Gitta Rensolo Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 Thanks Gail.the one I wrote yesterday was my best.or one of my best.I've got many good german too! if you want to post something in german that would be cool :D But nobody would understand it! :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 4, 2005 Author Share Posted November 4, 2005 Thanks Gail.the one I wrote yesterday was my best.or one of my best.I've got many good german too! if you want to post something in german that would be cool :D But nobody would understand it! :huh: I could try... since I am trying to learn :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 Hmmm...I have to find the good ones..............I'll have a look! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 Ok here is the first one I've ever written (serious one) Sternenzauber Wie der Stern am Abendhimmel schaust du mich nun an und höre ich in deiner Stimme, dass 's nichts schönres geben kann. Deine Worte klingen wie Lieder musst du auch jetzt gehn und ich denke immer wieder Die zeit sie war so schön. Bist du bald auch weg ganz weit muss ich immer an dich denken ich weiß,dass Zeit die Wunden heilt es wird mich trotzdem kränken! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted November 5, 2005 Share Posted November 5, 2005 Invention Your leaden legs Are unsteady on your feet From a distance Nameless faces appear You look at me with dead eyes They never seem to move A ghost you are Who casts no shadow But I know better, For you are mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted November 5, 2005 Share Posted November 5, 2005 [i live in] A Country Called Paranoia My name is Paranoia Fears spread through me like bacteria My people like math and science And all those political nonsense They say they like me They would do anything to keep me free. See how they talk in muted whispers Lock the doors, silence the watchers Trust no one, make the antis disperse Kill all those “pedagogical” leaders They say they like me How come they’re cutting me a tree? “Life is hard in a country called Paranoia Where instability results into hysteria,” Said the people from other lands Who all trouble me with clean hands They say they like me Why don’t they let me be? They follow me like hungry lions Who ravage me along with their minions From the one-way glass they look In utter prejudice, I am in shock They say they like me Why don’t they set me free? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted November 5, 2005 Share Posted November 5, 2005 Human He is a pseudo-scientist A new age transformist The world is his playground He travels at the speed of sound. He is a nuclear-reactor A renowned violence creator He makes the planet stop and spin In every which way, he wins. He is a cloud-gatherer A well-rounded storm-catcher He creates the worst of disasters To the shame of all the pretenders. He is a human cannonball A hater of all things small He loves to conquer everything Until all is reduced to nothing. He is your worst nightmare A human who likes to dare Is it really in his nature to devastate All the lives he didn't create? A really pessimistic take on humans..well i'm in a bad mood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted November 5, 2005 Share Posted November 5, 2005 = Yesterday A Bird Told Me= Yesterday, a bird told me to fly where there is no love, where dreams don't suffer and passion never dies... Behind heaven angels see us cry, hidding in smocking moon and rain of acid falls slowly hissing our night... Yesterday, a bird told me to open my eyes, to hug the fear with your dreams, to be a blooded warrior for you... Angels have forgiven knees that were forgotten knees of the unforgiven pigs.. Yesterday, a bird told me to fly to the infinite, to take you under my wings, and to open my heart to you.. Because if I hug the fear with your dreams I'll be a blooded warrior of stealth and no one can hurt us.. so that no one can hurt you.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraEve41 Posted November 6, 2005 Share Posted November 6, 2005 [just drive] all you need to do is see the way the lifeline intersects the loveline to see there is a faultline but we wrapped ourselves in its coats spring leaves now dewy they meld to our form in the fall they crumble and i will drive the wrong way in the wrong direction against the lifeline i never had a licence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted November 6, 2005 Share Posted November 6, 2005 Unexplained Anger My wrath spreads like an infernal haze Against the heavens, I watch it ablaze See the venom bleed from my mouth In uncontrollable fury I begin to shout. Do you want to see my pure vitriol? You shall then see me as without soul See that my alabaster arms are no longer For the deepest slash I leave will linger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 8, 2005 Author Share Posted November 8, 2005 Just when a second is a day, when the only word you say is "wait," I stumble; when I saw you yesterday, at that moment I prayed, that I wouldn't crumble. but the truth is that God made this world just an echo of him, and I knew it would all come back to me, my sin even though I can't fix this, all I will do is hope that I don't hurt anyone else _______________________ Happy Halloween red puddles on halloween, cover your ears from this scream, will they discover the head, or their girl chopped up in bed, goodbye christine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 8, 2005 Author Share Posted November 8, 2005 [just drive] all you need to do is see the way the lifeline intersects the loveline to see there is a faultline but we wrapped ourselves in its coats spring leaves now dewy they meld to our form in the fall they crumble and i will drive the wrong way in the wrong direction against the lifeline i never had a licence yes! i am so glad to see you posting here :D hey sara Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*andrea* Posted November 8, 2005 Share Posted November 8, 2005 Just when a second is a day, when the only word you say is "wait," I stumble; when I saw you yesterday, at that moment I prayed, that I wouldn't crumble. but the truth is that God made this world just an echo of him, and I knew it would all come back to me, my sin even though I can't fix this, all I will do is hope that I don't hurt anyone else _______________________ Happy Halloween red puddles on halloween, cover your ears from this scream, will they discover the head, or their girl chopped up in bed, goodbye christine... ^great, the last one scared me a bit.