I did such a weird face when I read that. :sneaky:

 

You are just so 'punny'

*cackles*

 

But seriously, seriously,

I misplaced the next chapter with my To-Do list because on my To-Do list it says to pick up sauce and the next chapter is just saucy and I failed at this so I ended up rambling.

 

Smooth Penguin. Real smooth. :cool:

 

I can't stop laughing oh my god

@ Penguin, I've edited some more story in, whenever you get back online!

 

Let me know what you think!

 

I always love your reviews :D!

 

And I may, I stress, may, add more later. We'll see. :)

@ Julia, the newest chap. of Coldplay in Wonderland is...it's....

 

(conflicted by sadness and the sheer awesomeness of how gory things got)

 

BAH! *dies*

 

*comes back to life* Good job!

^ :laugh3: Well, thank you! And s'only gon' get darker -sorrynotsorryspoilers-

*squee* :wacky: I love the thought of it getting darker!!!

 

Post more soon!

 

Hopefully.

 

No pressure. :D

Holy cheese nips, that took far longer than I expected.

 

But @ Penguin, I'm nearly done with chap. 1! :D

 

Please comment soon, I miss your sassy reviews. :bigcry:

*dramatically bursts through the doors*

 

I am back. :omgomg: :omgomg: :omgomg:

I had no Internet but I have returned to you wicked people! :dazzled:

No interwebz?!? :shocked2:

 

How did you survive? :bigcry:

 

How did I survive... :thinking:

 

... without your sassy reviews? :P

AWWWW!!!

Well my sassy reviews will be returning!!! :omgomg:

I have catching up to do!!

AWWWW!!!

Well my sassy reviews will be returning!!! :omgomg:

I have catching up to do!!

Yes, now get to work. :whip:

I'm back as well!! Just returned from the depeche mode concert :lol:

Ooh, how was it?

Yes, do tell!! :lol:

Yes, do tell!! :lol:

 

Oh, Penguin, why do you play with my emotions like that?

 

I thought I was getting a fabulous review ('cause I've used sassy a few too many times :P)

 

Is your interwebz still slow, or was my writing just crap? (not tryin' to hassle you, or anything, in case I'm coming off a bit stalker-ish :lol:)

It was magic, I can't write proper words to describe the concert, and Dave was so hot I think I got pregnat just by seeing him playing live shirtless

It was magic, I can't write proper words to describe the concert, and Dave was so hot I think I got pregnat just by seeing him playing live shirtless

 

So... I take it, it was good? :wink3:

Oh, Penguin, why do you play with my emotions like that?

 

I thought I was getting a fabulous review ('cause I've used sassy a few too many times :P)

 

Is your interwebz still slow, or was my writing just crap? (not tryin' to hassle you, or anything, in case I'm coming off a bit stalker-ish :lol:)

 

OF COURSE YOUR WRITING ISN'T CRAP!!!! *slaps you for thinking that*

No, no, I was just exhausted after my trip and I wanted to write a good review because if I had have wrote it last night it would have just been random letters :lol:

 

You aren't stalkerish!!!!!!!!

But honestly, I love your review enthusiasm!! :omgomg: :omgomg: :dazzled: :dazzled:

Ooh, a trip? :wideeyed:

 

Where did you go? And sorry, that you were so tired. I know what that's like; you get back from vacation feeling like you need another vacation. :rolleyes:

 

So how was it, if you don't mind my asking? Or if you do, you can just choose to ignore me. :lol:

 

(remembers that other thing you wrote about) Anyways, looking forward to my fab-review. Now get to work. :whip:

 

 

 

 

 

jk :P

Oh yes it was good thankyou!

Very very warm, :confused:

 

I am glad to have to wifi back!

Heheheh!!!

 

Now I must get started on my review!!! :whip:

Can't wait :sneaky: (unless it's negative :uhoh:).

WELL OH MY GOOSEBERRIES..,..

 

BENNY!!!!

BENNY!!!!!!

YOU SHOULD HAVE GUARDED THAT GUN WITH YOUR LIFE MAN!!!!!

 

Nik....Nikky, baby, my heart. Is. SHATTERED!!!!

POOR POOR THING I WAS CHOKED UP.

HIS PRECIOUS GUN IS RUINED....

*sobs*

*sobs hard*

*sobs harder*

*sobs until is drowning in tears*

 

Annnnnywho.....

 

I absoultely LOVE your eye for details as I have probably already said but I am going to say it again!!!

And the little anecdotes!!

They are just little slices of pleasure.

Everything just seems to fit perfectly into the puzzle!!

And I want to see this puzzle from the front to have a good view of the picture if you are understanding my anology.

Apologies for my bad reviewing skills, they don't seem to adequately explain how much I love your writing!

 

I absoultely adore the dialogue!!

It is very realistic!

And the little colloquial phrases and words are just brilliant!!

 

This is utter genius and I love it!!!! :dazzled: :dazzled: :dazzled:

I'm glad I just caught you, haven't even read your review yet, but I just edited in the rest of chap. 1 !!!!!

 

Enjoy! :D

'Kay, read your review now, and awwwww :dazzled:!

 

I'm always happy to please :smug:.

 

Now, ya'll come back now, ya hear? ( to review the rest of chap. 1 :sneaky:)

Penguin - I've read through more of Twisted Logic and am loving it!! Hoever, I'm midway through the unnamed for now thing, and I gotta say . . . wow, the idea is interesting and I'm going to read more once I'm done here.