(022400), (002400)

 

Help me out here.

 

Flying faster than the speed of sound

It was just an echo blaring around

Don't let 'em steal your soul

Don't let 'em take control

They're everywhere and in the sky

They won't stop until you comply

Hmmm.... Lets see... Second verse:

 

You were up and I was down

It was no accident when you were found

Don't let 'em stop the fight

Don't let 'em steal your light

Because they're everywhere and in the sea

They're following you and me

dang what note is that! :lol:

 

I don't think I'll ever play this song again. :blank: So you can have it. I don't like it.

Really? C'mon lets work on I together! I bet it'll be better!

Sorry, I'm not feeling it on this one. We could do another but, I'm all out of guitar and lyrics ideas for the time being. I can contribute to yours though.

That's okay

 

Okay I cant really do chords right now but I'll work on lyrics.

 

Chorus:

 

We'll fly away

Well seize the day

When all is wrong

We're still right

So hey

Hey

 

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Okay, sounds good.

So Far:

 

Flying faster than the speed of sound

It was just an echo blaring around

Don't let 'em steal your soul

Don't let 'em take control

They're everywhere and in the sky

They won't stop until you comply

 

You were up and I was down

It was no accident when you were found

Don't let 'em stop the fight

Don't let 'em steal your light

Because they're everywhere and in the sea

They're following you and me

 

*Chorus*

We'll fly away

Well seize the day

When all is wrong

We're still right

So hey

Hey

 

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

*chorus*

 

You know that nothing else compares

To leave you, no I wouldn't dare

Don't let me take my time

Don't let me wait in line

Because you're everywhere that I see

You are the world to me

 

*chorus*

 

And I-

Just want to say

 

^x3

 

I need you.

 

*chorus x2*

^ I edited that with all the lyrics if you didn't see

^ I edited that with all the lyrics if you didn't see

 

I love it. This might help with guitar inspiration. ;)

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OH21Av1Zb-g]U2 - With Or Without You (Official Instrumental Version) ((Stereo & No Vocals)) - YouTube[/ame]

Thanks! And that does help :nod:

 

Though I could never play guitar like that :D

 

Anyway I should go to sleep goodnite Keaton! :escaping:

Sounds good! Goodnight James.. I just found a song I wrote 2 months back. I feel it drawing me back to work on it. It has an interesting title to say the least.

I listened to "Running in the Dark" and loved it.

I listened to "Running in the Dark" and loved it.

 

Thanks Anthony! :) What's up?

Thanks Anthony! :) What's up?

 

You're welcome. :)

 

I wrote up 900 more words for my novel today and made some plot rearrangements for it. Then I continued editing some upcoming videos and whatnot.

 

What I've been getting a kick out of a lot lately, though, is working on some songs of my own. I'm almost finished with at least two. :)

 

How've you been?

I've been good. I won't bore you with a long story. Sounds like Rezzy's gearing up for action.

 

I'm gonna go now. Good seeing you again. Talk to you soon. :escaping:

Yeah, it's been rather quiet about Rezzy lately. :P Months ago, I was writing up short stories right off the bat. I'm taking my time with things now. Things are different.

Thanks! I hope so too. I need to find a cute girl that likes Coldplay :nod:

I like Coldplay, not cute though :P

Nothing much, just writing and listening to music. What about you?

I wish I could write music : (

Hi Troxley :P

 

What's up?

 

The song is called Sweet Honey. And I'll edit this thread so you can read the lyrics.

 

 

Sweet Honey ©2013 Keaton

 

Oh honey honey

Yeah yeah you

Oh baby you

I'm here it's true

You've got me in you

And I'm not going anywhere

Running in circles going crazy

I've sold you my soul

Now you've got me spinning out of control

Dreaming of you and me singing away all day

 

Oh honey honey

Come on in jump in my skin

Show me that smile again

Cos you got me chained down

And I need this to get by

I need your wings to fly

Take my hand, We'll slip under the wire

Let me feel the warmth of the fire

There's room for two in here

So go ahead take the wheel and try to steer

 

Oh honey honey

Come on in

Yeah yeah you

Oh honey you

I'm here it's true

You've got me in you

Oh honey honey

Come on in

Yeah yeah you

Oh honey you

I'm here it's true

You've got me in you

Oh honey honey

Come on in

Yeah yeah you

Oh honey you

I'm here it's true

You've got me in you..

I love it. Wow.

It worked! :awesome:

:dazzled:

That's okay

 

Okay I cant really do chords right now but I'll work on lyrics.

 

Chorus:

 

We'll fly away

Well seize the day

When all is wrong

We're still right

So hey

Hey

 

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

 

So Far:

 

Flying faster than the speed of sound

It was just an echo blaring around

Don't let 'em steal your soul

Don't let 'em take control

They're everywhere and in the sky

They won't stop until you comply

 

You were up and I was down

It was no accident when you were found

Don't let 'em stop the fight

Don't let 'em steal your light

Because they're everywhere and in the sea

They're following you and me

 

*Chorus*

We'll fly away

Well seize the day

When all is wrong

We're still right

So hey

Hey

 

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

Lets fly away!

*chorus*

 

You know that nothing else compares

To leave you, no I wouldn't dare

Don't let me take my time

Don't let me wait in line

Because you're everywhere that I see

You are the world to me

 

*chorus*

 

And I-

Just want to say

 

^x3

 

I need you.

 

*chorus x2*

I really like this!!

 

 

And hello

Hey Molly!

 

Thanks! :nice: the first verse was all Keaton though.

 

And I'm sure you're cute! :nice:

 

EDIT : Crap, my pick fell into my guitar.

Hi Molly. How are you?

So I wrote this song:

 

 

 

And yes, it's called "Fly" but I'm not sure if it goes with the lyrics me and Keaton wrote last night :shrug:

I like it! Reminds me of the movie Up.

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGLwhTQsxUw]Coldplay - Every Teardrop is a Waterfall (UNSTAGED) - YouTube[/ame]

 

Hey, I have my keyboard in front of me. Do you know any exercises that will help me get better?

Thanks! :nice:

 

Hmm... Well doing scales is always helpful. And you could also try going from one note to the other back and forth a couple of times.

 

I'm not very helpful because I learned most of this stuff when I was 7

ohh. No worries. I can play part of the scientist. I just can't utilize my left hand while doing the right unless its a simple pattern. But I guess the more you practice the better you'll get?

Yup :nod:

 

Funny, the Scientist was the first song I learned on piano :wacko: