Best u Can Posted August 21, 2005 Share Posted August 21, 2005 Post your stuff in here. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted August 21, 2005 Author Share Posted August 21, 2005 Something I wrote earlier. Body coming towards, towards, towards and stop. he's standing. I dream of your body closely, closely I dream of your body you're trapped with me you're standing, standing why am I waiting? you're standing, standing send me your love, send me your will I need motivation ohhahhmmm I've been falling further and further from your almighty presence lift me back up to the glorious heaven there is no word to describe this confusion have you heard, have you heard have you heard my confusion I dream of your body, closely, closely I dream of your body you're standing, standing and I am watching so come here closer wake up my body 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*andrea* Posted August 21, 2005 Share Posted August 21, 2005 ^nice! im afraid im not good writting poems :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*andrea* Posted August 21, 2005 Share Posted August 21, 2005 ^nice! im afraid im not good writting poems :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted August 21, 2005 Author Share Posted August 21, 2005 the more you try the better you'll get at it :) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingtoseehere Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 AUTUMN The afternoon is hazy Like memories long and lost The sun drifts by, it’s lazy And it melts down my cold frost. What happened to those other days When everything was warm When everything was touched by rays Of light at summer’s dawn? What happened to those other days When everything was right? Now everything’s lost in a maze It’s dark, there is no light. Now evening has just arrived It settles in my head This heavy heart of mine’s deprived It’s hanging by a thread. My midnight fades into my sky What will happen in the day? Promise that you’ll come back and try And never go away. Promise that you’ll come back and try And say you’ll always stay. Promise that you’ll come back and try And I will be okay. 11/8/05 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 Oh I wrote so many poems.One is four pages long and it's about a friendship! :smug: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Here are some of my poems. I'm told i am gifted Shadow You I am a shadow I blend into the dark Underneath the tall tree In Glenville park Just a little shadow Glance of a shade Sneaking up behind you Glint of a blade When it’s too late Stab you in the back When it’s too late Blood you will lack I am the love that you left behind When you cast her out of your life Memories you still have of her Holding a very sharp knife I am an echo A sound misheard Suddenly you stop Your memories stirred Just a little shadow Mirror of you I get my revenge It’s over too soon Reflection you notice Inside your own heart Never quite knowing Just where to start I am the love that you left behind When you cast her out of your life Memories you still have of her Holding a very sharp knife I am an echo Heard in a chasm Lost name-calling A sound you imagine Just a little shadow A shadow of you A feeling awakened You tried to loose I am the part That you threw away A piece of you That could not stay Its time to stop lying. Time to come clean You hid it well, where no one could have seen You still love her; she’s deep in your dreams She’s deep in your dreams She’s deep in your dreams She’s deep in your dreams She’s deep in your dreams She’s deep in your dreams Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 And so the wind blow’s And so the wind blow’s. I don’t know why it does so. Trying to work out where I belong . Waiting there in the snow. No one will ever see. The way it’s been for me. When the skies clear. My destination’s near. Trying to spot where my home’s gone Looking for my mother I will never see her again Whils’t I stay her friend. Dont pick me up. Dont swirl me around. Dont throw me to the air I dont want to be there I dont want to be there Never want to be there Up in the sky, on a tall rock way up high Looking into the depths of the sea Stood the master of the sea and the king of the air Waiting to rescue me The master of the sea bore me into the night The king of the air blew me to the southern sky I fell on the back of a huge bird in flight To be brought back to life with a sudden fright Dont pick me up. Dont swirl me around. Dont throw me to the air I dont want to be there I dont want to be there Never want to be there None of this matter’s ill see mum again I’ll just learn to not be her friend I must forget the king of the air To not believe in gods from the sea Make sure I land on my own 2 feet To look out for my own safety. __________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Winter Winters the worst time of the year Frost takes a grip he wont let go Trees and plants left dying outside Through a window you can see snow The rain will strike with vengeance The ice-cold wind will blow and blow Summers gone away forever As far as we all know When will winter fade away How long till jack frost let's go Bring to life a re-born springtime Allow new things a chance to grow Winter hasn’t ended yet The crops are ruined were all upset Te must be the ice kings mischief I wouldn’t hazard a bet The second week of spring is hear Winter wont release its hold The ice king gets stronger and stronger Only he would be so bold Winter starts to go away Late does come the new day Winter finally dies at last The sun breaks through in a blast With a new day the sun will rise Spring arrives with a surprise And plants outside begin to grow T’ is a new season don’t you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Justify? I want to see in the shadow Of the past’s burning arrow And see through the lie In the wicker-man’s eyes But no one will let me They’re scared of what I’ll find I want to look at a boy As he falls to the floor And the last dying thought A question what he died for? But the truth is concealed Never to be revealed I want to look in the head Of a soldier at war And try to work out Why he goes for more They