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Your suggestions make sense. It's great to get feedback thank you. :) For that 3rd verse I started off with New tomorrow/pain and sorrow. Maybe it's to cliche, I'm not sure. Tell me what you think. I'm hoping for a new tomorrow Without any pain or sorrow I will give you a sign If you come close to this place of mine One last question about this song too, if I may ask? After the 3rd verse, would you go to the chorus or the bridge to end the song? Also what do you think would be a fitting title for this song? Thanks again for your help, it means a lot.

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Alright that would be great. The songs have some silly lines in them. I have only been playing and writing for 2 years so. Here are two I finished last night as well as this morning. The Time Traveler In this wicked and wild night There are things I can't begin to explain unsolved mysteries deep full of meaning Waiting to be answered , Waiting to be seen Singing, where have the trees gone? Singing, where did they go wrong? And on and on Sunlight is coming and running, running out of time trying to fix things unexplained helping others is a crime That's what they're saying In they're sleep that's what they're praying and on and on Oh keep fighting on Until your strength is gone and on and on Oh keep fighting on Until your strength is gone and on and on That's all I have for that song. Here's another i wrote, but it's missing two lines. Wilderness I'm stuck alone In my own wilderness Covered in snow six feet deep Held down without taking a leap One day I will escape this hole Without any wounds to heal One day will you save my soul? Without any worry to feel I'm stuck alone In my own wilderness Covered in chains six feet thick Tied down and feeling sick Hoping for a new tomorrow Without any pain or sorrow One day I will escape this hole (I don't have a line here yet) One day will you save my soul? (No line here either) And maybe one day You will come save me from this hole That's tearing apart my soul Is it your goal, will you save me? Or will you just leave me be Ok here's one more I wrote earlier. It's weird and makes no sense. :P Incognito You told me who you were But I didn't believe you though You told me who you were But I didn't believe you so Make me believe it's you and I'll follow you where ever you go The past racing by so fast The future's worrying It will end up in a cast You tied me up to the mast And told me to hold fast I will break through And figure out why I'll figure out your puzzle's And how one plus one equals two I'll decipher what happened to you The past racing by so fast The future's worrying It will end up in a cast You tied me up to the mast And told me to hold fast Will I ever see the old you again? Will you ever return to me? And set those demons free? When will you ever be the old you to me? Because all you are now is incognito So This is what I have so far from today. They are silly songs but advice is greatly appreciated. :)

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MX has 3 U songs Viva has 3 L songs X&Y has 4 T songs Rush has 3 A songs Parachutes has 3 S songs I just noticed this about the first 3 albums. :laugh3:

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I have two songs I recently finished I am willing to share on here. Both i haven't really played much so i hope they can see the light on here maybe. I'll post them if anybody wants a look. There nothing special, I will warn you. And 76543, use that song for your band, it's an amazing song. :D lol :P But seriously, why don't we just have somebody write some lyrics and we can revise them and anybody that has a guitar,piano, bass, etc can come up with parts for this. We could write like a few songs and have Coldplayers record themselves playing it. I wanna write a song with somebody and come up with some good parts to it. :D

Woke up to this song this morning. Rush of Blood is an amazing album. 10 years of awesomeness and counting...and still going. I have realized you have to have a taste for the song Daylight, it's good, but never grabbed my attention like other songs. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rf4cTlgG_cc]Coldplay - A Whisper - YouTube[/ame]

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You have to take the strip and receiver out. I have tried this. Turned one into a wristband. :rolleyes:

Hey I'll bet your fantastic writer. :) Sounds like you can write paragraphs just for starters. :D I wrote 2 songs last night with HWSTW in mind. It's just a few silly stanzas. I don't know if it would be much help. It's just lyrics, and they are cheesy as hell. And make no sense.

Get off Facebook. Your not a Giants fan. You don't even watch baseball smart one. Your insecure about yourself and are a short brude guy who didn't make it to varsity football. We were once friends but then one day you looked at me like i was a stranger. I guess Hollywood has some truth to it. Whatever doesn't harm you make you stranger.

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I know really it's amazing! I'm comming up with so much at the moment it's crazy lol. But really fun. :D edit: Phew! After two chapters I'm done for the night. My brain needs rest. xD

Awesome! I'll bet you could write a kick ass story! I'm working on a background for the story. Then will revisit the songs lyrics to edit. I just need a name for the city, and a full name for the main character. But I can't think of anything... hmmm I'm literally google searching, "Full name generator" LOL.

Uhh I'm working on it. But I have some ideas I'm already working on. Here's what I have so far. The city of (I don't have a name for the city yet) Was founded by the "Trees". They are the once great founders. They created a peaceful utopia until the "Reapers" came in, and used a coup de etat to overthrow the Trees. They believed the world was weakening itself. They waged a war against the trees. Most of the Trees followers, known as "Runners" were killed in the "Great War". Only a few remained to tell the tale. The Reapers set up a puppet government and it became a dictatorship. They burned all past records of the Trees and their knowledge. They also cut off the entrance to "The Underground". "The Underground" was a shrine the Runners built in memory of the Trees. So then A young boy who was born into a family of runners, finds out his grandpa is still alive. His parents are deceased, they were casualties of the Great War. He finds out his grandpa was a spy for the Runners, and holds knowledge about the Reapers. So The main character(doesn't have a name yet) sets out to find his grandpa. I'm even thinking of putting a little joke up saying BOC...Don't Fear the Reaper(s)! :D I know it's kinda copying the MX comic but I felt so inspired by it. The songs i wrote for this were: Echoes Running In The Dark Life on the Front line Give me liberty or give me death Rising End Rant! So it's silly but it's fun. I challenge you to do this also :P If you read that thank you LOL.

YKYATCW: You write a 5 song album with a story. And MX is your inspiration, but you try not to copy it. :D

Hurts Like Heaven and loving every second of it.

Jonny wearing orange pants! Is there nothing he can't wear! Go Jonny!!!! :dance:

Ok I think I got one. It's not funny but it's alright. :chris: This is a fucking loud party J!!! :jonny: It's amazing nobody stepped on the cake alrea- :chris: J where did you go!!!??! :bigcry: :chris: Oh wait! I see you! I see you J!! :dance: :jonny: We look awesome Chris! :laugh3: :chris: I know that shit cray!!! :cool: :chris: Oh wait, one second J, "Will be glowing in the dark". Alright, What did you say J? :jonny: The party was great but, somebody stepped on my cake. :whip: :chris: Surely you cannot be serious? :jonny: I am serious, and don't call me Shirley.

Can't wait till we get a video of Chris, Jonny, and Guy singing to Will. :laugh3: ...And the crowd...