April 21, 200323 yr how 'bout poems about coldplay? I'll try a little freestyle off the top of the head about 16/4/03 e.c. i went to: Oh, the girls in the front want "shiver," so I hear. They're draped in gossamers that the piano threads, the lights all shimmer and the singer's perched in his web. The girls cry "shiver," but the singer plays something else instead.
April 21, 200323 yr Author can i butt in? :) I love poetry, have been "attempting" :oops: it for a few years now, this is one I wrote yesterday: I am pen run over your pages, blue streams between the lines I cross to be with you; contours raised above the blank space between us. I am a bootleg, with songs for you, recorded long ago from pirate stations. Light a candle, watch the rain, listen to the crackled end. Do not pay for me, though I have a price. Copy me, I am unprotected. cya around, Greg very very very nice poem.... *sitting ovation*.. :o :D ..ahaha but do post another one.. if I were PMS'ing I'd porrly be awwwing and sniffling now..its sweet
April 21, 200323 yr thanks very much! I've got 100s and 100s so i'll post a few more maybe...just did a little one about cp, hope you like it :)
April 21, 200323 yr Author Pick me out from beneath the thorns Please hearing me crying out for your touch My throat is dry and aching Hear before I lose my voice Pick me out from beneath the thorns Please inhale my beautiful aroma Let it left all your fears and burdens away Pick me out from beneath the thorns Before the rain drowns in its anger Before the sun buns me up from his lust Before the ants and wondering kittens do away with me Pick me out from beneath the thorns For I have been waiting ah many years for you
April 21, 200323 yr Author My coldplay poem.... ________ I close my eyes Let the music kiss my soul I hear his voice high above my sea of thoughts Drowning out the breaking of their waves "In my place"....he's in my place Weaving the perfect web for me to rest... I fall back gently gliding on his every word.. His voice a melody soo sweet and soothing... His eyes loose in their blueness.. I love it.. No greater feeling in the world.. \/ (Its coldplay on the stereo)....... :shrug:
April 22, 200323 yr Both very cool! Some great lines in that 1st one esp. "Pick me out from beneath the thorns" nice, very nice and I love the line "Before the ants and wondering kittens do away with me" Quirky, but in a good way :-D Quirky appeals to me...ah more spiderweb themes! Seems popular for cp poems :D Bonus points for mentioning In My Place, my fave off of AROBTTH :) I'll try another one on the spot, here goes: rocking pendulum of skin and bone, the sound of clocks pulse in the cabinet that holds the crowd in place. The springs are coiled tight around their hearts and the sound of its beat is the soundtrack of the night I'll post some other poems later -Greg
April 22, 200323 yr Author ahaha..thanks dude... we'll soon have battle of the coldplay poems...ahaha :roll: :D
April 22, 200323 yr Author Sea of bodies all moving together Moving with every strum of the guitar Every beat of the drum In time with every hum Surging forward they move All keeping in the rhymthic groove Each feeding from each others energy Drops of sweat, drops of tears squuezed from the words of the songs...all in sincerity.. All on a certain high Sway as time slowly ticks by Shaking out their demons they are Their hearts no longer bound behind that bar Their mood free and mellow All enjoying their state of "Yellow".. :shrug:
April 22, 200323 yr A part of me died today And although Ive changed I want to feel the same About everything A part of me died today But would still be alive If I hadn't realised Id live life all over again To feel the same As the mud washes away From where I used to play I feel a void that years have left Things will never be the same I looked at that place And I'd trade now for those days And I'd do anything else Just to feel the same Fond fate I blame.
April 22, 200323 yr I wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew it away. I wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away. i wrote your name in my heart, and forever it will stay!! bit cheesy i know but oh well
April 22, 200323 yr Excellent, good to see such artistry :D Ok this is one of my older ones, exuse the length..I'm fond of it because it's mostly direct and a little quirky/unusual I call it Minutes From A Curious Allure Happy reading, enjoy... I practice my look in the mirror, that long double take when i’ll catch the pursing of those ruby lips but see the solvency of your eyes- pockets of teal sunken in the pale- and wonder if there lies a lonely girl, well heeled, but girlish still. I imagine you a taut petiole plucked from the pumice of night, twisting on a parquet floor at a ball, or a coiled honeysuckle waiting for the season to begin. Though even if it never does i’ll still willfully submerge myself in the carbon aftertaste of your rosewater breath should you decide upon a garage entombment, slumped in that old chrome lined glass casket on wheels clad with rust and varicolored panels. You see for years i’ve watched, from a carefully measured distance, you welcome crimson blisters onto tired feet and splice them on rose thorns while running barefoot through the gardens, forcing nervous laughter each time pretty girls you call friends wrap their fingers in barbed wire then pay you backhanded compliments. Last week’s gauzes still hang from the lines, soaking in the rain. Fat droplets off the cloths usher you into adulthood, reddening the grass. Maybe it would be the methyl sting behind my eyes, your snake-like thighs framed in the leather interior, or a toxic halo set above you, but something would make me gaze at the limestone plane of your face and those involute tendrils hung from its rafters as we arrive late for the wrecking ball so early in the twilight.
April 22, 200323 yr hey thats good!! i would love to read more of your work..i can show u some of mine too! :D
April 22, 200323 yr ok more coldplay action... Sing it out now Wrap it in strands of candy floss Feed me, I need a little sugar I want candy coated pills Of you to take when I get blue And when the fever strikes me Yellow Sing it back now Drink it in like ruby wine Seeps into the veins Washes over the mind Undulates in waves
April 22, 200323 yr You liked that? I kinda wrote it on the spot, lemme try another... With a kiss at midnight We'll slide through the crowd You'll smile while hiding I can see you now Im already awake I can see youre face You're trying to hide Why? Crying under the covers I thought that was a smile I dont need another But I cant help but think of her With a kiss at midnight Started the end Im looking at you, looking at me Like our reflection of scum What else can we be :( I dont like either.
April 22, 200323 yr hey thats good!! i would love to read more of your work..i can show u some of mine too! :D Thank You :) You can see more at poets-in-tents.com, i post there under the name shoeless joe...or i can just post here as well since there's a few writers about here...sure love to see your work, where at? -Greg
April 22, 200323 yr yeah ok, the poems i've posted here so far are old posts from over there, but theres one or two new ones on there right now...i dont mind just posting here anyways, its more fun here :D Yeah, post here too!
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