Spider-Man Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 So I play guitar(badly) and sing(even worse) and write songs(that are somewhat decent) and would love some feedback from you guys! Here are two new ones I've written. Both are still early in the writing process so I need to work on them. On Clockwork, I tried to hit notes I can't hit so there will be cringe worthy moments. Hoping to use this thread for future songs so I don't end up wasting space! :P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cp3176 Posted January 16, 2016 Share Posted January 16, 2016 Lol you can still sing way better than me :D Listening to Clockwork right now. Has some real potential to be a great song! :D EDIT: Just took a listen to all, I think Say is by far my favorite :D Great vocals, wonderful guitar work, and that definetely has potential as well! Overall, it's already pretty good. Keep it up ! :D By the way, that song really reminds me of a band... I know their name but I just can't remember them right now... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted January 16, 2016 Author Share Posted January 16, 2016 Lol you can still sing way better than me :D Listening to Clockwork right now. Has some real potential to be a great song! :D EDIT: Just took a listen to all, I think Say is by far my favorite :D Great vocals, wonderful guitar work, and that definetely has potential as well! Overall, it's already pretty good. Keep it up ! :D By the way, that song really reminds me of a band... I know their name but I just can't remember them right now... Thank you for taking the time to listen! I do appreciate it! Glad you like it. Clockwork was inspired by GPASUYF, Bullet The Blue Sky and Psycho by Muse. Let me know when you remember who Say reminds you of! :D 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cp3176 Posted January 16, 2016 Share Posted January 16, 2016 ^ I also noticed you had another song! "Don't Let Go Of Your Dreams" :) EDIT: Just checked your channel, apparently you have a lot of songs! Some uploaded just 5 hours ago! Definetely checking them out :) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted January 17, 2016 Author Share Posted January 17, 2016 ^ I also noticed you had another song! "Don't Let Go Of Your Dreams" :) EDIT: Just checked your channel, apparently you have a lot of songs! Some uploaded just 5 hours ago! Definetely checking them out :) Oh yes that song! Wrote it last June haha. It's alright. Yes loads and loads of songs! Thanks for taking the time to check some out! Let me know what you think, feedback is important :P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted June 10, 2016 Author Share Posted June 10, 2016 So my friend and I recorded an instrumental version of a song I wrote called "True Colors". He does talk at some point in the video. If anybody cares enough to listen, I'll post it here. :P https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bBJmincWrMY Mobile Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bBJmincWrMY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gideon_Mx Posted June 10, 2016 Share Posted June 10, 2016 You wrote this!?! This really does sound like it could have been a Coldplay song, I really like its melody ! WEll donme ! EDIT: I just listened to some other of your songs and they all do have a Coldplay feeling in it, if you know what I mean. :thumbsup: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted June 10, 2016 Author Share Posted June 10, 2016 You wrote this!?! This really does sound like it could have been a Coldplay song, I really like its melody ! WEll donme ! EDIT: I just listened to some other of your songs and they all do have a Coldplay feeling in it, if you know what I mean. :thumbsup: Yep! It's quickly becoming one of my favorites, at first I thought it was "meh" until we recorded it haha. Thank you so much for taking the time to listen! I appreciate it! We're gonna try and record a whole album of my songs. Coldplay are one of my favorite bands haha so. I love everything they've put out, but mostly pull inspiration from the older material. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gideon_Mx Posted June 10, 2016 Share Posted June 10, 2016 Yep! It's quickly becoming one of my favorites, at first I thought it was "meh" until we recorded it haha. Thank you so much for taking the time to listen! I appreciate it! We're gonna try and record a whole album of my songs. Coldplay are one of my favorite bands haha so. I love everything they've put out, but mostly pull inspiration from the older material. That's ok:) Keep doing this great work ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted June 10, 2016 Author Share Posted June 10, 2016 That's ok:) Keep doing this great work ! Will do! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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