[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnkwBFcp7SM]Incompatible - Point Zero - YouTube[/ame]

 

Tell me what you think. Here's the lyrics if you're interested:

 

 

The walls are closing in and there is nowhere left for me to hide

No matter where you go you can't escape what's on the other side

And as the waters flow your branches grow but in the wrong direction

So incompatible you can't seem to establish a connection

 

We've gone so far astray

Why can't we find the way?

 

Are you really listening, or do you even care?

Can you hear the whispering of the spirits in the air?

Can I tell you what I'm thinking when I feel you near?

I just want you by my side for our remaining years

 

Let's take flight

Leave time behind

 

Let's go to the astral plane, I want to see your face

Baby we could go insane and lock our hearts in space

 

We're getting older now

Our world is upside down

 

Time is coming to an end and I have yet to start

Come and show me how to mend the pieces of my heart

Take me to a distant shore that only we can find

Lead me through that open door where I can free my mind

 

Take me home

I'm so alone

Why must it be this way?

It's not bad but for me it's not "special" enough.. if you know what I mean :D

It's not bad but for me it's not "special" enough.. if you know what I mean :D

Yeah I understand. Maybe if we record a full version with drums and lead and bass it'll sound more "special" ;)

I like it, I reckon it would definitely sound better with a band behind it!

Yes, that could help! Post again if you did, I'm looking forward to it!

Whoops, I listened to this but forgot to reply. It's good! :)

If you record this song with a whole band then it would sound really epic. I can imagine some strings in the last two verses of the chorus, that would sound nice too!

 

Nice work!! :D

Thanks for the replies everyone :)