keep it a secret They hide it for sure I want to look to the past And stare at the void To try and work out Why earth is annoyed But the way is blocked The door is locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 The frost breaks and the cold is no more Spring is here like never before Life is knocking at the door Fun times wait to be sure When the plants begin to bloom There is no more winter’s doom No more waiting in a room When the sun begins to loom On water’s edge the sun shines People feeling really fine No more frost in which to bind Outside the bees begin to dine People playing in the sun People having lots of fun Then when the day is done Sleep after you have run With the heat you get a flush And a certain sense of rush The grass is looking really lush Ice already turned to mush I see a yellow flower I see a silver tower I see a blue shower Falling to the ground Cause of a Haze Of water all around Cause of a Haze Of water all around The suns heat abounds The suns heat abounds The suns heat abounds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Softly she whispers to herself Don’t want to let the wolfs in Softly she whispers to herself No more nassssty sins Softly she whispers to herself Put the ghost back on the shelf Softly she whispers to herself Let me go let me go let me go But no one is listening And when her dad comes round. Shes no where to be found When her dad comes round She is never there Softly she whispers to herself Lock the door now lock the door Softly she whispers to herself Hide if theres a bang Softly she whispers to herself Don’t want to be found Softly she whispers to herself No more sinful bounds No more sinful bounds No more sinful bounds And when her dad comes round. Shes no where to be found When her dad comes round She is never there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 My centrepiece. Soldiers story Sail away ship, sail away Take my heart away from me Into the distant sea to rest with Felicities So many ships went today So many men looked like me, full of sorrow and misery As we look back to see Our souls that lie distantly The war began today Just thought I would say, I may be dead tommorow Or possibly the next day, So I tell you this today As the enemy come Their fate will be done Their deaths are at hand They wont leave this land Their blood soak’s our sands They dare to attack once more. We look to those that came before And cast our eyes to distant shores. We know we will never die Not when our hearts still lie Far away we wish to fly The war ended today. I could have told you tommorow Or maybe the next day. I tell you now in hopes that soon I can kiss you under the moon Set sail my love set sail. Make haste though you have far to go. The reason’s which your bound to know. Oneday soon you will reach home When you go remember dear You might forget my heart I fear I miss my heart like I miss you. All those lovely things you do When you’re here we’ll sail once more To cleaner land’s and freasher shore’s Then maybe you will never see The horrors that befell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Self-Delusional I’d like to stop and stay But I had to go away Perhaps someday you’ll see The things you do to me I could never be what you wanted I’m just an image you hunted Now can you see you finally lost it? A vision you made to hide the pain inside… A vision you made to hide the pain This is your face And this is your race This is the place Where you lost your mind What you want to find I could never be what you wanted I’m just an image you hunted Now can you see you finally lost it? A vision you made to hide the pain inside… A vision you made to hide the pain With the memories of trees And the waves of the seas Over many burning sands And over grizzled lands Past mountains so old And rivers so cold… You will run the race you been trying to run Though never have you been so bold Now your story has been told You start to see the truth unfold You realise your soul is sold You realise your soul is sold You realise your soul is sold… I could never be what you wanted I’m just an image you hunted Now can you see you finally lost it? A vision you made to hide the pain inside… A vision you made to hide the pain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Ok. All poemed out. :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Silverion where are you from,I don't know your flag :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 very nice ones thebestyoucan, Pai, and silverion silverion when you started writing i mean you posted a lot of poems... you started writing poems since a long time ago? :) i still have to read more poems from this threads. thanks a lot thebestyoucan for do this thread ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 Silverion where are you from,I don't know your flag a whisper, silverion's flags is wales :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 I've posted some poems i write here i know them can be better but well i'm not a native english speaker, so i try by best everyday. :) although i also have spanish poems but i hardly ever post them here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Thanks for the praise on the poems man. Nah i only been writing poems since about a year ago. Its quite easy to pick up i find. The easiest poems i find are the ones that look the hardest. You know when you try and make it rhyme. Iron Lion Siren See how it all rhymes. Well that is easy. The hard ones have a bit of rythem but they speak to you more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 yes i noticied the rhyme ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 wanna make a poem guys. Collaboration Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 I wish i could post my friendship poem because I really think it's good work,but it's in german :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matter-Eater Lad Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 wow lots of very good poetry! keep up the good work! this was a good idea for a thread, i think later today ill post some of mine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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