lucky... I'm taking 2 APs and the rest Honors, and kinda regretting it. The workload is crazy >.<

Sounds like it will pay off though.

Hopefully

My days been good :)

 

I wrote this song that's very white shadows-y (at least to me)

That's my favorite type of song :D

Dark Clouds

 

Ice cold frost on the window pane

A dark cloud brewin today

 

Runnin in circles, trying to listen

Nothing ever goes my way

 

Snow is falling, a cold wind blowing

A dark cloud in the sky

 

Runnin in circles, trying to listen

Nothing wants to go my way

 

*chorus*

Maybe I can find it if I try

Even if I live I don't know why

There's still a dark cloud in the sky

Oooooooohhhhhh....

 

I know it that, that you love me

But if I stumble and fall please

Don't let the dark cloud take me

Let me go my way

 

If you wanted to save me

Then you gotta leave please

Don't let the dark cloud take me

Let me go my way

*chorus*

 

Ice cold frost on the window pane

A dark cloud in the sky

 

Terrible feelings now

I don't want to tell you how

Oh no, oh no, oh no...

 

*chorus*

 

A dark cloud high above me

So if you really love me oh

You gotta talk, talk to me

 

A dark cloud I need cover

So If you remind me of her

You gotta talk, talk with me...

 

I'll edit this post with the rest

I assume you have tabs to go with it?

Unfortunately no :disappointed:

 

I'm on vacation and so I don't have acsess to my piano or guitar right now

 

So I can't write music.

Awww... Did you have a general idea of what it would be? standard I-IV-V thing or a more sad song with minors 'n' shiz?

Well I was hoping that I'd open with a riff of some sort, and then the verse would be mostly minor, then the first part of the chorus would be going between a minor and a major (Dm/A for example) And the end of the chorus would be major. And then the outro would have the same chords as the chorus, just hushed.

 

Apparently I have a plan now :D

Haha, you're welcome, I guess.

Thanks :D

 

Well, I should hit the hay. Goodnight Dylan and Keaton! :escaping:

James that song is amazing. :wacko:

G'night everyone! :escaping:

^^Thanks :nice:

 

And goodnite again just for the heck of it :p :escaping3:

:escaping2: I still say that... :\ Ok now good night :escaping:

Goodnight. :)

 

 

James, I'm working on a song right now. So far it seems good. The guitar part is sexy haha. :lol:

Sexy guitar part? :sneaky::lol:

 

Wait, aren't I asleep? :curtain:

I don't know, are you? :P

 

So looking at your song inspired me to write this song. I looked out my window and saw the dark skies and smelled the brisk cold air. Then thought of my guitar which is tuned down a half step, and this chord progression sounds good in a low pitch. I'll post the lyrics soon. I also have Spidey in mind for this song haha. Would he web swing around New York to this song.

Yes yes I am :P

 

Oh cool! :awesome: after I see the lyrics I got to go to sleep though cause my iPods almost dead :(

Oh okay..I'll post them now in this thread. I'll post them in this post. I'll edit it.

 

So far, this is what I have.

 

Tonight

 

The sky's turning dark

And we're running a little faster now

I can feel it coming

I can see it coming

You can't disavow without any doubt

We're still running yeah

You can try but don't ask why

If you return to me

Don't ask please because I'll be here

Cause yeah I'll never leave you here

 

If you fall I'll be there to catch you

Together we can get through

Keep your head held high

Cause you'll make it tonight

I thanksed it early :D

That's amazingly beautiful! :awesome: it's amutiful! :p

 

"Together we can get through" is a great line

 

Well, I should sleep. Goodnight Keaton, and have a pleasant tomorrow :D :escaping3:

That's amazingly beautiful! :awesome: it's amutiful! :p

 

"Together we can get through" is a great line

 

Well, I should sleep. Goodnight Keaton, and have a pleasant tomorrow :D :escaping3:

 

I edited it again, please check it again. It may be different from when you saw it. :D Thanks! Goodnight James! :escaping:

Morning -