Ols54 Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 Okay, so I need someone who can write a text for my new song! The title is: Time Only Knows I already got the two first sentences: Wars can not stop, like a day goes by Love only ends when she says goodbye Thanks a lot to help me! You can just try to make some sentences not the whole song! Thank you very much! (And sorry for my english) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 you have an idea of which topic you want it be about? can we listen the sound of it? may be it'll help us to help you better. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ainsley Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 Ugh, I can´t think of anything :shame: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josh42 Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 It's not really your song if other people write it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 It's not really your song if other people write it for you. depends he is a musician, just he thinks he can't write lyrics (i think he has not tried it much and fear it won't be good), if other people write the lyrics (partially) for him, it won't make him be less of a musician ;) as he has worked on the melody already (which i guess is the case). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ols54 Posted September 3, 2009 Author Share Posted September 3, 2009 i don't know really the main topic, something that is related to time! Maybe love, or something else! If you want to listen to it, I can send you a demo, It's just the beginning: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=KJLJ3H6L Actually It's just because I'm stuck in the lyrics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aniskywalker Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 I need the sound and then I could write some lyrics :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TickingClock Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 I'd say instead of some one of us writing the lyrics for you, we could help you with maybe getting some inspiration. As ariadnasquire said, maybe you just fear that your lyrics aren't that good but musicians improve. I really like your first two lines so I'm pretty certain you will get the other how many other lines as well. Maybe you just need some inspiration or what people feel like listening to your song. And if that doesn't work, maybe the song only needs two lines? Call me insane but in my opinion sometimes art decides for you and maybe this is the case here. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ols54 Posted September 3, 2009 Author Share Posted September 3, 2009 Thanks for your answer! But I don't think that these two lines are enough! It's very hard to think when you stuck in lyrics you've written! So if you can help I appreciate a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josh42 Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 Go for a walk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TickingClock Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 Thanks for your answer! But I don't think that these two lines are enough! It's very hard to think when you stuck in lyrics you've written! So if you can help I appreciate a lot! Okay, first: I know songs with less than two lines and they are good. ;) I'm a writer myself (no lyrics though) and know how it feels to be stuck. But I try to keep working. Either I read what I have over and over again and look if there is something coming into my mind or I try to think of the feeling I had having the idea or the feeling I want to express. When you play the song and sing the lines over the music, maybe you find another line and then another. And the most improtant thing about writing: Take your time. Of course I could think of some lines for you but I think you would be much happier and more proud of you when you work it out yourself. Just my opinion. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ols54 Posted September 3, 2009 Author Share Posted September 3, 2009 you're maybe right! But I started this song maybe two months ago and inspiration for the text flew away! ^^ Like I said I d'ont want you to write this song but maybe one or two ideas/sentences to help me get through this hole I'm in! ^^ Thanks in advance! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Technicolor Liver Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 I love her, I cannot lie, Now it's time, for my love must fly. How is that? :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Technicolor Liver Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 Here's part of a chorus: Time, only knows. Time, tells me to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ols54 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Share Posted October 19, 2009 Hi everybody! My song is finished and it will be published the 25th of october! I haven't recorded in a studio but I think it sounds good! :D Anyway I'm searching someone who can create a picture of what my CD will look like! :D Something related to time! :D As you can imagine the name of this Cd will be "Time Only Knows" and my artist name is Ols! Can someone do that for me? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted October 19, 2009 Share Posted October 19, 2009 yay for the news :D congrats, i'm sure some coldplayer will help you with the album artwork :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ols54 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Share Posted October 19, 2009 Hey thanks! :D Hope that someone will help me! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aniskywalker Posted October 19, 2009 Share Posted October 19, 2009 I'm really bad at photoshop or so, sorry. I could try to paint something... ( you could send me the lyrics again?) But I've heard your song for so many times now and I really love it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ols54 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Share Posted October 19, 2009 Okay, thanks for you help! Here are the lyrics: Wars can not stop like a day goes by Love only ends when she says goodbye I loved her I can not lie But now it's time for my love to fly Chorus: Will I be able to go away Far from this unreality Can love spred upon humanity Time only knows... Must find a way to end this fight Escaping from this last hour To keep trusting for a daylight Rising by the love of her Bridge: Destiny isn’t written on the wall Only love can save us all Chorus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aniskywalker Posted October 19, 2009 Share Posted October 19, 2009 Thanks, I'll see what I can do ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dontpanic42 Posted October 26, 2009 Share Posted October 26, 2009 they're really great lyrics. is there any way we can hear the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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