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraEve41 Posted November 10, 2005 Share Posted November 10, 2005 [just drive] all you need to do is see the way the lifeline intersects the loveline to see there is a faultline but we wrapped ourselves in its coats spring leaves now dewy they meld to our form in the fall they crumble and i will drive the wrong way in the wrong direction against the lifeline i never had a licence yes! i am so glad to see you posting here :D hey sara hey eric! yeah, this place is so great. :D i have been mostly writing challenges for my LJ communities (i took on a House challenge, a CSI challenge, and a CSI: Miami challenge) so my writing fae is a little sleepy. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 11, 2005 Author Share Posted November 11, 2005 What Happened When I Saw the Girl With the Wolfhound Dalmation Mix ooh, I just lost my breath Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraEve41 Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 you stopped and said i need you to hear this but i looked at the ground stained black cherry where fall leaves had already melded with the ground and aimlessly kicked acorns at eye level i can not see anyones face but i knew you were upset at what you felt was ignorance and what i knew was real life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 14, 2005 Author Share Posted November 14, 2005 I STUFF MY FACE WITH BARBECUE CHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPS I DRINK SOME MILK I DRINK SOME MILK I DRINK SOME MILK mm, want the fairy lime moca toca poka broka mm, want the pretty pink moca poka poison drink!!! i want a cookie i want a cookie I Want A Cookie I Want A Cookie I WANT A COOKIIIIEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE RREEEAAAAA YEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA mosh pit mosh pit mosh pit mosh pit mosh pit... mosh pit... mosh pit... moshpit....... MOSH PIT, MOSH PIT, MOSH PIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTT!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 =Today spins= Today the world gives another spin, but no one told me.. Today time has forgotten me.. with a towel on my face laying in bed with nothing to want Today the world spins once again, but no one asked me.. Today I am untruthful... Today I am of death, with a broken soul.. Today I've lighten up candles Today I sat down on fire to wait for Sky.. Summer that hasn't come.. it's hasn't come.. Today the world spins once again, but I'm still laying down dreaming of time to move forward dreaming of Sky.. Today I woke up cautious Today I woke up once again Today life has slapped me in the face Today I am for no one.. Today spins it spins it's spinning once again.. Today I'm back for nothing Today I'm back for everything So young and spinning.. Today I'm back to everything.. Summer that hasn't come, Sky that won't come... Summer that will come... but it hasn't come.. it hasn't come.. I'm still waiting for Sky to come.. [/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 I have good news.... my english teacher told me that they've published some poems i gave them in the online eoi journal. The poems are :Game over and No time ^You can read them in this link above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 23, 2005 Author Share Posted November 23, 2005 Superman imperical, impermiable and most of all spiritual my physical mind makes this rhyme become rhythmical but there's no beat beat beat that is moving my feet so, that I see what'll make me happy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraEve41 Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 i've gone back to writing on paper only, and then typing it out online. i realized how much i missed the actual process of writing. the only thing that i actually write from my computer now are my challenges on my LiveJournal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scissors64 Posted November 26, 2005 Share Posted November 26, 2005 Violation Sorry but that would be a TOS violation if i have ever seen one in my life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 27, 2005 Author Share Posted November 27, 2005 I've only written a couple of poems directly to the computer. I don't remember which ones they were but 95% of the time I write it on paper first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraEve41 Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 [pinched hallway] i walk on eggshells in multi colored sling back and forth on they tell me but they have never worn nor fallen in these shoes i never write epics because it is a battle not a fight and i have not the words to say more much more than yes no anything more would be trite and i suppose i have already spit in his face to know the weave of his shirt so well as it falls into certain folds as i curl up into certain contortions likened to the area which is removed all is shadows through film Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 30, 2005 Author Share Posted November 30, 2005 connect the dots to make a fake sign that says "happy" black blot filling space altering blots erase evil is easy to see the other takes finding (maybe maybe there isn't any) to change the world we hurt something something, isn't good perfection, requires God ignorance is bliss he makes it, happiness so an animal breathes and knows it is fake it wants to connect the dots and forget Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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