August 1, 201312 yr Okay I wrote a song. It's pretty bad but tell me if you like it Music by Me Lyrics by Me and Keaton Chords: Verse: C G Am F C G F Chorus: Am G C F I wait for it I take my time I'll stand in line You know that I'll be fine I wait for you But you don't wait for me I am the escapist The one that might save this I'm for you But you are not for me *Chorus* I am the one who can Try to save our lives I am the one who can Maybe make it right I tried to leave here But my timing was not right I tried to escape it But the light in your eyes... Was gone. *Chorus* The night has Always been your friend That's what I have heard It's not absurd I'll let her sleep Eyes closed deep Won't wake her up Let her dream Of a perfect seam And maybe I won't know whats going on. *chorus* Bridge: I'll be escaping (repeated until fade out) And then I can't figure out the 2nd verse..... :shrug: Oh and yes I did accidentally steal the words "the escapist". Oops! :D Also the entire song is about uncertainty in a relationship
August 1, 201312 yr Hi guys. :nice: I had these lyrics in my head while at work so I scrambled for my phone to write them down before I forgot them haha. I agree with Chris 110 %. IT's like fishing. You never know what you might get. James I love it! :awesome: I wanna try playing it haha. I can help with the second verse. :p James, the meaning of your song sums ups how I'm feeling. :blank:
August 1, 201312 yr Thanks! :awesome: I'm bad at thinking of 2nd verses for some reason... Don't know why.
August 1, 201312 yr ^^ I have no idea what you're on about with lyrics and such, but I know the feeling. I will get this great idea for a drawing, and either draw it and it comes out like crap, or I write it down and can't make sense of it later. Or it comes out okay and I clean it up and feel happy with it, which doesn't happen as much as I'd like it to.
August 1, 201312 yr Thanks! :awesome: I'm bad at thinking of 2nd verses for some reason... Don't know why. Hey don't fret. Happens to all of us. :) This is what came to me while at work. I probably won't use it. So you could use it. I have too many songs. :P
August 1, 201312 yr This is what I had come to mind while at work. You can use it if you want. It's incomplete. And it actually goes along with the theme of your song. The night has always been your friend That's what I have heard It's not absurd I'll let her sleep Eyes closed deep Won't wake her up Let her dream Of a perfect seam And maybe I won't know whats going on No idea what half of this means but here you go. :blank: :lol: Okay..what I just wrote is crap and makes 0 sense. I'll help you write a second verse James. :) Did you play it on guitar or piano?
August 1, 201312 yr Wow that works perfectly! Thanks! I'll edit the post and credit you for that part! :awesome:
August 1, 201312 yr Oh, you musicians . . . I don't get it, entirely (like in general) but I like it :P
August 1, 201312 yr Wow that works perfectly! Thanks! I'll edit the post and credit you for that part! :awesome: You don't have to credit me. I don't think the lyrics will work for me. I can try but they probably won't. Either that or I'll modify them.
August 1, 201312 yr Oh, you musicians . . . I don't get it, entirely (like in general) but I like it :P Don't you love us for that? haha :P Oh Julia..you'll find this funny. So today, When I got to work I texted my mom saying, "Off Work". Then I saw I meant to say, "At Work**" But then realized I texted Morgan that. I was like..oh f*ck. "Oops Sorry Morgie wrong person" Her response: "You just confused me with your mom...." I didn't mean to lol. I said Hi whats up after she responded but haven't got a response yet. That was 3 hours ago. But when I made that mistake she texted me back within 2 minutes. So its like she read my mistake, but after that didn't text me back.. So idk if she ignores my texts or what.
August 1, 201312 yr I need to draw something . . . I just got a new sketchbook and need to break it in. EDIT: Wow, that seems incredibly out of place now . . . and girls are weird, man, I don't even understand my best friends sometimes and we've all known each other since kindergarten. I'm sorry, I know I'm not helping much, but I honestly dunno what to say.
August 1, 201312 yr ^ I always have to draw something coldplay related when I get a new sketchbook :D
August 1, 201312 yr I need to draw something . . . I just got a new sketchbook and need to break it in. EDIT: Wow, that seems incredibly out of place now . . . and girls are weird, man, I don't even understand my best friends sometimes and we've all known each other since kindergarten. I'm sorry, I know I'm not helping much, but I honestly dunno what to say. Thanks though Julia. Honestly, it doesn't matter if you don't have an answer. As long as you took the time to read it, I appreciate it. So much you can't even begin to imagine. As this song goes :p [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GIFhst3DwPE]Better Days lyrics - YouTube[/ame]
August 1, 201312 yr Don't you love us for that? haha :P Oh Julia..you'll find this funny. So today, When I got to work I texted my mom saying, "Off Work". Then I saw I meant to say, "At Work**" But then realized I texted Morgan that. I was like..oh f*ck. "Oops Sorry Morgie wrong person" Her response: "You just confused me with your mom...." I didn't mean to lol. I said Hi whats up after she responded but haven't got a response yet. That was 3 hours ago. But when I made that mistake she texted me back within 2 minutes. So its like she read my mistake, but after that didn't text me back.. So idk if she ignores my texts or what. Don't worry Keaton! I'm sure it's fine! She's probably just busy
August 1, 201312 yr Don't worry Keaton! I'm sure it's fine! She's probably just busy But I'm sure she's still texting other friends and god knows who else. :( James, did the you write the chords on piano or guitar? edit: Forget the god knows who else part. Don't know what got over me. Sorry.
August 1, 201312 yr Piano. It's usually piano because I'm still sort of learning guitar. Also there's this little part for the right hand that I would have to write out somehow.
August 1, 201312 yr Keaton, I- . . . shit, I dunno what to say. Maybe she's just . . . oh fuck, I dunno. I still have some issues with texting, my last relationship was basically sustained by texting and that's also how he decided it'd be best to break up with me. But hey, that's me and my pathetic little life! Side note: Is there a time difference between you guys at all?
August 1, 201312 yr Keaton, I- . . . shit, I dunno what to say. Maybe she's just . . . oh fuck, I dunno. I still have some issues with texting, my last relationship was basically sustained by texting and that's also how he decided it'd be best to break up with me. But hey, that's me and my pathetic little life! Side note: Is there a time difference between you guys at all? Oh I'm sorry Julia. Yeah there is. I'm PST. She's EST. So it's 7:10 here. It's 10:10 there.
August 1, 201312 yr Not your fault my ex is a dick. And maybe that has a little something to do with it?
August 1, 201312 yr Not your fault my ex is a dick. And maybe that has a little something to do with it? Yeah it probably does. F*CK! Broke another guitar string on my electric :(
August 1, 201312 yr Ugh I hate it when my guitar strings brake. That sucks. And really sorry that she hasn't texted you back. I'm sure she will soon
August 1, 201312 yr ^^ I'm sorry I'm of no help, but my relationship experience is limited and, just like guys will forever remain a mystery to me, girls are weird :|
August 1, 201312 yr Yep. My beater guitar has 3 strings left, my electric now has 4 strings left and I never take my nice acoustic out of standard.
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