August 14, 201313 yr lucky... I'm taking 2 APs and the rest Honors, and kinda regretting it. The workload is crazy >.<
August 14, 201313 yr My days been good :) I wrote this song that's very white shadows-y (at least to me)
August 14, 201313 yr Dark Clouds Ice cold frost on the window pane A dark cloud brewin today Runnin in circles, trying to listen Nothing ever goes my way Snow is falling, a cold wind blowing A dark cloud in the sky Runnin in circles, trying to listen Nothing wants to go my way *chorus* Maybe I can find it if I try Even if I live I don't know why There's still a dark cloud in the sky Oooooooohhhhhh.... I know it that, that you love me But if I stumble and fall please Don't let the dark cloud take me Let me go my way If you wanted to save me Then you gotta leave please Don't let the dark cloud take me Let me go my way *chorus* Ice cold frost on the window pane A dark cloud in the sky Terrible feelings now I don't want to tell you how Oh no, oh no, oh no... *chorus* A dark cloud high above me So if you really love me oh You gotta talk, talk to me A dark cloud I need cover So If you remind me of her You gotta talk, talk with me... I'll edit this post with the rest
August 14, 201313 yr Unfortunately no :disappointed: I'm on vacation and so I don't have acsess to my piano or guitar right now So I can't write music.
August 14, 201313 yr Awww... Did you have a general idea of what it would be? standard I-IV-V thing or a more sad song with minors 'n' shiz?
August 14, 201313 yr Well I was hoping that I'd open with a riff of some sort, and then the verse would be mostly minor, then the first part of the chorus would be going between a minor and a major (Dm/A for example) And the end of the chorus would be major. And then the outro would have the same chords as the chorus, just hushed. Apparently I have a plan now :D
August 14, 201313 yr Goodnight. :) James, I'm working on a song right now. So far it seems good. The guitar part is sexy haha. :lol:
August 14, 201313 yr I don't know, are you? :P So looking at your song inspired me to write this song. I looked out my window and saw the dark skies and smelled the brisk cold air. Then thought of my guitar which is tuned down a half step, and this chord progression sounds good in a low pitch. I'll post the lyrics soon. I also have Spidey in mind for this song haha. Would he web swing around New York to this song.
August 14, 201313 yr Yes yes I am :P Oh cool! :awesome: after I see the lyrics I got to go to sleep though cause my iPods almost dead :(
August 14, 201313 yr Oh okay..I'll post them now in this thread. I'll post them in this post. I'll edit it. So far, this is what I have. Tonight The sky's turning dark And we're running a little faster now I can feel it coming I can see it coming You can't disavow without any doubt We're still running yeah You can try but don't ask why If you return to me Don't ask please because I'll be here Cause yeah I'll never leave you here If you fall I'll be there to catch you Together we can get through Keep your head held high Cause you'll make it tonight
August 14, 201313 yr That's amazingly beautiful! :awesome: it's amutiful! :p "Together we can get through" is a great line Well, I should sleep. Goodnight Keaton, and have a pleasant tomorrow :D :escaping3:
August 14, 201313 yr That's amazingly beautiful! :awesome: it's amutiful! :p "Together we can get through" is a great line Well, I should sleep. Goodnight Keaton, and have a pleasant tomorrow :D :escaping3: I edited it again, please check it again. It may be different from when you saw it. :D Thanks! Goodnight James! :escaping:
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