KIDVICIOUS Posted January 26, 2005 Share Posted January 26, 2005 This is a poem that I wrote. Let me know what u people think. Please rate it from 1-10. Don't Don't ask me why I wonder, Don't ask why I did it, Don't ask my for my reason, Just walk away and froget I was there Don't ask me why I feel this way, Don't ask if I'll go back, Don't ask me if I'll change Just vanish in the air Don't ask me when, Don't ask me how, Don't as how many times, Just pretend you never knew me, Pretend you never found me They took it all away from me, They robbed me from my fun, I'll still never tell them why, They'll never understand I never felt so angry, To be alive and to be caught, They made me feel this way, The day they brought me back It's like a living hell, when they ask me all these questions, To figure out the answers, They just don't understand, They'll never understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted January 26, 2005 Share Posted January 26, 2005 it's a good poem i think. ;) 7.6/10 :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFE Posted January 27, 2005 Share Posted January 27, 2005 YEAH! it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eagle131 Posted January 28, 2005 Share Posted January 28, 2005 :):):):):) smilies out of :):):):):) smiles! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyToPlease Posted January 31, 2005 Share Posted January 31, 2005 Just walk away and froget I was there This is my favourite line!!! In all seriousness its a good poem. :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marta Posted February 2, 2005 Share Posted February 2, 2005 I never felt so angry, To be alive and to be caught, They made me feel this way, The day they brought me back interesting poem... i specially liked this part.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel at his table Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 7/10 :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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