niiiiice poems...God knows I've missed you :)

thx miro:P...how are u doing?:)

this came out yesterday night while I was writing my diary:)

 

 

At the end of a day

what is anger, fear, or pain?

you can look back what has been

But there´s no way you can come out clean

 

you could try and forget

what you´ve done, what you ate, who you met

But you´ll never get the chance

to repair it a 100%

 

Are you sad?

Do you feel sorry?

Just don´t worry!

you can try again tomorrow

Don´t feed yourself with sorrow

You´ll get another chance tomorrow

 

At the end of a story

what is pride, sadness or glory?

you can fall down to your knees

or call back and scream please!

 

You could fight and pretend

you´re love hasn´t come to an end

but you never have to play

and think it´s much better go away

 

Are you mad?

Are you really sorry?

Just don´t worry

You can try again tomorrow

Don´t feed yourself with sorrow

You´ll get another chance tomorrow

 

Don´t feel sorry for what you did

Be happy you can live

avoid mistakes, take right decisions

End a day with fair conclusions

great poems mike and giuly ;) is always a pleasure to read them. :)

^thank bea:)

Great job! Like your poems...

Great job! Like your poems...

 

thanks:)

No probs. :D. I wrote the poem about yesterday but I think there's no relation about the title that I think about.... I wanna post it but I'm afraid it will be so wrong for the meanings in each word...:confused:

^well I wouldn´t care about it..I mean if it´s what you felt at that moment there will be nothing wrong with it...:)

and btw you can always change the title:P:P

My latest poem ... for someone special :(

Inspired by Arcade Fire's Haiti.

 

 

Threw My Ashes into the Sea

 

Though just a memory now,

I am alive and I can fly

As a happy second that is about to die.

 

It is you who made me

And it is you who should do it.

Hold my hand, hold it tightly

And keep your eyes upon the road.

 

I want to stare

At your lips until

It gets dark,

So dark we cannot see.

 

Walk, my Love, walk

Walk till you can

Walk no more.

There will be a place.

 

Hold my hand,

Look at my soul,

I cannot help but shiver.

 

There's only one step

One step I need to make

To feel your skin.

 

Walk, my Only One,

Walk the road of memories

Be strong -

 

- there is a place

Where you will set me free.

 

Though just a memory now,

My life doesn't seem bad.

Wiping your tears

And intertwining with your scent.

 

Highways, miles,

Roads, metres,

Tears, smiles,

Laughters, teasings,

Subtle kiss, warm hug.

 

Your sweat

why-not

well...

 

It's time

This is the place.

I've fallen in love,

Now throw my

Ashes into the sea.

Oooh.. So sweet, very touching:)

Oooh.. So sweet, very touching:)

 

Thank you :)

hey Miro it's beautiful !!

love it!

:thumbsup:

hey Miro it's beautiful !!

love it!

:thumbsup:

 

:blush:

 

That's too kind.

Thank you!

^very nice miro really:):)

^very nice miro really:):)

 

Yes, danke schon :blush: :blush: :blush:

My latest poem ... for someone special :(

Inspired by Arcade Fire's Haiti.

 

 

Threw My Ashes into the Sea

 

Though just a memory now,

I am alive and I can fly

As a happy second that is about to die.

 

It is you who made me

And it is you who should do it.

Hold my hand, hold it tightly

And keep your eyes upon the road.

 

I want to stare

At your lips until

It gets dark,

So dark we cannot see.

 

Walk, my Love, walk

Walk till you can

Walk no more.

There will be a place.

 

Hold my hand,

Look at my soul,

I cannot help but shiver.

 

There's only one step

One step I need to make

To feel your skin.

 

Walk, my Only One,

Walk the road of memories

Be strong -

 

- there is a place

Where you will set me free.

 

Though just a memory now,

My life doesn't seem bad.

Wiping your tears

And intertwining with your scent.

 

Highways, miles,

Roads, metres,

Tears, smiles,

Laughters, teasings,

Subtle kiss, warm hug.

 

Your sweat

why-not

well...

 

It's time

This is the place.

I've fallen in love,

Now throw my

Ashes into the sea.

 

:bigcry: :bigcry:

 

I love it so much!

:bigcry: :bigcry:

 

I love it so much!

 

I know you do, thank you :)

Peoples are cried I think when They see your poem Miro.... Just maybe:P, but honestly its really touching that was I said you before... Teach me how to make a poem, please?:P

Peoples are cried I think when They see your poem Miro.... Just maybe:P, but honestly its really touching that was I said you before... Teach me how to make a poem, please?:P

 

lol.

Well, there is a saying that art is supposed to evoke some emotions. :D

 

Anyways, I am not the right person to be teaching ppl about how to write poems. I am not an expert. Yet :lol:

Haha :lol: ok it's alright

Haha :lol: ok it's alright

 

I think it's more natural to write in your mother language.

But if you have enough confidence in your knowledge of English - don't be afraid, and write what's on your mind.

You gotta start somewhere, right?

I think it's more natural to write in your mother language.

But if you have enough confidence in your knowledge of English - don't be afraid, and write what's on your mind.

You gotta start somewhere, right?

 

Yeah. How'd you know that I'm afraid... I always get phobia if something wrong from me.....

Yeah. How'd you know that I'm afraid... I always get phobia if something wrong from me.....

 

 

Well, don't get this too personal but it mostly is that way.

People feel way too closed up.

 

You just need to relax; feel it a bit. :wink:

Oh right;)