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I made my first original song. O.o Feedback please?

alyssa
in The Instrument Room

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Hi! So, I got really bored and originally meant to record two chords that I thought sounded cool so I wouldn't forget them, but I got carried away and made a little groove out of it.

 

I'm playing all the parts (one guitar, bass, and drums).

 

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/glarbinator/untitled-1]Untitled by glarbinator on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free[/ame]

 

I put my comments in spoilers in case you wanted to listen to it before I point out everything wrong, haha.

 

 

It's pretty rough and it's not really a "song" yet because I threw it all together in two days and was making stuff up as I went along. The timing is pretty off as a result. I'm also fairly sure that the drums are pretty weak since that's the last thing I recorded before I stopped because I was sick of hearing myself play, lol.

 

I guess all I'm wondering is if it's a nice enough groove to develop into polished song?

 

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Hehe thanks! Don't worry your approval is more than enough. :smug:

Sounds cool! Have you ever heard of the Kings of Convenience?

Reminds me of them. One of my favorite bands. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UBtjik6uYrY&ob=av2e]Kings Of Convenience - Mrs. Cold - YouTube[/ame]

wooow, great job! In my mind i hear it with vocal like a proffesional song :P. Only what i wish is more bass, but it's because I :heart: bass. I'm waiting for next!

wooow, great job! In my mind i hear it with vocal like a proffesional song :P. Only what i wish is more bass, but it's because I :heart: bass. I'm waiting for next!

 

And yeah, I agree, more bass! :)

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Aw yay! I'm glad you all like it! :) Thank you.

Sounds cool! Have you ever heard of the Kings of Convenience?

Reminds me of them. One of my favorite bands.

Thanks!

 

Oooh that's a lovely song. I've never heard of them before, but I'll definitely look more into their stuff. :)

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