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I did a remix of Paradise, and I'd like some feedback. Thanks.

Ok, what do I have to say about this... It's not so good to be honest.

 

- Volume is completely out of control, I decided to stop it at a moment.

- ReMIX? You mean just re. There is no mix in this, just cut and paste work and some additional instruments.

- Mess, a huge mess!

 

You should take more time for mixing, listen it with different sort of speakers.

Also, put the volume untill you can hear it well, then a bit back, make space for the vocals and remove the 'over the top' lows and highs.

Add some more rhythm, it's missing it!

 

I hope it helped you!

Can you be more precise in which levels aren't quite in the right place?

 

I don't have speakers. I don't have drum sequencing software. Most of it was sampled from the O2 ad.

i quite like it.

You don't have speakers, but you made a remix?

You don't have speakers, but you made a remix?

 

Headphones.

Listen to the basses, and the vocals, the basses are way, way to loud and they press the vocals away.

^ Well with that I can agree too.

Ahh thanks, I'll take the mixing on board next time!

I like it, however it is a little messy - as someone who covers coldplay, it is easy to produce something messy as i often do, so i don sympathize with you... you just gotta keep going, listen to what people say and try harder next time, nice remix though