verse 2

I don't need to calm down

I don't need to smile

Won't you just let it be?

 

Chorus

If this is all it takes to lose your mind

Then won't you take it easy for a while?

 

Verse 3

If this is all you're good for

Then you're no good for me

Won't you just let me be?

 

Verse 4

If you can't make up your own mind

Then you won't make mine as well

Won't you just let me be?

 

Chorus

This is all it takes to lose your mind

So won't you take it easy for a while?

 

Solo

 

Chorus

You tried it once but now you've lost your mind

You tried it once but now you've lost your mind

If is all it takes to lose your mind

Then won't you take it easy for a while?