Byron369 Posted July 19, 2007 Share Posted July 19, 2007 niiiiice poems...God knows I've missed you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted July 19, 2007 Share Posted July 19, 2007 thx miro:P...how are u doing?:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 this came out yesterday night while I was writing my diary:) At the end of a day what is anger, fear, or pain? you can look back what has been But there´s no way you can come out clean you could try and forget what you´ve done, what you ate, who you met But you´ll never get the chance to repair it a 100% Are you sad? Do you feel sorry? Just don´t worry! you can try again tomorrow Don´t feed yourself with sorrow You´ll get another chance tomorrow At the end of a story what is pride, sadness or glory? you can fall down to your knees or call back and scream please! You could fight and pretend you´re love hasn´t come to an end but you never have to play and think it´s much better go away Are you mad? Are you really sorry? Just don´t worry You can try again tomorrow Don´t feed yourself with sorrow You´ll get another chance tomorrow Don´t feel sorry for what you did Be happy you can live avoid mistakes, take right decisions End a day with fair conclusions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 great poems mike and giuly ;) is always a pleasure to read them. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 ^thank bea:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 4, 2007 Share Posted August 4, 2007 Great job! Like your poems... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 4, 2007 Share Posted August 4, 2007 Great job! Like your poems... thanks:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 5, 2007 Share Posted August 5, 2007 No probs. :D. I wrote the poem about yesterday but I think there's no relation about the title that I think about.... I wanna post it but I'm afraid it will be so wrong for the meanings in each word...:confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 5, 2007 Share Posted August 5, 2007 ^well I wouldn´t care about it..I mean if it´s what you felt at that moment there will be nothing wrong with it...:) and btw you can always change the title:P:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 5, 2007 Share Posted August 5, 2007 My latest poem ... for someone special :( Inspired by Arcade Fire's Haiti. Threw My Ashes into the Sea Though just a memory now, I am alive and I can fly As a happy second that is about to die. It is you who made me And it is you who should do it. Hold my hand, hold it tightly And keep your eyes upon the road. I want to stare At your lips until It gets dark, So dark we cannot see. Walk, my Love, walk Walk till you can Walk no more. There will be a place. Hold my hand, Look at my soul, I cannot help but shiver. There's only one step One step I need to make To feel your skin. Walk, my Only One, Walk the road of memories Be strong - - there is a place Where you will set me free. Though just a memory now, My life doesn't seem bad. Wiping your tears And intertwining with your scent. Highways, miles, Roads, metres, Tears, smiles, Laughters, teasings, Subtle kiss, warm hug. Your sweat why-not well... It's time This is the place. I've fallen in love, Now throw my Ashes into the sea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 Oooh.. So sweet, very touching:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 Oooh.. So sweet, very touching:) Thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
esti Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 hey Miro it's beautiful !! love it! :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 hey Miro it's beautiful !! love it! :thumbsup: :blush: That's too kind. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 ^very nice miro really:):) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 ^very nice miro really:):) Yes, danke schon :blush: :blush: :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 My latest poem ... for someone special :( Inspired by Arcade Fire's Haiti. Threw My Ashes into the Sea Though just a memory now, I am alive and I can fly As a happy second that is about to die. It is you who made me And it is you who should do it. Hold my hand, hold it tightly And keep your eyes upon the road. I want to stare At your lips until It gets dark, So dark we cannot see. Walk, my Love, walk Walk till you can Walk no more. There will be a place. Hold my hand, Look at my soul, I cannot help but shiver. There's only one step One step I need to make To feel your skin. Walk, my Only One, Walk the road of memories Be strong - - there is a place Where you will set me free. Though just a memory now, My life doesn't seem bad. Wiping your tears And intertwining with your scent. Highways, miles, Roads, metres, Tears, smiles, Laughters, teasings, Subtle kiss, warm hug. Your sweat why-not well... It's time This is the place. I've fallen in love, Now throw my Ashes into the sea. :bigcry: :bigcry: I love it so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 :bigcry: :bigcry: I love it so much! I know you do, thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 Peoples are cried I think when They see your poem Miro.... Just maybe:P, but honestly its really touching that was I said you before... Teach me how to make a poem, please?:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 Peoples are cried I think when They see your poem Miro.... Just maybe:P, but honestly its really touching that was I said you before... Teach me how to make a poem, please?:P lol. Well, there is a saying that art is supposed to evoke some emotions. :D Anyways, I am not the right person to be teaching ppl about how to write poems. I am not an expert. Yet :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Haha :lol: ok it's alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Haha :lol: ok it's alright I think it's more natural to write in your mother language. But if you have enough confidence in your knowledge of English - don't be afraid, and write what's on your mind. You gotta start somewhere, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 I think it's more natural to write in your mother language. But if you have enough confidence in your knowledge of English - don't be afraid, and write what's on your mind. You gotta start somewhere, right? Yeah. How'd you know that I'm afraid... I always get phobia if something wrong from me..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Yeah. How'd you know that I'm afraid... I always get phobia if something wrong from me..... Well, don't get this too personal but it mostly is that way. People feel way too closed up. You just need to relax; feel it a bit. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Oh right;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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