Post ur poems, songs, stories...etc

 

 

Show off ur skills

 

 

 

Luv Nikki

don't all rush in at once!!!! :D

frannie and mandy have great sex like a t rex in the back of a jet

 

my poem ^

okay...

hahaha

great joke there eric...hehehe

and then there was one.....

i wrote a short story...but i did it in one day so it sucks, and the tenses are all mixed up. :dozey:

then i have my "alternate ending" to the third harry potter book but i've already posted that a while ago. and eric gave a good element to throw in there. a stunningly handsom boy named eric :P

 

then i have a coldplay story that i wrote :dozey:

 

but i dont think anyone wants to read them :P :lol:

ooooooohhhh i do please...jk...i really do though

haha really?

sure...but for now i got to go...but post them and i will read them :)

all of them? :dozey:

 

they're quite long...

 

they're about 3 pages each double spaced....but if they weren't then they'd be about 1 and a half...

 

pick one for now. :P

 

coldplay story

twin story - probably the worst

alternate ending to harry potter

frannie and mandy have great sex like a t rex in the back of a jet

 

my poem ^

 

I'm glad someone knows this haha :sneaky: :wink3: :lol:

all of them? :dozey:

 

they're quite long...

 

they're about 3 pages each double spaced....but if they weren't then they'd be about 1 and a half...

 

pick one for now. :P

 

coldplay story

twin story - probably the worst

alternate ending to harry potter

 

 

how about the coldplay one :)

hehe alright then

i'll change it so it's not double spaced...

kay :)

“We’re never going to make it big!” said Chris angrily. Wanna know why? It’s your fault Will! Your drumming is terrible!

 

Boom. It had just occurred to Chris. It was over. He was gone. And it was all Chris’ fault. He knew it wasn’t Will’s fault. He was just angry that Will wasn’t keeping the right time and kept messing up his drumming. What had happened that it had to come to this?

 

Chris had met Jonny, the guitarist of the band in 1996. Then the met Guy, the bassist. He demanded to be in their band and that was that. Then of course there’s Chris, the singer, pianist, and guitarist.

 

One day Chris, Jonny, and Guy were going to practise with a friend of Chris’s. He would be playing the drums for the band. When they got to his friend’s house, they found out that he had gone to a bar and would be out for the night. Will his roommate, also a friend, decided to fill in for him. Will was a guitarist and pianist but since they needed a drummer he decided to take a shot at it. They had decided to take will as their drummer when they found out he played pretty well on the drums.

 

The band had been formed. Now they just needed a name. They decided to call themselves Coldplay. They had taken the name from Chris’s friend’s band because they decided not to use the name anymore. They couldn’t wait to start recording with only to months of collage left but somehow managed to hang on. Once school was over they started to record. But soon after they had started recording there was a problem. Chris kept nagging Will for not being on time and messing up his drumming. When Chris had said that it was Will’s fault that they weren’t succeeding, Will got angry with Chris.

 

“It’s my fault is it? Fine! Then if I’m keeping you from stardom, I won’t stand in your way anymore!” Will screamed at Chris glaring at him. “I’m leaving!”

“Go on then! Leave! See if I care!” Chris was filled with rage. By that time Will was already at the door. As he left he threw his drumsticks at Chris missing him by inches. Chris was thinking of tackling him but then thought better of it. His rage was ebbing away and was beginning to be replaced by panic. What were they going to do? They want to record but they can’t do it without a drummer.

Chris let out a long sad sigh. He looked up at Jonny and Guy. They were both having a cigarette and looked troubled. Chris’s feelings were all mixed together. He was feeling frustrated, sad, angry, desperate, and a lot of other things… he couldn’t sort them out.

 

“So,” said Chris finally, “umm… what should we do?”

“Well,” said Jonny, “we need to get him back. You need to apologize to him and get him to come back to our band.”

“What? Why should I? He should be practising more!”

“Come on mate give him a bit of time. He’s just starting remember. He’s only been playing for a few months now.”

“I don’t care,” said Chris bitterly. “He won’t be in our band then.”

“Chris we need him!” Guy said speaking up. “We don’t have time to find another drummer! We need Will!”

“I’m not apologizing. I don’t care.” But he did. And he knew it. He wanted Will to be in the band. He didn’t want to go find another drummer. And he didn’t have time. The four of them were best friends. Now their friendship was ruined and they didn’t have any drummer.

 

A week had passed since the incident. Coldplay did not exist. Chris couldn’t stand it anymore. They didn’t practise or record anything at all since his fight with Will. He was having trouble writing songs and even if he did manage to write a piece he thought that it was terrible. Finally, Chris decided to go over to Will’s place and apologize.

 

His heart was pounding uncomfortably in his throat as he walked up to the door. He swallowed. It didn’t help. After what seemed like forever Will came to the door. He opened it. “What do you want?”

 

“I…I came over to apologize for the way I treated you,” said Chris not daring to look at him. “I’m sorry for saying that it was all your fault. I really didn’t mean it, and you really are a good drummer… I was just frustrated you know? So… will you come back to Coldplay?”

 

Will sighed. “Yeah I will. I’m also sorry for trying to hit you with my drumsticks.” He grinned. A stupid goofy grin also spread across Chris’ face as relief flooded though him. And with that, he left. Coldplay was back together. But after long hard thinking Chris decided that he needed to pay for how he treated Will. So that night at Guy’s flat, Chris forced himself to drink beer and vodka. He hated alcohol. And never drank it. That’s why it was a punishment to him. Chris kept drinking after Guy had left to go meet his girlfriend. He drank and drank. Chris was extremely drunk and felt very sick. When Guy came back to his flat he found Chris puking it his toilet.

 

“Chris… what did you do to yourself?” Guy said looking shocked. “Are you alright? You look terrible. Come, let’s get you to sleep.” So he heaved Chris up under his arms and dragged him over to the couch and put a bucket beside his bed. “Now if you feel like you need to puke use the bowl okay mate? I don’t want that stuff on my carpet.” With that, he turned off the light and went over to his bed.

 

Chris lay there feeling dizzy and sick. But he his best friends back and still managed to think a little. Coldplay were a band again. Chris had everything was back to normal. He hoped that something like this would never happen again. But what would happen if it did? The thought made him shiver. He pulled his blanket over him a little more. Guy was mumbling nonsense in his sleep. He turned over and went to sleep.

 

Little did he know, that in just over a year, their band would be famous.

 

dum dum dum.

cool story :)

cool story :)

 

hehe thanks :)

your welcome....so i need to go to bed :)

 

it was nice talking to u and thanx for sharing ur story :wink3:

yeah i need to go to bed as well.

 

haha no problem.

ooo that WAS a cool story, I like the ending..dum dum dum haha :D

yeah like the end of a batman episode....lol

^yeah exzctly haha

:)